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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 07/04/2013
Think that you are now in year 2095.
Main characters: Two twins brothers, Tom Bobby and Jerry Bobby.
Will their father’s dream come true??
Once a upon a time, there were two twin brothers, who were born in 2035 in Greece, named Tom Bobby and Jerry Bobby. The world had changed a lot from before. There were lots of people and a lot of polluted factories that make large amounts of carbon dioxide (most of the people died because of the polluted factories). There were less animals than before, people killed animals to make such things as mats from tigers. The technology got better than before, like remote control chairs and robots that can help you to do your work. Most of the people were very fat all over the world because people didn't eat healthy food, they just eat junk food which is not healthy for them. Ice melted in Antarctica and caused flooding all over the world because of global warming (greenhouse effects). There are ozone holes in the Earth's atmosphere. There were wars all over the world, especially wars with America. The earth is getting warmer and warmer than before…………………………………………
Our childhood was past like other children. Most of the time was past at school. We always arrived late at home, just because of the boring tutor who taught us Science and Math. We lived in Moschato, which is located in Greece. It was very hard to live in a harsh place which was full of rubbish on the streets. It makes a lot of disgusting smell and allows rats to enter into buildings and houses. I don’t think this only happens in Moschato, it happens all over the world. There are polluted factories that cause diseases to people’s health, like asthma or coughing. I know that you might be thinking, how do I know this information? The fact is, I know this information from news on the T.V. and reading newspaper every night with my brother, just to know more about what is happening on the Earth.
I like Science a lot, then my brother Jerry Bobby, but he thinks he likes Science a lot more than me. We are twin brothers, but not quite similar in some areas. My brother likes shooting the gun and archery, but he is neither good at shooting the gun nor archery. As you know, I’m just good at Math and Science. Actually, I’m not like my brother. When he grows up, he would like to be a Scientist. When I grow up, I want to be an Astronaut. There is a reason behind why I want to be an Astronaut and my brother wants to be a Scientist. Our father Thomas Bobby, he was a Scientist but also worked as an Astronaut, was a leader. We were about 2 months old when our father decided to leave the Earth and find the new planet in another galaxy. He also wanted to discover the proper distance of the planets from the Earth. But the first mission was to discover the new planet in another galaxy. He and his other friends set off to find a new planet in another galaxy. Unfortunately, they never returned back to the Earth. NASA says that they were lost in the space, but who knows, maybe they died?
When our father didn't return to the planet Earth, our mum married a man called Edward P. Storer. They had a son, called Ewaner D. Storer. He is our step brother who was born when we were about 4 years old. We always hated our step father because he was always drunk and started beating me and my brother for no reason. We worked in a store which sells magazines about planets. When we were about 8 years old, our mum told us about the accident that our father had. From then on, me and my brother decided to make our father’s dream come true. We studied hard and achieved good results in all the subjects, especially in Math and Science.
AFTER 20 YEARS……………………………………………………………………………………………………………
The day passed by very quickly. Me and my brother worked for NASA in America. Our manager Steven R. Nagel decided that me and my other four friends, Andrew M. Allen, Joseph P. Allen, William Anders, and Scott Altman should go on a mission to find out new planets in other galaxies. Our manager asked my brother to stay on the Earth to make a different missile that can kill all the dangerous enemies like aliens if it’s needed. He only had about 2 months to make a missile to fight with other enemies like aliens, if there are any in space. After 2 months, he was successful making 1 missile and 1 spaceship. The spaceship was called NCC-1701-A and the missile was called Millenium Falcon. He also invented a spaceship with speed of light in it. But the manager was very angry, he scolded my brother, “Do you know the astronauts are going to travel for a long journey, so I want you to make a spaceship that has an artificial gravity.” My brother combined the speed of light and artificial gravity together and make a spaceship called Torus.
Our manager finally chose this spaceship because the spaceship Torus has an artificial gravity in it. Torus is for a long-term space travel, it always rotates to give artificial gravity. As my brother was a Scientist he had to stay on the Earth, but he was looking cheerless. However, he had a chance to travel into the space after 1 year.
