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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 07/28/2013
No risk no reward
Born 1970, M, from Punta gorda/F.L., United StatesThere was one killer that Don just could not get to. It was because he knew what Don was going to do. It was a person that had killed his partner and Don wanted him dead. He knew that the chief would not of let him on this case if he knew how he felt. Don knew that he had to mask his feelings about this killer. So that he could catch this person. It was something that had been the only thing that was on Don`s mind. He would have thought that he had the killer but he did not. I was one step ahead of him.
Don went to a call of a man that had been killed by the same person Don was after. He made his way up the stairs to see if what they said was true. There over the body was something that made Don not believe his eyes. There was a female ME and she was not old like Frank, she was something that made Don not think of the case for that one moment. She turned around and smiled at Don. She had such beautiful green eyes. She had her hair in a pony tail, she was looking at the face of the man. "I tell you this, it was a woman because she left one of her nails behind in this guys neck." Don could not say a word, he just looked at the body. He was just overtaken back by the beauty of this lady. "So we have a woman out there killing guys. Don knew that this was the one that killed his buddy. There was the same marks that he had on his neck.
Before he could say one word or think of something a call came in. It was about the killer. They found her in a local motel. The bad news to Don was she had shot herself. It was the one thing that kept Don going that he would be able to kill this woman. Britt, the ME, put her arm around Don. it was the first good feeling hat he had in so long. he had been running on hate for so long. He just stood there for a moment, then he pulled Britt into himself and kissed her. It just felt so right he did not want to let her go, so they went out for coffee and talked. He knew by the end of the night that Britt was the one for him. Out of all this something great came, a women named Britt.
No risk no reward(Leo Laclair)
There was one killer that Don just could not get to. It was because he knew what Don was going to do. It was a person that had killed his partner and Don wanted him dead. He knew that the chief would not of let him on this case if he knew how he felt. Don knew that he had to mask his feelings about this killer. So that he could catch this person. It was something that had been the only thing that was on Don`s mind. He would have thought that he had the killer but he did not. I was one step ahead of him.
Don went to a call of a man that had been killed by the same person Don was after. He made his way up the stairs to see if what they said was true. There over the body was something that made Don not believe his eyes. There was a female ME and she was not old like Frank, she was something that made Don not think of the case for that one moment. She turned around and smiled at Don. She had such beautiful green eyes. She had her hair in a pony tail, she was looking at the face of the man. "I tell you this, it was a woman because she left one of her nails behind in this guys neck." Don could not say a word, he just looked at the body. He was just overtaken back by the beauty of this lady. "So we have a woman out there killing guys. Don knew that this was the one that killed his buddy. There was the same marks that he had on his neck.
Before he could say one word or think of something a call came in. It was about the killer. They found her in a local motel. The bad news to Don was she had shot herself. It was the one thing that kept Don going that he would be able to kill this woman. Britt, the ME, put her arm around Don. it was the first good feeling hat he had in so long. he had been running on hate for so long. He just stood there for a moment, then he pulled Britt into himself and kissed her. It just felt so right he did not want to let her go, so they went out for coffee and talked. He knew by the end of the night that Britt was the one for him. Out of all this something great came, a women named Britt.
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