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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 11/29/2013
Station 13
Born 2003, M, from London, United KingdomStation 13
On a fine afternoon, Tom, who is 18, finds a folder on his front door and is very confused. he walks up to it and examines it carefully. He reads the Title which says “READ ON FOR EXCITING THINGS.” He opens to the next page and was very excited to see a picture of a real castle. he looked away from the picture and saw more text which said “If you visit this castle you get to live in it for free and have £10000 too.” Tom thought it was fake, also a scam, but then he realised there was another page, which he turned over, and he was surprised to see a map to the place. He thought to himself and told himself just to check the place out, if there was anything there. Later on, he was at his car and drove to the location. the place was full of hay sticks on the floor scattered around everywhere. He got out of his car and looked around, cautiously he crept onwards. Suddenly, 5 Black vans drove in surrounding him. Sweat fell from his head dripping onto the floor; his mouth was full open he was shivering with fear. The vans were called LIVE, he knew that van from somewhere else. 10 men with pistols opened the van doors and came out. Tom starting to get really scared, he asked them, who are you? They replied “We are called LIVE, a fake advertising group, NOW GET IN THE VAN!” Tom's eyes went wide open and bravely he said “No Way!” He turned around and was going to run. suddenly, a man wearing a suit and holding a briefcase punches him across the face. Tom falls on the floor and his mind goes black.
Later on that day, at 5pm, he wakes up in a white room with a bruised forehead. he holds his forehead with his hand. He feels dizzy and falls on a table. he finds a poster that says LIVE. He concentrates on the poster trying to find ways to escape. he was scared, cold and isolated. Horrified, he turns the paper around and he figures out LIVE backwards spells EVIL. Tom bellowed for help and a guard opens the door to his cell and tells him to be quiet. It was 6 PM he was sitting on the white plain floor thinking of ways to get back home and how to stop them with their evil plan. Suddenly, he had a fantastic idea. he stood up and found a broken pipe next to the door of his cell. He picked it up then he started banging and kicking on the door so a guard could come. An armoured guard appeared at the door of his cell with a big gun. The guard came in and was going to punch him then Tom quickly stopped him and hit him with the pipe. The guard fell on the floor and the pipe broke, it made a big noise. Tom was scared as he slowly crept out of his cell he heard a guard sprinting towards his cell. He quickly went into another room. he watched as the guard ran into his cell. Tom quickly closed the cell door and locked him inside. Tom was proud and was ready to stop their evil plan and get out of this place. 10 men with suits ran into the main entrance of the base and the alarm went off. Lots of guards ran through a hallway as red flashes indicated there was an intruder. the guards shouted STOP to the men in suits.
It was 9pm at night and Tom was terrified as the guards looked in room to room to search for the intruder. Tom ran to the Exit but it was locked, he didn’t know what to do. A man in a suit who was hiding whispered to him to come to him. Tom cautiously crept past a guard Unaware, the guard saw him and grabbed Tom. Another man in a suit called the guards name and ran. the guard dropped Tom onto the floor and dashed for the intruder. Tom quickly rushed to the man hiding in the room. The man asked “Who are you? I’m a secret agent and what are you doing here?” Tom replied sadly “I got tricked and they surrounded me and told me to get in the van then I refused then one of the men punched me and I woke up and found myself here.” The secret agent inquired Tom to stay with him. Tom and the secret agent ran into a danger room when being chased by a huge guard. The room was full of shelves that had mysterious machines on them. They looked around suspiciously and found a closet which was full of guard suits. They had a brilliant idea... After a long while, they were suited up with armour and their plan was to go undercover and find the keys for the control room and open the exit. They were disguised as guard while they walked along the scary, dark and long hallway. A captain walked past them and suspiciously looked at them, he told them to open their helmets to see their faces. They were frightened, they looked around and found a room, it said Locker room, they were certain it was inside there. They told the captain that they would be back in one minute. The captain watched them closely as they went into the Locker room and found the keys. The secret agent tricked the captain that there was something behind him and they ran towards the control room with the keys. They were amazed and happy; they went into the control room. Suddenly, all the electricity went off and the buttons in the control room stopped working instantly. They concentrated on a manual of the control room. Tom found a page for electricity backup. he was impressed. he pulled a lever and everything lighted up again. Unaware, there was a guard behind them with a pistol, the secret agent saw the guard then he quickly elbowed the guard in the face. Tom rapidly pressed the emergency exit button and the huge door opened up. they were excited. they exited the control room and went outside.
It was 2 PM at night as owls howled and dogs barked. Helicopters appeared, shining spotlights on them. Five police vehicles appeared and he told them everything that happened. they went inside, but they never came out. The helicopters and cars chased them down the streets.
