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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 11/25/2013
The Outlawed House
Born 2000, F, from UAE Ras Al Khaimah, United Arab EmiratesOnce there was a haunted house in between a dark gloomy forest where no one could be seen. It was a place of terror where people used to avoid passing near to it. Many people were also unaware of the obstacles faced in this forest. As like some people there was a young gang not aware of the unethical forest so they planned to camp in that forest. Their journey went safe but who was aware of the upcomming moment. The forest was surrounded by tall tropical trees, inside the forest were the tortures of different species whom people might not have even heard about. In the centre of the forest there used to sit an owled eye parrot who used to confuse the visitors and always said the wrong way to go. At last in the end of the forest was the most troublesome haunted house where people used to go and never be seen again. At last the cool teen gang arrived at the starting of the forest. they thought they had came to the wrong place but one guy checked the map and said 'Hmmm, Well, we are on the right place as chosen by Susana'. Every one stared at Susana and she was like 'What! I have also visited this place for the frist time, who knew this forest was so creepy'. Alex, chewing buble, spit it out and said 'So shall we go back home'? David passed a smile angrily to Alex and said 'Yes we should go back home and sit in our bedrooms, waste our vacations and then listen to the screams of mom and the cautions of dad, so like this we can enjoy our vication'. Nina 'Guys stop we have not come here to fight lets go inside search some motel or rest house and try to enjoy our trip', is that fine?Yes it is fine. Later all friends took their stuff inside the forest but the forest was really scary. All these 4 friends could hear was the crying voice of cats, and barking of dogs. Alex said 'Guys I'm afraid cannot we go back'? Nina 'No we cannot now SHhhhhhh!' At last the 4 friends reached the middle, saw the talking parrot who was saying to them to go right but actually the right path was the left side. Still the 4 friends divided them selves into 2 each and went on both ways in middle of the forest. those friends could again hear the voices of those animals whom they could hear at the start. at last on the right side 2 of the friends found that haunted house where some poor people were trapped. At that very moment a trap came from the roof and also captured those 2 friends. suddenly they started screaming and then the friends who who were on the left side called the cops and rushed towards the right side. Luckily after a few minutes the police arrived because they were already on rounds on the check post which was near to this forest. They came and rushed towards the right side. At last they saved those 4 friends and the rest of all those poor people who were trapped in that creepy house. Later the police did the inspection of that hunted house and forest and came to know that all this property belongs to a very rich man who is very greedy and also wants to grab the little village near to this forest which belongs to the poor. At last the sharp cop found that person, jailed him for life time. But also did the inspection of those following animals so they came to know that these animals, the parrot among them, were specially trained for all this act they perform. Exactly from that very day everything was fine, the 4 friends could enjoy their trip, the poor could visit the forest with their families and anyone could come there any time. But still it was observed by some people that still they feel that one eye watches them.
The Outlawed House(Maryam Akbar) Once there was a haunted house in between a dark gloomy forest where no one could be seen. It was a place of terror where people used to avoid passing near to it. Many people were also unaware of the obstacles faced in this forest. As like some people there was a young gang not aware of the unethical forest so they planned to camp in that forest. Their journey went safe but who was aware of the upcomming moment. The forest was surrounded by tall tropical trees, inside the forest were the tortures of different species whom people might not have even heard about. In the centre of the forest there used to sit an owled eye parrot who used to confuse the visitors and always said the wrong way to go. At last in the end of the forest was the most troublesome haunted house where people used to go and never be seen again. At last the cool teen gang arrived at the starting of the forest. they thought they had came to the wrong place but one guy checked the map and said 'Hmmm, Well, we are on the right place as chosen by Susana'. Every one stared at Susana and she was like 'What! I have also visited this place for the frist time, who knew this forest was so creepy'. Alex, chewing buble, spit it out and said 'So shall we go back home'? David passed a smile angrily to Alex and said 'Yes we should go back home and sit in our bedrooms, waste our vacations and then listen to the screams of mom and the cautions of dad, so like this we can enjoy our vication'. Nina 'Guys stop we have not come here to fight lets go inside search some motel or rest house and try to enjoy our trip', is that fine?Yes it is fine. Later all friends took their stuff inside the forest but the forest was really scary. All these 4 friends could hear was the crying voice of cats, and barking of dogs. Alex said 'Guys I'm afraid cannot we go back'? Nina 'No we cannot now SHhhhhhh!' At last the 4 friends reached the middle, saw the talking parrot who was saying to them to go right but actually the right path was the left side. Still the 4 friends divided them selves into 2 each and went on both ways in middle of the forest. those friends could again hear the voices of those animals whom they could hear at the start. at last on the right side 2 of the friends found that haunted house where some poor people were trapped. At that very moment a trap came from the roof and also captured those 2 friends. suddenly they started screaming and then the friends who who were on the left side called the cops and rushed towards the right side. Luckily after a few minutes the police arrived because they were already on rounds on the check post which was near to this forest. They came and rushed towards the right side. At last they saved those 4 friends and the rest of all those poor people who were trapped in that creepy house. Later the police did the inspection of that hunted house and forest and came to know that all this property belongs to a very rich man who is very greedy and also wants to grab the little village near to this forest which belongs to the poor. At last the sharp cop found that person, jailed him for life time. But also did the inspection of those following animals so they came to know that these animals, the parrot among them, were specially trained for all this act they perform. Exactly from that very day everything was fine, the 4 friends could enjoy their trip, the poor could visit the forest with their families and anyone could come there any time. But still it was observed by some people that still they feel that one eye watches them.
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