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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 07/07/2013
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Marie plants a tree in her garden everyday I went and touched one apple it turned to gold and fell I took the apple and put it in my pocket and went to my house I ran to my room and stared at the window and saw Marie this time she wasn't felling good Maybe she found out the apple is missing I freaked out I hid the apple under my pillow after few seconds i herd the door bell I knew it is Marie After few minutes i herd someone knocking the door i opened and saw Marie She asked me if I came near the tree I told her no She told me she found one apple missing and i'm like what she counts the apples now that's weird But what if she has a diary like me I'll come back Tommorow.
OMG ! I have a piece of paper it's in my hand i saw it under that stupid tree "DEAR READER I'M MARIE OSBORN I'M 13 I LOST MY MOM SINCE I WAS 3 I LIVE WITH MY STEP MOTHER AND MY FATHER AND ONE STEP BROTHER I PLANT THAT TREE OUTSIDE WHICH CONTAINS 51 APPLES AND THE SECRETS IN THEM ARE MORE POWERFUL THAN ANYTHING ONE APPLE IS CALLED KELLY AND ONE JACK AND THE THOMAS AND THE TREE IS." Who's the tree Kelly and Jack are her brother and sister now it all makes sense so her real mom has passed away and that's not her brother that's why I've been wondering where they were but where are they?
I went to Marie today you wouldn't believe it i gave her the golden apple she hanged it and it turned to normal and the worst part is that she told me that her step mom turned her mom into a tree and the apples are the rest of her family she told me that she doesn't know how to break the curse.
I kept on thinking about this the whole day I went to the market I bought some seeds I put them into a bottle where I filled it with water I shacked it well Then I ran into Marie's house and throwed this water into her step mother's face she screamed and yelled and ran outside she started shrinking and then she turned into an onion the sun came it was a bright day and the tree which is Marie's mother came back her family came back and they lived happily ever after.
The golden apple(Bayanii)
Marie plants a tree in her garden everyday I went and touched one apple it turned to gold and fell I took the apple and put it in my pocket and went to my house I ran to my room and stared at the window and saw Marie this time she wasn't felling good Maybe she found out the apple is missing I freaked out I hid the apple under my pillow after few seconds i herd the door bell I knew it is Marie After few minutes i herd someone knocking the door i opened and saw Marie She asked me if I came near the tree I told her no She told me she found one apple missing and i'm like what she counts the apples now that's weird But what if she has a diary like me I'll come back Tommorow.
OMG ! I have a piece of paper it's in my hand i saw it under that stupid tree "DEAR READER I'M MARIE OSBORN I'M 13 I LOST MY MOM SINCE I WAS 3 I LIVE WITH MY STEP MOTHER AND MY FATHER AND ONE STEP BROTHER I PLANT THAT TREE OUTSIDE WHICH CONTAINS 51 APPLES AND THE SECRETS IN THEM ARE MORE POWERFUL THAN ANYTHING ONE APPLE IS CALLED KELLY AND ONE JACK AND THE THOMAS AND THE TREE IS." Who's the tree Kelly and Jack are her brother and sister now it all makes sense so her real mom has passed away and that's not her brother that's why I've been wondering where they were but where are they?
I went to Marie today you wouldn't believe it i gave her the golden apple she hanged it and it turned to normal and the worst part is that she told me that her step mom turned her mom into a tree and the apples are the rest of her family she told me that she doesn't know how to break the curse.
I kept on thinking about this the whole day I went to the market I bought some seeds I put them into a bottle where I filled it with water I shacked it well Then I ran into Marie's house and throwed this water into her step mother's face she screamed and yelled and ran outside she started shrinking and then she turned into an onion the sun came it was a bright day and the tree which is Marie's mother came back her family came back and they lived happily ever after.
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