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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: General Interest
- Published: 05/12/2013
If i could do, I would do.....
Born 1998, M, from Delhi, IndiaThis is the first story I’ve written. This is a story of an ordinary man, a story with thinking, time, thoughts, etc. so, I think we should begin it now. And yeah, by the way the name of this story is……….
If I could do, I would do……..
There was a man named Max Gordon. he was a diehard fan of electronic rock music. There was only his wife in his family. He was happy with his wife, but bored with his life. There was nothing interesting in his life. He wanted something extraordinary but his life was ordinary as ……… waking up early in the morning, then going to office, coming home at evening, have some time with family and after all sleep. 1 or 2 holydays in a week. Going out with wife and sometimes with friends.
On a Sunday, he was saying to himself - “boy, I’ve never ever done anything crazy or something which can be said as a true spirit.”
So, he thought if he would be a teenager, in 10th class, What would he do??
He thinks— he has to do something unique that no one has ever done. On Sunday night he arranges all the stuff he needs to accomplish his mission. He wants a bottle of wine, one gun and a hockey stick. But the most important thing is a fake time bomb on his belly. When he goes to school on Monday, Max asks his best friend about his enemies. In recess max goes to their class and beats all the enemies with his hockey stick alone on gunpoint. After recess he drinks his wine in front of teacher. His teacher shouts at him but he does not stop and shoots the right leg of his teacher. He kisses his beloved girl in front of the whole class. He starts going upstairs to terrace. When he gets to 1st floor, some teachers shout at him and catch him. He warns them if they don’t leave him, He’ll do bomb blast by a single button. The entire group leaves him. Then he gets to terrace and watches the sky. He sees that all the teachers, principal, his friends are calling him because he is in hangover. He can do anything like…… commit suicide. After all, he takes his gun to his head and walks till the edge of terrace. Max shoots himself and falls to the ground.
I know it sounds a little bit confusing as to why he did it or something like this. But that was his thinking. Now he could not do this because he was not a teenager anymore. After that he thought what would he do if he would be in college??
It’s the first day of him in college. Seniors try to rag him but he doesn’t let them do this. He says “I won’t let this happen with me. Do whatever you can”. That statement makes them angry. So next day when he parks his car, 5 seniors beat him in parking lot. Max decides to kill them all. After 1 month, he sees 4 of them going to a party. He kills them while riding bike with his gun (silencer attached) So that no one could hear him. Now only one person remains. He’s the head of that group. Though he is the head of that group, he is clever enough of course. Then Max tries to do the same with him but he gets caught. Now there is no way out. They start fighting with each other. As we know Max is smaller than senior, so he gets beaten. [Have we forgotten that junior is having gun]. Max gets down to the ground. Then senior leaves him, turning back to home. At that moment Max pulls out his gun and shoots him in his head. In the end, junior wins. Police try to catch culprit but they failed.
Same as above. Here also he could not do this because he was not in college anymore.
While thinking all that he had a hard headache and got unconscious. His wife took him to hospital. There doctors examined him and said to his wife “Sorry, but we can’t help him. He’s having a brain tumor”. It was not the initial stage of it but was just ignored. It was a critical stage. Just by hearing that, his wife got a heart attack and died. Max got the news that his wife is not anymore. He got sad but happy because now there was no one to worry about him. He said to himself ”Now there’s a chance to make my life interesting. My whole life was boring but my death should be amazing”. He plugged his earphones in his ear and started listening to his favorite music. As the music started, a game of life started. As music was coming to end, the game was becoming ‘hard and harder’. His headache was increasing and heart beat was going down. At the end of music, he won the game and lost his life. But his soul was so glad to have an amazing death.
Conclusion-----
I hope you found some interest in this story. The name of this story was decided by me and my cousin (Shruti Mishra). There’s a message to someone that “Each story is not for inspiring someone or giving message”. I thank you from my heart for giving your precious time to my story.
If i could do, I would do.....(rajat upadhyay)
This is the first story I’ve written. This is a story of an ordinary man, a story with thinking, time, thoughts, etc. so, I think we should begin it now. And yeah, by the way the name of this story is……….
If I could do, I would do……..
There was a man named Max Gordon. he was a diehard fan of electronic rock music. There was only his wife in his family. He was happy with his wife, but bored with his life. There was nothing interesting in his life. He wanted something extraordinary but his life was ordinary as ……… waking up early in the morning, then going to office, coming home at evening, have some time with family and after all sleep. 1 or 2 holydays in a week. Going out with wife and sometimes with friends.
On a Sunday, he was saying to himself - “boy, I’ve never ever done anything crazy or something which can be said as a true spirit.”
So, he thought if he would be a teenager, in 10th class, What would he do??
He thinks— he has to do something unique that no one has ever done. On Sunday night he arranges all the stuff he needs to accomplish his mission. He wants a bottle of wine, one gun and a hockey stick. But the most important thing is a fake time bomb on his belly. When he goes to school on Monday, Max asks his best friend about his enemies. In recess max goes to their class and beats all the enemies with his hockey stick alone on gunpoint. After recess he drinks his wine in front of teacher. His teacher shouts at him but he does not stop and shoots the right leg of his teacher. He kisses his beloved girl in front of the whole class. He starts going upstairs to terrace. When he gets to 1st floor, some teachers shout at him and catch him. He warns them if they don’t leave him, He’ll do bomb blast by a single button. The entire group leaves him. Then he gets to terrace and watches the sky. He sees that all the teachers, principal, his friends are calling him because he is in hangover. He can do anything like…… commit suicide. After all, he takes his gun to his head and walks till the edge of terrace. Max shoots himself and falls to the ground.
I know it sounds a little bit confusing as to why he did it or something like this. But that was his thinking. Now he could not do this because he was not a teenager anymore. After that he thought what would he do if he would be in college??
It’s the first day of him in college. Seniors try to rag him but he doesn’t let them do this. He says “I won’t let this happen with me. Do whatever you can”. That statement makes them angry. So next day when he parks his car, 5 seniors beat him in parking lot. Max decides to kill them all. After 1 month, he sees 4 of them going to a party. He kills them while riding bike with his gun (silencer attached) So that no one could hear him. Now only one person remains. He’s the head of that group. Though he is the head of that group, he is clever enough of course. Then Max tries to do the same with him but he gets caught. Now there is no way out. They start fighting with each other. As we know Max is smaller than senior, so he gets beaten. [Have we forgotten that junior is having gun]. Max gets down to the ground. Then senior leaves him, turning back to home. At that moment Max pulls out his gun and shoots him in his head. In the end, junior wins. Police try to catch culprit but they failed.
Same as above. Here also he could not do this because he was not in college anymore.
While thinking all that he had a hard headache and got unconscious. His wife took him to hospital. There doctors examined him and said to his wife “Sorry, but we can’t help him. He’s having a brain tumor”. It was not the initial stage of it but was just ignored. It was a critical stage. Just by hearing that, his wife got a heart attack and died. Max got the news that his wife is not anymore. He got sad but happy because now there was no one to worry about him. He said to himself ”Now there’s a chance to make my life interesting. My whole life was boring but my death should be amazing”. He plugged his earphones in his ear and started listening to his favorite music. As the music started, a game of life started. As music was coming to end, the game was becoming ‘hard and harder’. His headache was increasing and heart beat was going down. At the end of music, he won the game and lost his life. But his soul was so glad to have an amazing death.
Conclusion-----
I hope you found some interest in this story. The name of this story was decided by me and my cousin (Shruti Mishra). There’s a message to someone that “Each story is not for inspiring someone or giving message”. I thank you from my heart for giving your precious time to my story.
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