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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 10/15/2013
The end of revenge
Born 1991, F, from Kajang, MalaysiaThe old witch is standing in front of his summoning area. He is satisfied with his witchcraft that he has created to summon the dark being.
He then looks behind him, satisfied with his prize that he worked for.
With everything that is ready, he takes a deep breath and shouts "come forth! Dark lord Azela!"
The floor is shaken, changing its dimension into darkness that releases the dark being that has been waiting to emerge. The cold sweat comes out from his bald head, seeing his summoning witchcraft is a success.
Now the dark lord has come out, ready to listen to his reason to awake him from his slumber.
"I have summoned you to listen to my request! Your prize is here!" and he turned his back and took a few steps to get his prize.
The dark lord focuses both of his eyes to look upon the prize he brought, the girl, chained, without any expression to tell from her figure.
"Listen dark lord! I have brought you the fallen princess Vassillia, who is the daughter of the King Belius, the man who my previous lord, Cantel, you give power to answer his wish to kill and take over his country!"
And the dark lord fixed his look at the girl who still had not changed his expression. His instinct tells him that there is something more than this.
"Therefore! I will give you-"
"My country."
"Huh!?" The old witch turned his face toward the girl with a surprised face. He can't believe what he has heard.
"In return for fulfilling my revenge, I will give you my country that has caused all this anger of my heart."
"What nonsense are you trying to-"
"I accept."
And he takes a sword from his dimension and gives a quick slash to the old witch without even giving him a blink. The blood splatters around, and his body falls apart and falls from such a quick attack.
She feels afraid after seeing such power. Still, she keeps her gaze to hold on to her determination.
He then destroys the chain that binds her. Now her hands are free.
"My lady," And she looks back at him.
"In return for fulfilling your wish, I asked you to fulfill my wish later." and he kneels down before her and takes her right hand and kissed it.
Determined with her choice, she answers "I accept it."
.......................................................................
The dawn has come, and the daylight shines on the land and chases away the darkness of the night.
However, today the night does not go away, as thousands of soldiers and monsters commanded by the Dark Lord Azela fly and swarm the land to annihilate the inhabitants.
.......................................................................
"Wah!"
"HELP!!"
"KYAA!!"
Shouts the people as they are attacked and run away from the monsters.
"ROOAAARRR!!!" A cry from a fire dragon shakes the city as it flies.
"Goodness!!" Shouts one of the wounded soldiers. "THAT DRAGON IS TRYING TO INVADE THE CASTLE!!"
Inside the castle, the knights run toward the king in his chamber "MY KING!!"
"Knights! What is that thundering sound!?" Said he as he is just putting on his clothes.
"A dragon tries to fly to the castle!"
"WHAT!? Nonsense! There are many barriers, there's no way that can be happening!"
"It's not just a dragon, a thousand monsters are coming and attacking this country..."
"Nonsense!" and he walks to his main hall throne.
"Where are you going my king?" asks the knight as he follows him.
"Where? I want to see it with my own eyes, FOOLS!"
"No your majesty! We have to run right now!!"
But it’s too late.
CRASH!!! The roof is falling down, and the dragon is falling together with it.
"NGAUUUMMM!!!" The dragon cries very hard as it landed safely.
"KNIGHTS!!" shout the men. "PROTECT THE KING!!!" and they form a barrier to protect the king.
As they shield and watch the dragon, the dragon looks at them while lowering its head. A person comes out after riding the dragon.
"!!It's Princess Vassilia!"
"No way!"
"How can that be!?"
The knights are in awe as they can't believe what they see.
The king, however, has a very angry look as he now knows what has really happened.
"KNIGHTS!!!" Shouts the king, "Kill that woman! That is a witch using the princess's face trying to lower your guard!!"
Hearing the king's order, they raise their swords and attack her all at once.
"OOOHHH!!!" And here they come swinging their swords as high and might to finish this witch only to be attacked with strong fire magic cast by the witch.
