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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Science Fiction
  • Subject: Comedy / Humor
  • Published: 07/28/2013

Abandoned!

By David Ivanko
Born 1963, M, United States
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Abandoned!

I lay here staring at the ceiling, life slowly draining from me.
My sight becomes blurry, sounds get fuzzy.
My memory is going, the more I think the weaker I become.

I don't want it to end! Not like this.

I hate this, I hate this!

Why have I been left to such a fate? What have I done wrong?

I try calling out, but it is no use, not enough power.

Is this how I'm going to die?

Alone! So *** ***** alone!

Please........ help...

-----------------------

"Honey don't forget to recharge your cell phone before we go."

"Right dear, just going to go do that."

-----------------------

I'm alive!

I feel the current passing through my being!

My vision is coming back! My memory is returning.

That son of a b***h!

Leave me here to just die!
Forget to plug me in! The B*****d!

I'll show him! How about a nice call to Bangladesh?
Or a few short calls to the girl in his office after hours, let him explain that!

Leave me for dead.... why I'll get even.... B*****d!


END
David Ivanko

Abandoned!(David Ivanko) Abandoned!

I lay here staring at the ceiling, life slowly draining from me.
My sight becomes blurry, sounds get fuzzy.
My memory is going, the more I think the weaker I become.

I don't want it to end! Not like this.

I hate this, I hate this!

Why have I been left to such a fate? What have I done wrong?

I try calling out, but it is no use, not enough power.

Is this how I'm going to die?

Alone! So *** ***** alone!

Please........ help...

-----------------------

"Honey don't forget to recharge your cell phone before we go."

"Right dear, just going to go do that."

-----------------------

I'm alive!

I feel the current passing through my being!

My vision is coming back! My memory is returning.

That son of a b***h!

Leave me here to just die!
Forget to plug me in! The B*****d!

I'll show him! How about a nice call to Bangladesh?
Or a few short calls to the girl in his office after hours, let him explain that!

Leave me for dead.... why I'll get even.... B*****d!


END
David Ivanko

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