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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Revenge / Poetic Justice / Karma
- Published: 06/04/2013
The folk of Aldean
Born 1986, M, from Assuit, EgyptI was a hero, but no one remembers that, all of them turn their faces from me, no one stood beside me, I'm lonely, suffering and dying.
When we arrived to mars, a lot of things returned to life, Tiny things. They were dead, but when we modified the atmosphere there to make it able to absorb the life, A lot of Bacteria and germs returned to life. They attacked us. There was no therapy. Infection made the authority confused. The authority said we were agents for the enemy, We betrayed our nation, they began to kill us.
My father was with them. He made a refuge and hid me there from them. He was a scientist, He made a vaccine to heal me but the influences continued with me. I have no nose, My eyes become white, I’m not blind but my eyes have no color, I have no eyebrows, no eyelashes, my eyes have become like eyes Locusts, I lost my ability to turn to Waltham, My teeth have become sharpened. when I want to move from my refuge I must disguise myself. if they see me they will kill me.
Prometheus Aldean
****
You have no religion except control of nourishment of Tradif sons and Gutlam sons ....make Slenoa sons your slaves.
Teachings of the great father Aldean
****
My great great great grandfather Aldean had fallen in love with Nardina, my great grandmother. They were married. There's one who loved my great grandmother. He was Tradif, my grandfather's brother. He was jealous, He planned for revenge from Aldean. He convinced other brother Gutlam, who hated Aldean because their father loved him more than them.
Coward Slenoa knew what they planned, but he was scared, he couldn't tell Aldean what they would do. Aldean knew, he took his pregnant wife and went to his father to complain to him. he trusted his father would help him, he would punish them. But instead they saw evil on their faces, so Aldean and his wife ran and ran, they couldn’t turn their heads around to look again.
they wanted to escape, so they ran and ran and ran until they reached to the cave, but they didn't stop...they kept running...until they reached to the river, the river that existed under the earth. At this time his wife screamed, his son would come… Aldean stared at the river and decided, He would live here, He would take revenge.
Aldean's body couldn't afford changes of atmosphere under the earth, his body Eroded, but his sons mutated. If any one tried to touch him he yelled
“Don’t touch me, don’t touch me.”
We afford the atmosphere. we can turn to Waltham, we can suck everything in human body, everything except bones. we didn't turn to survive like vampires or like werewolves, we turned to take revenge. we attacked Slenoa sons, they became our slaves.
Slenoa sons manage our business on the earth, They Carried out our plan. They were terrified of us. They did anything we wanted, they helped us to control everything, we controlled nourishment, media, schools, we penetrated to everything, culture, religion. We controlled minds.
****
When the earth becomes one state, it's your time to move from here, it's your time to be the master.
Teachings of the great father Aldean
****
We had a theory the earth must be one state, spontaneously, we couldn't do anything to make it faster, we must wait. but our plan collapsed, we had a movement in our society, Demos was the boss, He planned to make it faster.
****
Michael Norbert stood in front of his window in his office, looking at the horizon... He said to himself, 'your poor life made you scared from happiness, gloom lives inside you, sadness is your friend, best friend, you broke her heart, you know she loves you, tell her you love her also, why are you scared, she knows you love her, but words can’t get out from your mouth. you are 38 now, the opportunity to be a father is low now, you must tell her, all of these years you didn’t have a girlfriend, work has taken you from the world, you resisted the poverty and Failure, now you are the best journalist in the world, but you forgot your heart, your feeling.'
Sarah, his secretary, stood beside him, she was talking to him but he didn't hear her. She put her hand on his shoulder, he noticed her, she looked at his face and said, “What’s wrong with you?"
He looked at her eyes, he wished he could say, "I love you," but words couldn't get out. She saw that in his eyes, the smile made her bright like a diamond, but her face burned out, when he said, "nothing, just thinking, work is very difficult."
She said, “There’s a man who wants to talk to you, he said he has a very important and strange story, he didn't agree to talk to anyone except you."
He said with an exhausted voice, “Let him come."
After a moment, a miserable man appeared in the office, his eyes were moving everywhere, he was confused and terrified as though he was followed by someone, he said, "You must protect me, they will kill me, I trust, but I can't do that anymore."
Michael said, "I will, but first I don’t know your name and we won’t write your name, they won’t know who told us the story".
He smiled, then he said, "They will know who told you this story, they know everything, they can do anything, they control everything."
A moment of silence, then he said, "My name's Richard and I’m a slave."
Michael yelled, "What? a slave, are you serious?"
He took a breath then he said, "Yes, I’m a slave and my dad was a slave and my mom was a slave, my whole family are slaves. there's a lot of slaves in the world. our Masters are managing the world."
Michael opened his eyes widely. He said, "You must tell me everything you know."
