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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 11/29/2013
Jack's Dream Adventure!
Born 2003, M, from London, United KingdomJack’s Dream Adventure!
On a grey and stormy night, Jack wakes up in the middle of the night. He was frightened by his bad dream that he was being chased by a humongous, green and creepy monster. He watched the stars as they lighted up. Jack was shivering cold as he sat near the glass window. He decided he would go downstairs to watch TV as quietly as he could. Later on that night, Jack was sitting on the sofa at his living room as he was slowly about to go to sleep. He didn’t want to go to sleep so he tried his best to do anything to keep him awake. After a while he decided he will go to sleep and wake up in the morning. He drifted off to sleep he imagined he was in a castle as a king called King Jack. King Jack sat on a gold throne and was protected by armoured guards with silver helmet, gold swords, hard body armour and a sharp dagger. King Jack got off his throne and walked around his huge brick castle. He went into his room and found a treasure box that was locked. King Jack looked through all his shelves and drawers. after a long while he found the missing key and opened the gold treasure box. He was amazed to see many gold coins and silver coins. Under a gold coin there was another key which was a shape of a huge treasure box. King Jack was getting happy and joyful on this amazing quest. King Jack walked bravely out of his chamber and gazed at the paintings as he walked out cheerfully. Many guards stood in order as they all saluted. King Jack was accompanied by 5 silver guards that wore silver helmets, gold armour, hard boots and had strapped in a sharp dagger on to their side. King Jack ran down a flight of stairs, as he looked far beyond a snowy mountain miles and miles away. King Jack thought it was a vision. he looked again and saw the same thing. King Jack was absolutely sure he would go there. he went inside the castle and went to the top. When King Jack was finally there he was exhausted. He looked into the telescope enjoying the view. suddenly he sees 10 men approaching the castle. He runs down again and King Jack finds them talking to guards. he walks up to them and the stranger tells him he is an assistant of another king just 49 miles away. King Jack was surprised, he thought he was the only King of the huge land. The assistants told them the king’s name was called King Smith. he was a wealthy man and he wanted a private meeting with King Jack. King Jack was confused, also he didn’t know what to do... Later on that day, King Jack decided he would ride a strong horse there accompanied with other big guards. They were finally there. they were welcomed by other people who were known as the kings servant. They found King Smith sitting on his throne waiting for King Jack. they told the guards to go outside. King Jack was afraid it might be a trap. After the guards walked out King Smith told King Jack he needed more land, lots of animals and people were dying out with not allot of space for houses or shops. King Jack was out of space and didn’t have space too. King Smith looked at a map that showed every piece of land everywhere. he showed him there was a big load of space in the middle that nobody owned. They looked at each other. King Jack quickly said “There is no need for war, we can do a game to see who wins instead!” King Smith replied “Sure, may the best person win.”
The Next Day, They were at King Jack’s castle. there was all guards at the main door so nobody could be trespassing. The Kings looked at each other clicking their fingers and sweating. King Jack rolled a dice and it went on 4. It was King Smiths turn as he swiped his sweat off his forehead and rolled the dice they were amazed as it went on 4. They were getting more confident as they called it a draw. All night they kept playing, playing and playing but every time it was a draw. The Kings were getting angry and mad and wanted to get the huge piece of land. They calmed down and they were now definite they wanted a war in 2 days. After 2 days... It was the war day against King Smith. they started off fighting in the middle of the land they both wanted forever. They looked at each other as the guards charged against King Smith’s guards and clashed. after the war finished people were injured, some survived, some died. There were lots of people everywhere on the floor mostly injured. The 2 kings were upset as they looked at all of the people. King Jack walked up to King Smith slowly. King Jack asked “It would be better not to fight and share the land.” King Smith hesitated for a moment and shouted, that’s a great idea! The Guards helped each other up including King Smith’s guards. Medic Guards arrived dashing out of the castle to help with other equipment like bandages, water and beds. The Two Kings Watched Proudly as the guards helped each other up.
After a long moment, Jack finds himself on the sofa with the T.V on. He smiled and woke up happy.
