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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Mystery
  • Subject: Memory / Reminiscence
  • Published: 06/06/2013

Future can't be visualised

By Vishal vikram satpute
Born 1992, M, from Mumbai, India
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A 4 days trip of 2 boys & 2 girls, younsters as we can say, were going to lonavala hills, a place in maharshtra, INDIA. Rahul was driving the car & others were enjoying the ride. As road was a national highway they were going easy in the shadow of twinkling stars & the half moon which was giving somewhat dim light to rahul in his driving. The journey continued. They passed half the way. As they were marching they had two ways ahead, one was the normal way to their destination & was an adventurous way, no one knows were it ends. Rahul asked his fellow friend vishal, should we have an Adventure as we are here for adventure only? But vishal was a scared, "darpok" boy as we say in hindi. He said 'no'. we will take take the normal route. Then shuba, who was on the back seat with vishal, said no way, we will have a fantastic adventure on a new way, we should go on, & Apeksha said, i'm with you both. so a 3 on win majority took them to a new scary, dark, full of tree's adventure. after about a long & slow fifteen minutes wondering the way where it is going, vishal said, hey guys it is about 1'o clock, i'm going to sleep. shuba said, we sleep daily yaar. don't sleep, and both vishal & shuba started mischieving back side & rahul with apeksha were laughing on both the couples. The road was very hard to drive as it was passing through mountains & was a kachha rasta, slow enjoyful ride with lots of adventures, things outside & inside too. They were enjoying their ride. But suddenly the car started slowing down. rahul didn't how it was happening but managing the situation he carried on. No one knew what had happened with the car. But now the car was in steady motion. After about 1 or 2 km the car suddenly stopped..... rahul was wondering why the car stopped. He came out of the car watching all over it, nothing has happened, he said loudly to vishal. all 4 of them were out of the car. then suddenly vishal saw the road with petrol from their car, by which he knew their hope was dashed in front of petrol tank. This ended their adventure because the petrol was empty in their car & they were nearly about 30km away from the main highway. vishal said, our bad time has started. really their bad time was going start after this. vishal said we should stay here over night. all agreed this time with vishal. they all walked around 100mts. rahul found a small cave, as they were on a hill. cave was ok for all 4 of them. but it was some 30 to 40mtrs up from the normal surface. they didn't knew they were making the mistake of their life...............

Future can't be visualised(vishal vikram satpute) A 4 days trip of 2 boys & 2 girls, younsters as we can say, were going to lonavala hills, a place in maharshtra, INDIA. Rahul was driving the car & others were enjoying the ride. As road was a national highway they were going easy in the shadow of twinkling stars & the half moon which was giving somewhat dim light to rahul in his driving. The journey continued. They passed half the way. As they were marching they had two ways ahead, one was the normal way to their destination & was an adventurous way, no one knows were it ends. Rahul asked his fellow friend vishal, should we have an Adventure as we are here for adventure only? But vishal was a scared, "darpok" boy as we say in hindi. He said 'no'. we will take take the normal route. Then shuba, who was on the back seat with vishal, said no way, we will have a fantastic adventure on a new way, we should go on, & Apeksha said, i'm with you both. so a 3 on win majority took them to a new scary, dark, full of tree's adventure. after about a long & slow fifteen minutes wondering the way where it is going, vishal said, hey guys it is about 1'o clock, i'm going to sleep. shuba said, we sleep daily yaar. don't sleep, and both vishal & shuba started mischieving back side & rahul with apeksha were laughing on both the couples. The road was very hard to drive as it was passing through mountains & was a kachha rasta, slow enjoyful ride with lots of adventures, things outside & inside too. They were enjoying their ride. But suddenly the car started slowing down. rahul didn't how it was happening but managing the situation he carried on. No one knew what had happened with the car. But now the car was in steady motion. After about 1 or 2 km the car suddenly stopped..... rahul was wondering why the car stopped. He came out of the car watching all over it, nothing has happened, he said loudly to vishal. all 4 of them were out of the car. then suddenly vishal saw the road with petrol from their car, by which he knew their hope was dashed in front of petrol tank. This ended their adventure because the petrol was empty in their car & they were nearly about 30km away from the main highway. vishal said, our bad time has started. really their bad time was going start after this. vishal said we should stay here over night. all agreed this time with vishal. they all walked around 100mts. rahul found a small cave, as they were on a hill. cave was ok for all 4 of them. but it was some 30 to 40mtrs up from the normal surface. they didn't knew they were making the mistake of their life...............

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