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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 06/04/2013
Nightmare. By Jake Barry
The day started like every other day…I woke up at 5:30 In the morning and headed to the shower when all of a sudden I heard a big smash that came from the patio door I ran downstairs to the basement. I went into the brown old rusty door where our farness is. I only could hear stomps from upstairs, then I heard the basement door open. I grabbed a flashlight and turned all the lights off and closed the door and got a kitchen knife and yelled, "I’m calling the police," and the guy ran back outside and the police just got him and my mom got home and asked what happened. I said someone broke in and then that was a bad day.
The end.
demonic(jake barry)
Nightmare. By Jake Barry
The day started like every other day…I woke up at 5:30 In the morning and headed to the shower when all of a sudden I heard a big smash that came from the patio door I ran downstairs to the basement. I went into the brown old rusty door where our farness is. I only could hear stomps from upstairs, then I heard the basement door open. I grabbed a flashlight and turned all the lights off and closed the door and got a kitchen knife and yelled, "I’m calling the police," and the guy ran back outside and the police just got him and my mom got home and asked what happened. I said someone broke in and then that was a bad day.
The end.
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