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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 01/20/2014
The Giant
There was once a boy named John who wanted to go on a trip with his sister named Bella.They were going to Springfield for a vacation from a tiring job of working for a very long time. When they were driving on the road, there was a strange creature that appeared on front John stepped at the brakes to avoid hitting it, but then the car flipped and they crashed. The creature took Bella while John remained unconscious.
John said. "Oh no, where did Bella go? She's gone, mom is gonna kill me.
John took his phone and called his friend.
John said."Bryan!"
Bryan replied."What is it? its early in the morning."
"Someone took Bella", John answered.
Bryan said, "Alright I'll go come for you don't go anywhere"
John replied, "okay but hurry maybe someone might take me too."
Bryan Change his clothes as fast as he could and went to his car to go pick up John.
"Hey Bryan! Over here",John shouted.
"Get in the car", Bryan said.
John went inside the car of Bryan and drove going back to the house of John.
Bryan said, "You could not even take care of your own sister"
"I didn't know what happened okay, something just appeared then I stepped on the brakes but the car flipped", John replied.
Bryan asked, "So, how are we going to find her ?
"I'm going to find her, but I'm going to need you and Sandy's help", John answered.
"Alright let's go ask for her help", John said.
"Well, let's get going then", Bryan replied.
They went to the apartment of Sandy and knocked on her door.
"Hey Sandy we need your help!", John shouted.
"I'm busy, leave me alone", Sandy replied.
"But I really need your help, my sister as gone missing".John said with a depressed voice.
Sandy felt pity for John so she went out of her apartment and helped him.
"Thank you Sandy, I owe you one", John said.
"Don't mention it, let's just stick with finding your sister". Sandy replied.
They went to a restaurant and talked about what they are going to do.
"So, what are you gonna do John", Bryan said.
"We need to go back to the place where we crashed with Bella" John replied.
They went to the road going to Springfield and arrived in the place where they crashed.
"Okay, we are here", John said.
"Let's go look for clues", Bryan said.
When they were searching for clues, John saw some large footprints that like it came from a giant dog.
"Hey guys, take a look at this", John said.
"Oh my goodness, are those real footprints?" Sandy said with a shocking look on her face.
"I guess those are real, and they are really big" Bryan replied.
Sandy said, "was it and elephant that appeared in front of you before the crash?"
"No, there are no elephants here", John replied.
They all went to the house of Bryan and looked for some things that they can use.
"Why don't you try to call the police?", Sandy said.
"Do you even think that someone would believe in what we saw", John answered.
"Hey guys",Bryan said.
"What?", John and Sandy replied.
"Do you still remember the the weapons that my dad used to show us?" Bryan asked.
"Yeah, why?" John replied.
"Why don't we use them?" Bryan asked.
"Okay, lets use them." Sandy answered.
Sandy took a knife,Bryan took an axe and a rifle, and John took a rapier. They went on a journey to go find Bella. They came prepared but were still afraid because they did not know what the creature looked like.
They went to the place where they saw the footprints. The Giant was walking going to a cave and they were all afraid. Suddenly an old woman who wore a black dress and a black hood appeared in front of them, they were very afraid of the old woman.
"Go back, it isn't safe here", The old woman said with a whispering voice.
"Why?" John asked.
"It lives here, get away while you still have a chance", The old woman replied.
"No we won't", John said.
"Well then, good luck" The old woman replied with a giggling voice.
They saw a big cave with skeletons around. They were very afraid that they remained speechless when they saw it. They went inside the cave with slow steps.
"We are finally here, let us wish ourselves good luck", John said.
"Let's Promise each other that no one dies.", Sandy said emotionally.
They fought the Giant with all the strength they had. They never gave up until the Giant was down on its knees.Finally they did it, the Giant went down on it's knees then Bryan pointed the rifle at its head and shot it.
"The Giant is dead, I can't believe we really killed it", John said.
"You saw what I did there, I shot its head, can you believe it", Bryan said.
Sandy saw Bella on chained to the wall. Sandy removed the chains and hugged her.
"We are all glad that you are alive Bella", Sandy said .
They brought Bella to the hospital for treatment. Bella recovered after three months and they all were happy in the end. John had tears of joy to see her sister in fine condition.