I was very excited when we were about to start our spaceship, my other 4 friend’s heartbeats were very fast too. Although we were going to travel in speed of light, I wasn't that afraid or nervous because I had an excitement to make my father’s dream come true. I tried hard to make them settle down by questioning them “What if your father’s dream is that my son would one day go to space and discover something that is appreciated by NASA.” After calming them down, we started our journey to the other galaxy…………………………………..
When we started the spaceship we were all like a statue. We weren't feeling anything around us. Andrew M. Allen’s hands were up in the air, his lips were like he was kissing someone or something. Joseph P. Allen’s legs were crossed and his eyes were closed like he was blind. William Ander’s fingers were under his legs and his tongue was outside the mouth. Scott Altman’s head was down and his fingers were in his mouth. My right leg was on the chair and my head was on that leg. Suddenly our spaceship stopped and went on a normal speed. To reach to any another galaxy with speed of light, it took us about 25,000 light-years away and we didn't even miss anything that has happened to us for last 25,000 years, not even me. So that means we were statue for about 25,000 years. We didn't even know what was happening to us for about 25,000 years. We weren't flying because we were in torus that gave us artificial gravity, so we all were very calm and started to walk in the spaceship torus. I was satisfied that we were safe in space. This time I was only thinking about my father’s dream about finding a new planet in another galaxy.
The question in my head was, we should have been died by now but why didn't we? While I was thinking of that question, I suddenly saw another spaceship. I didn't see that spaceship properly because it was very dark outside. Before I thought of a spaceship, I thought it was a black hole. I felt very scared. After 5 minutes, in my computer screen, I saw a person who has a mustache on his face. He told me in a hurry, “Open the door of the spaceship where you have located your 2 missiles ”. I did what he told me to do. I wasn't sure what we were trying to do. When I opened the door where I have located 2 missiles, he rushed with his spaceship and put his spaceship with 2 of my missiles. Then he entered the room where I was standing with my other 4 friends. I spoke to him and asked him, “Who are you and what do you want from us." He hugged me and answered, “I am your brother Jerry. I am here to help you.” I was surprised to see him. My brother shouted excitedly, “We have now reached to an another galaxy. We were all very excited about this news.
We landed on the planet which was closest to us. While we were landing there were 3 things to do. The first is to get ready our 2 missiles to fight with aliens if needed. Second thing is to pray to god about making our father’s dream come true. The last thing is we have to make sure that the place is safe to live. When we were about to land, we saw a lot things like a river, rain forest, some trees and plants. Plants use water, carbon dioxide and energy from sun to make oxygen, so this cycle is called photosynthesis and that’s why I thought people or aliens are living here. That showed a good sign to live. The biggest thing I saw was a volcano. We landed safely with my brother’s help. My estimation is that the planet density is quite big. The good thing about this planet is that there is gravity. There are two moon orbits around the planet. When we stepped on that planet, we all found out it is safe but the temperature was really hot. By suggestion of William Anders, we all used NCC-1701-A spaceship to find some people around this planet. We spent about 5 hours looking for people around this planet but we couldn't find any. Through this 5 hours of looking for people, I found out that this planet uses a lot of renewable energy like wind energy, solar power, hydro energy. After a few more hours, we found a small house and on the top of the house, there was something written: “Science laboratory”. Scott Altman was a bit scared so he suggested, “I think we should use the bomb to shoot that house.” I didn't agree with him but all of the other four people agreed with him and decided to shoot that house. When we were about to shoot that house, we suddenly heard a lot of people screaming, “fight,fight,fight,fight,fight!”
I screamed at my friends and my brother, “I think they are going to have a war with us.” My brother confidently answered, “Let’s get ready to fight with them.” Everybody got ready to sit in the Millenium Falcon to fight back. We were all ready to fight with them. When there were very close to us, we could see them, guess who they were? They were aliens!!!!!!!! There was a battle between us and the aliens. They were about 1.57 cm tall. There were thousands of aliens holding knives and shields. Some of them had their own missiles. They had very ugly faces, noses were very big, small hands with 7 fingers, left eyes big and right eyes small, small legs and big feet, big and sharp ears. The colour of their body was blue with some white. We all can see bacteria on aliens bodies. How disgusting……. !!!!! There were only a few of us using missiles to fight back. There was a lot of sound made by those missiles. Also, there was radiation made by the aliens missiles, laser beams that can burn the skin and our missiles. By knowing that radiation is harmful to use, to stop it we had to do something that allows aliens to stop fighting with us. My brother shouted, “I had brought a lion for fighting with enemies but you know it’s a dead one.” I ran to my brother and whispered, “I think we should feed this lion to aliens to make them stop fighting with us. So that we can quickly run away from this planet.” Me and my brother quietly discussed with other 4 friends about our idea. By using this idea, we threw the lion to the aliens. All the aliens started to eat the lion. While the aliens were eating, we all quickly did 2 things. First was to go to look at Science Laboratory and get something interesting and useful. Second was to rush back to spaceship. In the Science Laboratory we found a laser beam that can change the dirty world to a new world. That sounds magical, right?? There was also a remote control for changing the gravity. The red button stands for no gravity, green was normal gravity and yellow was very high gravity. Isn't that interesting??