Richard wiped his sweat, he said, “They are everywhere, they are managing this world, I don’t know why they do that, I don't know their aims, but I know a lot of things about them”. A moment of pause then he said, "I work for the army, We plan for world war, We plan occupation of the world. the league will start that war, This is their plan, not our plan, they pushed us. I was a member of their plan, I did everything they wanted, I don't know how they appear suddenly in front of me, But I couldn't disobey them. I don't know why they want the world as one state, But I know they will do anything for that aim. You must talk about that, you must prevent that war, Victims will be everywhere, the world must know about that, we must resist the Metamorphoses, they look like us but they can turn to something strange, they can suck everything in your body within minutes. I’ll tell you some of their slaves."
Michael frowned, then he said, "I can't believe this story."
Richard said, "Write about it, then you will see what will happen."
A moment of pause, then Michael said, "Well, but I can’t write any names."
After three days, the story published, Michael became a Laughing stock, No one believed his article.
****
Our council met, Demos suggested they must kill Michael and Richard, they decided they must do that. There is no doubt Demos plans for something, I couldn't know what it is in this time but after one week I knew what it was. Demos betrayed our society, He planned for war, war between us and other human beings.
I volunteered myself for this duty, but they refused, they said Demos must do that, no one else. Demos grinned, then he moved with his team.
***
In this night Michael was in his office with Richard. Michael yelled with angry voice, "Did you see? what did you do?"
Richard said, "You will see soon, what will happen, they will come to kill us"
Michael looked to Richard's face angrily, suddenly Demos and his team appeared, within a moment they turned to Waltham, Michael ran, but they caught him, within a minute they left them Skeletons.
That proved we exist.
The earth had become one state indeed, but they came against us. They killed a lot of our slaves, they planned for war between us and them, all of our slaves betrayed us, they joined them, they could know where we are, then the war began.
We destroyed Washington, Beijing, Cairo, we destroyed a lot of cities, we were stronger than them, we have a ufo, we destroyed all of their Warplanes, but when they became desperate, they attacked our cities with tiny nuclear bombs. we weren't there, all of us were fighting, but that influenced on the earth, we won the war, all human beings became our slaves.
We made a tiny microchip, then we put it into our slaves in order to control them, but we had a problem, the rebels, I was responsible to kill all of them, but I found out Demos helped them to kill me. I found out his plan, he wanted to be our president, therefore I killed him and the whole of his team, then I said rebels killed them. I controlled a few of the rebels, they helped me to kill their boss, then we killed all of them.
Our scientist discovered the earth would explode after two years, the tiny nuclear bombs influenced it, so we must leave the earth, we must adjust the atmosphere in Mars in order to live there. we did it, then we left the earth. But there was no authority on earth, no one controlled our slaves, killing, stealing, and Rape were everywhere, then the earth exploded.
The folk of Aldean(mohamed helmi maklof)
I was a hero, but no one remembers that, all of them turn their faces from me, no one stood beside me, I'm lonely, suffering and dying.
When we arrived to mars, a lot of things returned to life, Tiny things. They were dead, but when we modified the atmosphere there to make it able to absorb the life, A lot of Bacteria and germs returned to life. They attacked us. There was no therapy. Infection made the authority confused. The authority said we were agents for the enemy, We betrayed our nation, they began to kill us.
My father was with them. He made a refuge and hid me there from them. He was a scientist, He made a vaccine to heal me but the influences continued with me. I have no nose, My eyes become white, I’m not blind but my eyes have no color, I have no eyebrows, no eyelashes, my eyes have become like eyes Locusts, I lost my ability to turn to Waltham, My teeth have become sharpened. when I want to move from my refuge I must disguise myself. if they see me they will kill me.
Prometheus Aldean
****
You have no religion except control of nourishment of Tradif sons and Gutlam sons ....make Slenoa sons your slaves.
Teachings of the great father Aldean
****
My great great great grandfather Aldean had fallen in love with Nardina, my great grandmother. They were married. There's one who loved my great grandmother. He was Tradif, my grandfather's brother. He was jealous, He planned for revenge from Aldean. He convinced other brother Gutlam, who hated Aldean because their father loved him more than them.
Coward Slenoa knew what they planned, but he was scared, he couldn't tell Aldean what they would do. Aldean knew, he took his pregnant wife and went to his father to complain to him. he trusted his father would help him, he would punish them. But instead they saw evil on their faces, so Aldean and his wife ran and ran, they couldn’t turn their heads around to look again.
they wanted to escape, so they ran and ran and ran until they reached to the cave, but they didn't stop...they kept running...until they reached to the river, the river that existed under the earth. At this time his wife screamed, his son would come… Aldean stared at the river and decided, He would live here, He would take revenge.
Aldean's body couldn't afford changes of atmosphere under the earth, his body Eroded, but his sons mutated. If any one tried to touch him he yelled
“Don’t touch me, don’t touch me.”
We afford the atmosphere. we can turn to Waltham, we can suck everything in human body, everything except bones. we didn't turn to survive like vampires or like werewolves, we turned to take revenge. we attacked Slenoa sons, they became our slaves.
Slenoa sons manage our business on the earth, They Carried out our plan. They were terrified of us. They did anything we wanted, they helped us to control everything, we controlled nourishment, media, schools, we penetrated to everything, culture, religion. We controlled minds.