The strong army of knights are now fallen with flames and ashes, leaving the king, alone, shaking in fear.
"I..." He now has a very frightening look as he knows his ending "I WON'T LET IT END LIKE THIS!!!" and he cast a very strong thunder magic and attacked her with all his might. "DIE YOU WITCH!!!"
"No." She holds the magic thunder in her hands. "It is you who will die." She holds his head with the magic, giving him the very strong shock that he never imagined. He moans and struggles until the magic is gone and he has burned to crisp.
At the same time, a loud shout coming from far away makes her to turn around to see the person who shouts. She releases her hand and he runs toward the king and cries as he is holding the dead body.
It is a young prince, who grieves the death of his father who died in a very terrible way. Seeing him, she is reminded of herself, who also grieves her father's death, and was taken by the men who killed her father and offered as a sacrifice.
Thus she made a decision not to end another poor life who has the same tragedy as her. She gives him her back and walks away with a satisfaction in her heart as she believes she has done her revenge.
SLASH!!! A deep slashing cut has been heard.
She turned around to see The Dark Lord Azela has slain the young prince without any mercy!
"Dark Lord Azela! Why did you end his life?! My revenge has ended!"
"You have said that your anger is caused by this country, not by this man."
"But you don't have to end his life."
"Are you trying to change our promise?"
Shocked by his word, she realizes she has done something that cannot be changed.
"Once the contract has been made, one shall never change the agreement or face its consequences."
CRASH!! The wall of the main throne has been destroyed, making the outside world visible.
And she cannot believe what she is seeing. Outside, there is no living being that is saved except the monsters who are waiting for their commands. Seeing this, there is no doubt that the country now has no human being that lived.
"I have fulfilled your wish, now it is time for my wish." and he reached his hand toward her. "Be my queen, my lady."
Seeing his hand, she now realizes the consequences of her action has totally annihilated everything just as she had wished for. She has now become the monster who is feared and hated by mankind. Thus, she made her choice.
She holds his hand and says "I accept it."
The end of revenge(talesaga)
The old witch is standing in front of his summoning area. He is satisfied with his witchcraft that he has created to summon the dark being.
He then looks behind him, satisfied with his prize that he worked for.
With everything that is ready, he takes a deep breath and shouts "come forth! Dark lord Azela!"
The floor is shaken, changing its dimension into darkness that releases the dark being that has been waiting to emerge. The cold sweat comes out from his bald head, seeing his summoning witchcraft is a success.
Now the dark lord has come out, ready to listen to his reason to awake him from his slumber.
"I have summoned you to listen to my request! Your prize is here!" and he turned his back and took a few steps to get his prize.
The dark lord focuses both of his eyes to look upon the prize he brought, the girl, chained, without any expression to tell from her figure.
"Listen dark lord! I have brought you the fallen princess Vassillia, who is the daughter of the King Belius, the man who my previous lord, Cantel, you give power to answer his wish to kill and take over his country!"
And the dark lord fixed his look at the girl who still had not changed his expression. His instinct tells him that there is something more than this.
"Therefore! I will give you-"
"My country."
"Huh!?" The old witch turned his face toward the girl with a surprised face. He can't believe what he has heard.
"In return for fulfilling my revenge, I will give you my country that has caused all this anger of my heart."
"What nonsense are you trying to-"
"I accept."
And he takes a sword from his dimension and gives a quick slash to the old witch without even giving him a blink. The blood splatters around, and his body falls apart and falls from such a quick attack.
She feels afraid after seeing such power. Still, she keeps her gaze to hold on to her determination.
He then destroys the chain that binds her. Now her hands are free.
"My lady," And she looks back at him.
"In return for fulfilling your wish, I asked you to fulfill my wish later." and he kneels down before her and takes her right hand and kissed it.
Determined with her choice, she answers "I accept it."
.......................................................................
The dawn has come, and the daylight shines on the land and chases away the darkness of the night.