We rushed back to the spaceship and started the spaceship in a normal speed to get out of the planet. When we were out from the planet, we pressed the yellow button to make the gravity very high of that planet to kill those ugly aliens in the planet.
And then we started our spaceship with the speed of light.
Again after 25,000 years………………………………………………………..
When we were about to reach the Earth, our spaceship stopped and we could see the planet Earth. My brother excitedly shouted, “I think we should use the laser beam to change the dirty world to new world.” So, we did what my brother told us to do. I pressed the red button on the laser Beam. After I pressed the red button, it made an extremely loud sound……………………………………………….. BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, we had reached to the Earth. I am very happy that I made my father’s dream come true. Everyone was dead, my mother, my step father, my step brother, our NASA manager and the old generation. There were new people around us. Everything was changed!!!!!!!! There weren't any polluted factories left, people stopped killing animals, etc. Now the Earth had become a new planet. Few days later me, my brother and all the other 4 friends got an award for finding a new planet in another galaxy. That planet was named Paratoi.
I wish my father was with me right now. He would feel very proud of me. However, he is not here so I am very proud of myself that I had made my father’s dream come true.
((((Do you remember the question I asked? The question was, we should have been died by now, but why didn’t we?
It’s because when we are traveling in a speed of light, time stops and you don’t even know what is happening to you.)))))
Will Their Father's Dream Come True?(Tom)
Think that you are now in year 2095.
Main characters: Two twins brothers, Tom Bobby and Jerry Bobby.
Will their father’s dream come true??
Once a upon a time, there were two twin brothers, who were born in 2035 in Greece, named Tom Bobby and Jerry Bobby. The world had changed a lot from before. There were lots of people and a lot of polluted factories that make large amounts of carbon dioxide (most of the people died because of the polluted factories). There were less animals than before, people killed animals to make such things as mats from tigers. The technology got better than before, like remote control chairs and robots that can help you to do your work. Most of the people were very fat all over the world because people didn't eat healthy food, they just eat junk food which is not healthy for them. Ice melted in Antarctica and caused flooding all over the world because of global warming (greenhouse effects). There are ozone holes in the Earth's atmosphere. There were wars all over the world, especially wars with America. The earth is getting warmer and warmer than before…………………………………………
Our childhood was past like other children. Most of the time was past at school. We always arrived late at home, just because of the boring tutor who taught us Science and Math. We lived in Moschato, which is located in Greece. It was very hard to live in a harsh place which was full of rubbish on the streets. It makes a lot of disgusting smell and allows rats to enter into buildings and houses. I don’t think this only happens in Moschato, it happens all over the world. There are polluted factories that cause diseases to people’s health, like asthma or coughing. I know that you might be thinking, how do I know this information? The fact is, I know this information from news on the T.V. and reading newspaper every night with my brother, just to know more about what is happening on the Earth.
I like Science a lot, then my brother Jerry Bobby, but he thinks he likes Science a lot more than me. We are twin brothers, but not quite similar in some areas. My brother likes shooting the gun and archery, but he is neither good at shooting the gun nor archery. As you know, I’m just good at Math and Science. Actually, I’m not like my brother. When he grows up, he would like to be a Scientist. When I grow up, I want to be an Astronaut. There is a reason behind why I want to be an Astronaut and my brother wants to be a Scientist. Our father Thomas Bobby, he was a Scientist but also worked as an Astronaut, was a leader. We were about 2 months old when our father decided to leave the Earth and find the new planet in another galaxy. He also wanted to discover the proper distance of the planets from the Earth. But the first mission was to discover the new planet in another galaxy. He and his other friends set off to find a new planet in another galaxy. Unfortunately, they never returned back to the Earth. NASA says that they were lost in the space, but who knows, maybe they died?