Station 13(Shakil Ahmed)
Station 13
On a fine afternoon, Tom, who is 18, finds a folder on his front door and is very confused. he walks up to it and examines it carefully. He reads the Title which says “READ ON FOR EXCITING THINGS.” He opens to the next page and was very excited to see a picture of a real castle. he looked away from the picture and saw more text which said “If you visit this castle you get to live in it for free and have £10000 too.” Tom thought it was fake, also a scam, but then he realised there was another page, which he turned over, and he was surprised to see a map to the place. He thought to himself and told himself just to check the place out, if there was anything there. Later on, he was at his car and drove to the location. the place was full of hay sticks on the floor scattered around everywhere. He got out of his car and looked around, cautiously he crept onwards. Suddenly, 5 Black vans drove in surrounding him. Sweat fell from his head dripping onto the floor; his mouth was full open he was shivering with fear. The vans were called LIVE, he knew that van from somewhere else. 10 men with pistols opened the van doors and came out. Tom starting to get really scared, he asked them, who are you? They replied “We are called LIVE, a fake advertising group, NOW GET IN THE VAN!” Tom's eyes went wide open and bravely he said “No Way!” He turned around and was going to run. suddenly, a man wearing a suit and holding a briefcase punches him across the face. Tom falls on the floor and his mind goes black.
Later on that day, at 5pm, he wakes up in a white room with a bruised forehead. he holds his forehead with his hand. He feels dizzy and falls on a table. he finds a poster that says LIVE. He concentrates on the poster trying to find ways to escape. he was scared, cold and isolated. Horrified, he turns the paper around and he figures out LIVE backwards spells EVIL. Tom bellowed for help and a guard opens the door to his cell and tells him to be quiet. It was 6 PM he was sitting on the white plain floor thinking of ways to get back home and how to stop them with their evil plan. Suddenly, he had a fantastic idea. he stood up and found a broken pipe next to the door of his cell. He picked it up then he started banging and kicking on the door so a guard could come. An armoured guard appeared at the door of his cell with a big gun. The guard came in and was going to punch him then Tom quickly stopped him and hit him with the pipe. The guard fell on the floor and the pipe broke, it made a big noise. Tom was scared as he slowly crept out of his cell he heard a guard sprinting towards his cell. He quickly went into another room. he watched as the guard ran into his cell. Tom quickly closed the cell door and locked him inside. Tom was proud and was ready to stop their evil plan and get out of this place. 10 men with suits ran into the main entrance of the base and the alarm went off. Lots of guards ran through a hallway as red flashes indicated there was an intruder. the guards shouted STOP to the men in suits.
It was 9pm at night and Tom was terrified as the guards looked in room to room to search for the intruder. Tom ran to the Exit but it was locked, he didn’t know what to do. A man in a suit who was hiding whispered to him to come to him. Tom cautiously crept past a guard Unaware, the guard saw him and grabbed Tom. Another man in a suit called the guards name and ran. the guard dropped Tom onto the floor and dashed for the intruder. Tom quickly rushed to the man hiding in the room. The man asked “Who are you? I’m a secret agent and what are you doing here?” Tom replied sadly “I got tricked and they surrounded me and told me to get in the van then I refused then one of the men punched me and I woke up and found myself here.” The secret agent inquired Tom to stay with him. Tom and the secret agent ran into a danger room when being chased by a huge guard. The room was full of shelves that had mysterious machines on them. They looked around suspiciously and found a closet which was full of guard suits. They had a brilliant idea... After a long while, they were suited up with armour and their plan was to go undercover and find the keys for the control room and open the exit. They were disguised as guard while they walked along the scary, dark and long hallway. A captain walked past them and suspiciously looked at them, he told them to open their helmets to see their faces. They were frightened, they looked around and found a room, it said Locker room, they were certain it was inside there. They told the captain that they would be back in one minute. The captain watched them closely as they went into the Locker room and found the keys. The secret agent tricked the captain that there was something behind him and they ran towards the control room with the keys. They were amazed and happy; they went into the control room. Suddenly, all the electricity went off and the buttons in the control room stopped working instantly. They concentrated on a manual of the control room. Tom found a page for electricity backup. he was impressed. he pulled a lever and everything lighted up again. Unaware, there was a guard behind them with a pistol, the secret agent saw the guard then he quickly elbowed the guard in the face. Tom rapidly pressed the emergency exit button and the huge door opened up. they were excited. they exited the control room and went outside.
It was 2 PM at night as owls howled and dogs barked. Helicopters appeared, shining spotlights on them. Five police vehicles appeared and he told them everything that happened. they went inside, but they never came out. The helicopters and cars chased them down the streets.
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