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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Adventure
  • Published: 08/02/2013

The perfect love

By Simona Girgova
Born 1999, F, from Leeds, United Kingdom
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The perfect love
It was seventy-five degrees in Miami. Jesse felt really warm, she saw the sky was perfect cloudless blue, tasted warm mineral water, smelt sweaty bodies and she heard splish, splash, splosh, the sounds of the waves. Jesse lived only a few blocks away from the beach. Jesse loved Miami. She loved the sun and the blistering heat. She loved the vigorous, sprawling city. Jesse wished for a car, although her dad didn't permit it for her, he was too afraid. Never the less, jesse had a best friend and so she didn't have to drive with comical, yellow school bus.

Lucy has a porche, the best car in school - she loves fast rides. Lucy drove jesse to Highland University, with the windows rolled down. Jesse wore her favourite shirt-sleeve-less, white eyelet lace; She wore it as a farewall gesture. When lucy rode she turned on her favourite mix and while she rode she sang. Jesse looked up at the meter and felt dizzy. ''Slow down lucy!'' The music was too loud and she had no choice so she screamed into her ear. Frightenedly, lucy slowed down. When they passed through the gates everyone stared at them like wild animals. Although when lucy and jesse stepped out of the car they ignored them and walked towards their lessons. However, The distance between them was a few kilometres away. lucy forgot to wish her good luck - It's a part of their friendship. Lucy shouted ''jesse!'' The last of 3 times. Jesse anxiously ran and tightly hugged her ''good luck'' Lucy assured.

Lucy looks like jesse except with short hair and hyper laugh lines. ''you too'' jesse required. Sprintedly, Jesse ran to her lesson accusing she will be late. Unbreathably, she got to her lesson on time. She scrouched down into her seat. After all that ride and running she was restless. She was nervous and impatient. Thankfully, Mr. Brook started class at that moment. Jesse tried to concentrate as he explained the mathematical key skills test. Silently, they should answer all the questions as partners and they weren't aloud to ask for help. ''Get started'' Mr. Brook commanded. Suddenly, someone gently touched the handle and opened the door quietly. It was a fashionate, charming, sensitive and strong-willed boy. His eyes glittered like diamonds and jesse felt completely in love with him.
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