When our father didn't return to the planet Earth, our mum married a man called Edward P. Storer. They had a son, called Ewaner D. Storer. He is our step brother who was born when we were about 4 years old. We always hated our step father because he was always drunk and started beating me and my brother for no reason. We worked in a store which sells magazines about planets. When we were about 8 years old, our mum told us about the accident that our father had. From then on, me and my brother decided to make our father’s dream come true. We studied hard and achieved good results in all the subjects, especially in Math and Science.
AFTER 20 YEARS……………………………………………………………………………………………………………
The day passed by very quickly. Me and my brother worked for NASA in America. Our manager Steven R. Nagel decided that me and my other four friends, Andrew M. Allen, Joseph P. Allen, William Anders, and Scott Altman should go on a mission to find out new planets in other galaxies. Our manager asked my brother to stay on the Earth to make a different missile that can kill all the dangerous enemies like aliens if it’s needed. He only had about 2 months to make a missile to fight with other enemies like aliens, if there are any in space. After 2 months, he was successful making 1 missile and 1 spaceship. The spaceship was called NCC-1701-A and the missile was called Millenium Falcon. He also invented a spaceship with speed of light in it. But the manager was very angry, he scolded my brother, “Do you know the astronauts are going to travel for a long journey, so I want you to make a spaceship that has an artificial gravity.” My brother combined the speed of light and artificial gravity together and make a spaceship called Torus.
Our manager finally chose this spaceship because the spaceship Torus has an artificial gravity in it. Torus is for a long-term space travel, it always rotates to give artificial gravity. As my brother was a Scientist he had to stay on the Earth, but he was looking cheerless. However, he had a chance to travel into the space after 1 year.
I was very excited when we were about to start our spaceship, my other 4 friend’s heartbeats were very fast too. Although we were going to travel in speed of light, I wasn't that afraid or nervous because I had an excitement to make my father’s dream come true. I tried hard to make them settle down by questioning them “What if your father’s dream is that my son would one day go to space and discover something that is appreciated by NASA.” After calming them down, we started our journey to the other galaxy…………………………………..
When we started the spaceship we were all like a statue. We weren't feeling anything around us. Andrew M. Allen’s hands were up in the air, his lips were like he was kissing someone or something. Joseph P. Allen’s legs were crossed and his eyes were closed like he was blind. William Ander’s fingers were under his legs and his tongue was outside the mouth. Scott Altman’s head was down and his fingers were in his mouth. My right leg was on the chair and my head was on that leg. Suddenly our spaceship stopped and went on a normal speed. To reach to any another galaxy with speed of light, it took us about 25,000 light-years away and we didn't even miss anything that has happened to us for last 25,000 years, not even me. So that means we were statue for about 25,000 years. We didn't even know what was happening to us for about 25,000 years. We weren't flying because we were in torus that gave us artificial gravity, so we all were very calm and started to walk in the spaceship torus. I was satisfied that we were safe in space. This time I was only thinking about my father’s dream about finding a new planet in another galaxy.
The question in my head was, we should have been died by now but why didn't we? While I was thinking of that question, I suddenly saw another spaceship. I didn't see that spaceship properly because it was very dark outside. Before I thought of a spaceship, I thought it was a black hole. I felt very scared. After 5 minutes, in my computer screen, I saw a person who has a mustache on his face. He told me in a hurry, “Open the door of the spaceship where you have located your 2 missiles ”. I did what he told me to do. I wasn't sure what we were trying to do. When I opened the door where I have located 2 missiles, he rushed with his spaceship and put his spaceship with 2 of my missiles. Then he entered the room where I was standing with my other 4 friends. I spoke to him and asked him, “Who are you and what do you want from us." He hugged me and answered, “I am your brother Jerry. I am here to help you.” I was surprised to see him. My brother shouted excitedly, “We have now reached to an another galaxy. We were all very excited about this news.