****
When the earth becomes one state, it's your time to move from here, it's your time to be the master.
Teachings of the great father Aldean
****
We had a theory the earth must be one state, spontaneously, we couldn't do anything to make it faster, we must wait. but our plan collapsed, we had a movement in our society, Demos was the boss, He planned to make it faster.
****
Michael Norbert stood in front of his window in his office, looking at the horizon... He said to himself, 'your poor life made you scared from happiness, gloom lives inside you, sadness is your friend, best friend, you broke her heart, you know she loves you, tell her you love her also, why are you scared, she knows you love her, but words can’t get out from your mouth. you are 38 now, the opportunity to be a father is low now, you must tell her, all of these years you didn’t have a girlfriend, work has taken you from the world, you resisted the poverty and Failure, now you are the best journalist in the world, but you forgot your heart, your feeling.'
Sarah, his secretary, stood beside him, she was talking to him but he didn't hear her. She put her hand on his shoulder, he noticed her, she looked at his face and said, “What’s wrong with you?"
He looked at her eyes, he wished he could say, "I love you," but words couldn't get out. She saw that in his eyes, the smile made her bright like a diamond, but her face burned out, when he said, "nothing, just thinking, work is very difficult."
She said, “There’s a man who wants to talk to you, he said he has a very important and strange story, he didn't agree to talk to anyone except you."
He said with an exhausted voice, “Let him come."
After a moment, a miserable man appeared in the office, his eyes were moving everywhere, he was confused and terrified as though he was followed by someone, he said, "You must protect me, they will kill me, I trust, but I can't do that anymore."
Michael said, "I will, but first I don’t know your name and we won’t write your name, they won’t know who told us the story".
He smiled, then he said, "They will know who told you this story, they know everything, they can do anything, they control everything."
A moment of silence, then he said, "My name's Richard and I’m a slave."
Michael yelled, "What? a slave, are you serious?"
He took a breath then he said, "Yes, I’m a slave and my dad was a slave and my mom was a slave, my whole family are slaves. there's a lot of slaves in the world. our Masters are managing the world."
Michael opened his eyes widely. He said, "You must tell me everything you know."
Richard wiped his sweat, he said, “They are everywhere, they are managing this world, I don’t know why they do that, I don't know their aims, but I know a lot of things about them”. A moment of pause then he said, "I work for the army, We plan for world war, We plan occupation of the world. the league will start that war, This is their plan, not our plan, they pushed us. I was a member of their plan, I did everything they wanted, I don't know how they appear suddenly in front of me, But I couldn't disobey them. I don't know why they want the world as one state, But I know they will do anything for that aim. You must talk about that, you must prevent that war, Victims will be everywhere, the world must know about that, we must resist the Metamorphoses, they look like us but they can turn to something strange, they can suck everything in your body within minutes. I’ll tell you some of their slaves."
Michael frowned, then he said, "I can't believe this story."
Richard said, "Write about it, then you will see what will happen."
A moment of pause, then Michael said, "Well, but I can’t write any names."
After three days, the story published, Michael became a Laughing stock, No one believed his article.
****
Our council met, Demos suggested they must kill Michael and Richard, they decided they must do that. There is no doubt Demos plans for something, I couldn't know what it is in this time but after one week I knew what it was. Demos betrayed our society, He planned for war, war between us and other human beings.
I volunteered myself for this duty, but they refused, they said Demos must do that, no one else. Demos grinned, then he moved with his team.
***
In this night Michael was in his office with Richard. Michael yelled with angry voice, "Did you see? what did you do?"
Richard said, "You will see soon, what will happen, they will come to kill us"
Michael looked to Richard's face angrily, suddenly Demos and his team appeared, within a moment they turned to Waltham, Michael ran, but they caught him, within a minute they left them Skeletons.
That proved we exist.
The earth had become one state indeed, but they came against us. They killed a lot of our slaves, they planned for war between us and them, all of our slaves betrayed us, they joined them, they could know where we are, then the war began.
We destroyed Washington, Beijing, Cairo, we destroyed a lot of cities, we were stronger than them, we have a ufo, we destroyed all of their Warplanes, but when they became desperate, they attacked our cities with tiny nuclear bombs. we weren't there, all of us were fighting, but that influenced on the earth, we won the war, all human beings became our slaves.
We made a tiny microchip, then we put it into our slaves in order to control them, but we had a problem, the rebels, I was responsible to kill all of them, but I found out Demos helped them to kill me. I found out his plan, he wanted to be our president, therefore I killed him and the whole of his team, then I said rebels killed them. I controlled a few of the rebels, they helped me to kill their boss, then we killed all of them.
Our scientist discovered the earth would explode after two years, the tiny nuclear bombs influenced it, so we must leave the earth, we must adjust the atmosphere in Mars in order to live there. we did it, then we left the earth. But there was no authority on earth, no one controlled our slaves, killing, stealing, and Rape were everywhere, then the earth exploded.
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