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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 06/14/2013
A DRIVE by: Taylor “Move you moron!” Honk! Honk! Honk! Screamed Melisa, her horn honking in the back round along with many others. They were stuck in a traffic jam. What’s worse she had her kids with her- triplets! They weren’t loud they were vociferous. They weren’t smelly they were walking, talking pigsty’s, did Melisa care? Not at all.
Melisa didn’t care because they were actually being quiet! Ever since she had bought them their cell phones they were quiet and stayed out of her hair, and yes it is a little tacky to by 5 year olds cell phones but before the cell phones Melisa had nothing but the word “MOM”! Screamed in her ear. To her this is heaven. Heaven on earth. Then all the sudden “mom!” Barked Jackson “turn off the radio!” Melisa sighed and replied “ok darling whatever you say” Melisa hoped that was the last word to be said that drive, it’s not that she didn’t love her children she loved them dearly, with all her heart! It’s just they were spoiled little brats! And Melisa hated it but didn’t have the heart to stop it, nobody else could. Her husband passed away a day before the triplets were born and her mom came and helped for a while but she went on a cruise and never came back. So it’s just Melisa and the brats.
“Beep beep beep DING! Beep beep beep DING! Beep beep beep DING!” sounded all the phones, there battery was low. Melisa’s jaw dropped.
A DRIVE(taylor)
A DRIVE by: Taylor “Move you moron!” Honk! Honk! Honk! Screamed Melisa, her horn honking in the back round along with many others. They were stuck in a traffic jam. What’s worse she had her kids with her- triplets! They weren’t loud they were vociferous. They weren’t smelly they were walking, talking pigsty’s, did Melisa care? Not at all.
Melisa didn’t care because they were actually being quiet! Ever since she had bought them their cell phones they were quiet and stayed out of her hair, and yes it is a little tacky to by 5 year olds cell phones but before the cell phones Melisa had nothing but the word “MOM”! Screamed in her ear. To her this is heaven. Heaven on earth. Then all the sudden “mom!” Barked Jackson “turn off the radio!” Melisa sighed and replied “ok darling whatever you say” Melisa hoped that was the last word to be said that drive, it’s not that she didn’t love her children she loved them dearly, with all her heart! It’s just they were spoiled little brats! And Melisa hated it but didn’t have the heart to stop it, nobody else could. Her husband passed away a day before the triplets were born and her mom came and helped for a while but she went on a cruise and never came back. So it’s just Melisa and the brats.
“Beep beep beep DING! Beep beep beep DING! Beep beep beep DING!” sounded all the phones, there battery was low. Melisa’s jaw dropped.
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