We landed on the planet which was closest to us. While we were landing there were 3 things to do. The first is to get ready our 2 missiles to fight with aliens if needed. Second thing is to pray to god about making our father’s dream come true. The last thing is we have to make sure that the place is safe to live. When we were about to land, we saw a lot things like a river, rain forest, some trees and plants. Plants use water, carbon dioxide and energy from sun to make oxygen, so this cycle is called photosynthesis and that’s why I thought people or aliens are living here. That showed a good sign to live. The biggest thing I saw was a volcano. We landed safely with my brother’s help. My estimation is that the planet density is quite big. The good thing about this planet is that there is gravity. There are two moon orbits around the planet. When we stepped on that planet, we all found out it is safe but the temperature was really hot. By suggestion of William Anders, we all used NCC-1701-A spaceship to find some people around this planet. We spent about 5 hours looking for people around this planet but we couldn't find any. Through this 5 hours of looking for people, I found out that this planet uses a lot of renewable energy like wind energy, solar power, hydro energy. After a few more hours, we found a small house and on the top of the house, there was something written: “Science laboratory”. Scott Altman was a bit scared so he suggested, “I think we should use the bomb to shoot that house.” I didn't agree with him but all of the other four people agreed with him and decided to shoot that house. When we were about to shoot that house, we suddenly heard a lot of people screaming, “fight,fight,fight,fight,fight!”
I screamed at my friends and my brother, “I think they are going to have a war with us.” My brother confidently answered, “Let’s get ready to fight with them.” Everybody got ready to sit in the Millenium Falcon to fight back. We were all ready to fight with them. When there were very close to us, we could see them, guess who they were? They were aliens!!!!!!!! There was a battle between us and the aliens. They were about 1.57 cm tall. There were thousands of aliens holding knives and shields. Some of them had their own missiles. They had very ugly faces, noses were very big, small hands with 7 fingers, left eyes big and right eyes small, small legs and big feet, big and sharp ears. The colour of their body was blue with some white. We all can see bacteria on aliens bodies. How disgusting……. !!!!! There were only a few of us using missiles to fight back. There was a lot of sound made by those missiles. Also, there was radiation made by the aliens missiles, laser beams that can burn the skin and our missiles. By knowing that radiation is harmful to use, to stop it we had to do something that allows aliens to stop fighting with us. My brother shouted, “I had brought a lion for fighting with enemies but you know it’s a dead one.” I ran to my brother and whispered, “I think we should feed this lion to aliens to make them stop fighting with us. So that we can quickly run away from this planet.” Me and my brother quietly discussed with other 4 friends about our idea. By using this idea, we threw the lion to the aliens. All the aliens started to eat the lion. While the aliens were eating, we all quickly did 2 things. First was to go to look at Science Laboratory and get something interesting and useful. Second was to rush back to spaceship. In the Science Laboratory we found a laser beam that can change the dirty world to a new world. That sounds magical, right?? There was also a remote control for changing the gravity. The red button stands for no gravity, green was normal gravity and yellow was very high gravity. Isn't that interesting??
We rushed back to the spaceship and started the spaceship in a normal speed to get out of the planet. When we were out from the planet, we pressed the yellow button to make the gravity very high of that planet to kill those ugly aliens in the planet.
And then we started our spaceship with the speed of light.
Again after 25,000 years………………………………………………………..
When we were about to reach the Earth, our spaceship stopped and we could see the planet Earth. My brother excitedly shouted, “I think we should use the laser beam to change the dirty world to new world.” So, we did what my brother told us to do. I pressed the red button on the laser Beam. After I pressed the red button, it made an extremely loud sound……………………………………………….. BOMB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, we had reached to the Earth. I am very happy that I made my father’s dream come true. Everyone was dead, my mother, my step father, my step brother, our NASA manager and the old generation. There were new people around us. Everything was changed!!!!!!!! There weren't any polluted factories left, people stopped killing animals, etc. Now the Earth had become a new planet. Few days later me, my brother and all the other 4 friends got an award for finding a new planet in another galaxy. That planet was named Paratoi.
I wish my father was with me right now. He would feel very proud of me. However, he is not here so I am very proud of myself that I had made my father’s dream come true.
((((Do you remember the question I asked? The question was, we should have been died by now, but why didn’t we?
It’s because when we are traveling in a speed of light, time stops and you don’t even know what is happening to you.)))))
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