THE GIANT(Richard McStewart)
The Giant
There was once a boy named John who wanted to go on a trip with his sister named Bella.They were going to Springfield for a vacation from a tiring job of working for a very long time. When they were driving on the road, there was a strange creature that appeared on front John stepped at the brakes to avoid hitting it, but then the car flipped and they crashed. The creature took Bella while John remained unconscious.
John said. "Oh no, where did Bella go? She's gone, mom is gonna kill me.
John took his phone and called his friend.
John said."Bryan!"
Bryan replied."What is it? its early in the morning."
"Someone took Bella", John answered.
Bryan said, "Alright I'll go come for you don't go anywhere"
John replied, "okay but hurry maybe someone might take me too."
Bryan Change his clothes as fast as he could and went to his car to go pick up John.
"Hey Bryan! Over here",John shouted.
"Get in the car", Bryan said.
John went inside the car of Bryan and drove going back to the house of John.
Bryan said, "You could not even take care of your own sister"
"I didn't know what happened okay, something just appeared then I stepped on the brakes but the car flipped", John replied.
Bryan asked, "So, how are we going to find her ?
"I'm going to find her, but I'm going to need you and Sandy's help", John answered.
"Alright let's go ask for her help", John said.
"Well, let's get going then", Bryan replied.
They went to the apartment of Sandy and knocked on her door.
"Hey Sandy we need your help!", John shouted.
"I'm busy, leave me alone", Sandy replied.
"But I really need your help, my sister as gone missing".John said with a depressed voice.
Sandy felt pity for John so she went out of her apartment and helped him.
"Thank you Sandy, I owe you one", John said.
"Don't mention it, let's just stick with finding your sister". Sandy replied.
They went to a restaurant and talked about what they are going to do.
"So, what are you gonna do John", Bryan said.
"We need to go back to the place where we crashed with Bella" John replied.
They went to the road going to Springfield and arrived in the place where they crashed.
"Okay, we are here", John said.
"Let's go look for clues", Bryan said.
When they were searching for clues, John saw some large footprints that like it came from a giant dog.
"Hey guys, take a look at this", John said.
"Oh my goodness, are those real footprints?" Sandy said with a shocking look on her face.
"I guess those are real, and they are really big" Bryan replied.
Sandy said, "was it and elephant that appeared in front of you before the crash?"
"No, there are no elephants here", John replied.
They all went to the house of Bryan and looked for some things that they can use.
"Why don't you try to call the police?", Sandy said.
"Do you even think that someone would believe in what we saw", John answered.
"Hey guys",Bryan said.
"What?", John and Sandy replied.
"Do you still remember the the weapons that my dad used to show us?" Bryan asked.
"Yeah, why?" John replied.
"Why don't we use them?" Bryan asked.
"Okay, lets use them." Sandy answered.
Sandy took a knife,Bryan took an axe and a rifle, and John took a rapier. They went on a journey to go find Bella. They came prepared but were still afraid because they did not know what the creature looked like.
They went to the place where they saw the footprints. The Giant was walking going to a cave and they were all afraid. Suddenly an old woman who wore a black dress and a black hood appeared in front of them, they were very afraid of the old woman.
"Go back, it isn't safe here", The old woman said with a whispering voice.
"Why?" John asked.
"It lives here, get away while you still have a chance", The old woman replied.
"No we won't", John said.
"Well then, good luck" The old woman replied with a giggling voice.
They saw a big cave with skeletons around. They were very afraid that they remained speechless when they saw it. They went inside the cave with slow steps.
"We are finally here, let us wish ourselves good luck", John said.
"Let's Promise each other that no one dies.", Sandy said emotionally.
They fought the Giant with all the strength they had. They never gave up until the Giant was down on its knees.Finally they did it, the Giant went down on it's knees then Bryan pointed the rifle at its head and shot it.
"The Giant is dead, I can't believe we really killed it", John said.
"You saw what I did there, I shot its head, can you believe it", Bryan said.
Sandy saw Bella on chained to the wall. Sandy removed the chains and hugged her.
"We are all glad that you are alive Bella", Sandy said .
They brought Bella to the hospital for treatment. Bella recovered after three months and they all were happy in the end. John had tears of joy to see her sister in fine condition.
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