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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Family & Friends
  • Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
  • Published: 06/14/2013

He's gone.

By May Bivens
Born 2000, F, from Georgia, United States
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He’s gone

Luke; you where my hero, my life, but, you ended it all. You went and hung yourself, why? What made you do it? Was it me, was it school, or was it someone? I knew you were depressed, but I didn't think you’d do this! You told me you where getting better, you said everything was great!
How much did you lie? When was “I’m fine" true? Those scars on your wrist, were they really the cat, or from your own blade? Were the smiles all a fake? Did you have to put on a fake face to go out into the world?
Well, I guess it’s too late for you to tell me. I just want you back here, I know I will never get to hold you in my arms again, well not anytime soon.

He's gone.(May Bivens) He’s gone

Luke; you where my hero, my life, but, you ended it all. You went and hung yourself, why? What made you do it? Was it me, was it school, or was it someone? I knew you were depressed, but I didn't think you’d do this! You told me you where getting better, you said everything was great!
How much did you lie? When was “I’m fine" true? Those scars on your wrist, were they really the cat, or from your own blade? Were the smiles all a fake? Did you have to put on a fake face to go out into the world?
Well, I guess it’s too late for you to tell me. I just want you back here, I know I will never get to hold you in my arms again, well not anytime soon.

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