By: Shakil Ahmed
Jack's Dream Adventure!(Shakil Ahmed)
Jack’s Dream Adventure!
On a grey and stormy night, Jack wakes up in the middle of the night. He was frightened by his bad dream that he was being chased by a humongous, green and creepy monster. He watched the stars as they lighted up. Jack was shivering cold as he sat near the glass window. He decided he would go downstairs to watch TV as quietly as he could. Later on that night, Jack was sitting on the sofa at his living room as he was slowly about to go to sleep. He didn’t want to go to sleep so he tried his best to do anything to keep him awake. After a while he decided he will go to sleep and wake up in the morning. He drifted off to sleep he imagined he was in a castle as a king called King Jack. King Jack sat on a gold throne and was protected by armoured guards with silver helmet, gold swords, hard body armour and a sharp dagger. King Jack got off his throne and walked around his huge brick castle. He went into his room and found a treasure box that was locked. King Jack looked through all his shelves and drawers. after a long while he found the missing key and opened the gold treasure box. He was amazed to see many gold coins and silver coins. Under a gold coin there was another key which was a shape of a huge treasure box. King Jack was getting happy and joyful on this amazing quest. King Jack walked bravely out of his chamber and gazed at the paintings as he walked out cheerfully. Many guards stood in order as they all saluted. King Jack was accompanied by 5 silver guards that wore silver helmets, gold armour, hard boots and had strapped in a sharp dagger on to their side. King Jack ran down a flight of stairs, as he looked far beyond a snowy mountain miles and miles away. King Jack thought it was a vision. he looked again and saw the same thing. King Jack was absolutely sure he would go there. he went inside the castle and went to the top. When King Jack was finally there he was exhausted. He looked into the telescope enjoying the view. suddenly he sees 10 men approaching the castle. He runs down again and King Jack finds them talking to guards. he walks up to them and the stranger tells him he is an assistant of another king just 49 miles away. King Jack was surprised, he thought he was the only King of the huge land. The assistants told them the king’s name was called King Smith. he was a wealthy man and he wanted a private meeting with King Jack. King Jack was confused, also he didn’t know what to do... Later on that day, King Jack decided he would ride a strong horse there accompanied with other big guards. They were finally there. they were welcomed by other people who were known as the kings servant. They found King Smith sitting on his throne waiting for King Jack. they told the guards to go outside. King Jack was afraid it might be a trap. After the guards walked out King Smith told King Jack he needed more land, lots of animals and people were dying out with not allot of space for houses or shops. King Jack was out of space and didn’t have space too. King Smith looked at a map that showed every piece of land everywhere. he showed him there was a big load of space in the middle that nobody owned. They looked at each other. King Jack quickly said “There is no need for war, we can do a game to see who wins instead!” King Smith replied “Sure, may the best person win.”
The Next Day, They were at King Jack’s castle. there was all guards at the main door so nobody could be trespassing. The Kings looked at each other clicking their fingers and sweating. King Jack rolled a dice and it went on 4. It was King Smiths turn as he swiped his sweat off his forehead and rolled the dice they were amazed as it went on 4. They were getting more confident as they called it a draw. All night they kept playing, playing and playing but every time it was a draw. The Kings were getting angry and mad and wanted to get the huge piece of land. They calmed down and they were now definite they wanted a war in 2 days. After 2 days... It was the war day against King Smith. they started off fighting in the middle of the land they both wanted forever. They looked at each other as the guards charged against King Smith’s guards and clashed. after the war finished people were injured, some survived, some died. There were lots of people everywhere on the floor mostly injured. The 2 kings were upset as they looked at all of the people. King Jack walked up to King Smith slowly. King Jack asked “It would be better not to fight and share the land.” King Smith hesitated for a moment and shouted, that’s a great idea! The Guards helped each other up including King Smith’s guards. Medic Guards arrived dashing out of the castle to help with other equipment like bandages, water and beds. The Two Kings Watched Proudly as the guards helped each other up.
After a long moment, Jack finds himself on the sofa with the T.V on. He smiled and woke up happy.
By: Shakil Ahmed
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