However, today the night does not go away, as thousands of soldiers and monsters commanded by the Dark Lord Azela fly and swarm the land to annihilate the inhabitants.
.......................................................................
"Wah!"
"HELP!!"
"KYAA!!"
Shouts the people as they are attacked and run away from the monsters.
"ROOAAARRR!!!" A cry from a fire dragon shakes the city as it flies.
"Goodness!!" Shouts one of the wounded soldiers. "THAT DRAGON IS TRYING TO INVADE THE CASTLE!!"
Inside the castle, the knights run toward the king in his chamber "MY KING!!"
"Knights! What is that thundering sound!?" Said he as he is just putting on his clothes.
"A dragon tries to fly to the castle!"
"WHAT!? Nonsense! There are many barriers, there's no way that can be happening!"
"It's not just a dragon, a thousand monsters are coming and attacking this country..."
"Nonsense!" and he walks to his main hall throne.
"Where are you going my king?" asks the knight as he follows him.
"Where? I want to see it with my own eyes, FOOLS!"
"No your majesty! We have to run right now!!"
But it’s too late.
CRASH!!! The roof is falling down, and the dragon is falling together with it.
"NGAUUUMMM!!!" The dragon cries very hard as it landed safely.
"KNIGHTS!!" shout the men. "PROTECT THE KING!!!" and they form a barrier to protect the king.
As they shield and watch the dragon, the dragon looks at them while lowering its head. A person comes out after riding the dragon.
"!!It's Princess Vassilia!"
"No way!"
"How can that be!?"
The knights are in awe as they can't believe what they see.
The king, however, has a very angry look as he now knows what has really happened.
"KNIGHTS!!!" Shouts the king, "Kill that woman! That is a witch using the princess's face trying to lower your guard!!"
Hearing the king's order, they raise their swords and attack her all at once.
"OOOHHH!!!" And here they come swinging their swords as high and might to finish this witch only to be attacked with strong fire magic cast by the witch.
The strong army of knights are now fallen with flames and ashes, leaving the king, alone, shaking in fear.
"I..." He now has a very frightening look as he knows his ending "I WON'T LET IT END LIKE THIS!!!" and he cast a very strong thunder magic and attacked her with all his might. "DIE YOU WITCH!!!"
"No." She holds the magic thunder in her hands. "It is you who will die." She holds his head with the magic, giving him the very strong shock that he never imagined. He moans and struggles until the magic is gone and he has burned to crisp.
At the same time, a loud shout coming from far away makes her to turn around to see the person who shouts. She releases her hand and he runs toward the king and cries as he is holding the dead body.
It is a young prince, who grieves the death of his father who died in a very terrible way. Seeing him, she is reminded of herself, who also grieves her father's death, and was taken by the men who killed her father and offered as a sacrifice.
Thus she made a decision not to end another poor life who has the same tragedy as her. She gives him her back and walks away with a satisfaction in her heart as she believes she has done her revenge.
SLASH!!! A deep slashing cut has been heard.
She turned around to see The Dark Lord Azela has slain the young prince without any mercy!
"Dark Lord Azela! Why did you end his life?! My revenge has ended!"
"You have said that your anger is caused by this country, not by this man."
"But you don't have to end his life."
"Are you trying to change our promise?"
Shocked by his word, she realizes she has done something that cannot be changed.
"Once the contract has been made, one shall never change the agreement or face its consequences."
CRASH!! The wall of the main throne has been destroyed, making the outside world visible.
And she cannot believe what she is seeing. Outside, there is no living being that is saved except the monsters who are waiting for their commands. Seeing this, there is no doubt that the country now has no human being that lived.
"I have fulfilled your wish, now it is time for my wish." and he reached his hand toward her. "Be my queen, my lady."
Seeing his hand, she now realizes the consequences of her action has totally annihilated everything just as she had wished for. She has now become the monster who is feared and hated by mankind. Thus, she made her choice.
She holds his hand and says "I accept it."
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