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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Childhood / Youth
- Published: 01/21/2014
Exciting eight
Born 1996, M, from Kolkata, IndiaChapter 1: Mystery begins
21 june, night 11:30 p.m, 2013
I lived in Mumbai with my other six friends Proma, Neil, Ishaan, Dona and Disha. It was night when suddenly Proma’s mobile rang loudly. We were disturbed from sleep. Proma was disturbed from sleep. She got up and took the phone and said, “hello!” A voice said, ”VP13!Vp13!”. Proma asked, “What Vp13?”. The voice repeated these words a number of times and the call cut. In the morning we all were taking tea. Proma said, ”Guys! do you know yesterday one call came to me and said, ”VP13!Vp13!”. Disha asked, “What is the meaning?”. I took my mobile and searched in ‘Google’. Neil asked,” What are you doing indro?” I said,” searching on net. Answers came. I said,”Vp13 I don’t know but vp is a garage-Vehicle processing.” Dona said, ”Let’s go and see there”. I said ”What do you say proma?” Ishaan said, ”I think we should go. It’s serious man”. We got up in our car and I drove the car and stood near vehicle processing garage. We went inside. The person in the counter asked, ”Yes sir how can I help you?” I said, ”We want to check the cars. We want to buy a new one”. we went inside. I said, ”Guys! check the numbers of all the cars and see if there is any VP13in any car. we began to check all the cars. Suddenly ishaan called us, ”Hey! guys come and see here”. We ran and went to him. Ishaan said, ”See this car’s number”. We saw the number. It was “C4201A5 VP13”. Neil said, ”Guys! I think there is something in this car. Let’s check it” I said, ”May be! let’s check”. We started checking the cars. We checked all the places of the cars like the seats, drawers but found nothing. At last I saw inside the engine and found a black plastic bag. I said, ”Guys!see here is a bag”. Proma said, “See what is inside”. I opened the bag and we were astonished to see 20 unique blue diamonds. Disha said with big eyes,” From where this came?” Dona cried, ”Oh my god!” I said, ”First let’s go back to our flat and then we shall discuss about it. I put the bag in my pocket and we came outside. we got up in the car and went back to our flat. we sat in a circle position with a small round table in the middle and that bag on it…I said, ”See we are joined with it”. Dona said, ”I am feeling very afraid”. Neil said, ”Don’t be so afraid. Proma said, ”what to do now?” Suddenly proma’s phone rang. She took it and said, ”It’s the same number”. Ishaan said, ”Hold it!”. Proma hold it and put the loudspeaker on and said, ”Hello”. A voice said, ”I am Vivek”. Proma asked, ”So?”. Vivek said ”I hope you have got those diamonds”. Proma asked very astonished, ”How do you know?”. Vivek said, ”I know everything. If you want to save you and your friend’s life then meet me at the ruined place at the end of Mumbai at 12:30 p.m.”. The call cut. Proma said, ”Now what to do?”. I said, ”You will go”. Neil said, ”Are you crazy?”. I said, ”You will go and ask him everything but never hand the diamonds to him”. Dona said, ”It’s a great risk”. Disha said, ”If vivek attacks her”. I said, ”We shall be near you or somewhere. If you fill any problem just scream loudly in which you are a champion”. Proma bate me with her poly bag. Everyone was tensed…
Chapter -2: Chase begins
Next day at 12:30 p.m. I drove the car and we went to that ruined place at the end of Mumbai. I parked the car beside and we all got down. Proma was holding the bag where those diamonds were kept. She looked very tensed. I said, “Remember Proma you are going to know what he wants but never hand him this bag”. Proma nodded and crept inside that place. She went and stood and saw there was nothing. Suddenly, a white car came from front and stood rising a lot of dust in air. A person got down who was wearing white suit and black spectacles. He came in front of proma and showed his hands. He said, “I am Vivek. Where are the diamonds? ”Proma said, ”How did you know that these are with us and from where these came”. Vivek said, ”Actually I stole those blue diamonds from museum. But police started chasing media went to that garage and hid those diamonds inside the car’s engine and went to Hyderabad. Proma said, “why should I believe? ”Vivek began to snatch the bag from Proma. Vivek shouted, ”Guards!” Suddenly, from somewhere lots of guards came with weapons. Proma slapped Vivek and ran and came out to us. Proma shouted, “Run they are coming!”. We ran and got up in the car and I drove the car very fast. Suddenly, five cars started following us. Neil shouted, ”Indro fast they are coming”. I increased the speed. Those guards began to shoot at us and we saved from the bullets. The window panes of my car had broken. Proma shouted, “Do something!”. I said, “give me the diamonds”. Proma gave me the diamonds and I threw them in the road outside the window. Neil shouted, ”What did you do? Proma shouted, “Those cost billions and are of museum”. Disha said, ”His is mad or what?”. Dona said, ”Indro what you did? ”Ishaan said, “Someone slap this boy”. Neil asked me ”Indro why you did this man?”. I said, “I should have done this before”. I drove the car very fast and parked it near the police station. I said, “everyone get down”. Ishaan said, “Let’s see what next he will do?”. We went to inspector’s room and sat down. Inspector said, “Indro my boy what happened? Why are you in police station “I narrated the whole story of those blue diamonds and all about Vivek. Inspector said, ”Vivek! I couldn’t catch Vivek for three years. Before few days he had stolen diamonds from museum. This time I shall catch him”. Neil said, “But he will come back then you will catch him. But he had got diamonds and not going to return”. Dona said, “because of this stupid Indro”. I said, ”Proma give me your mobile”. Proma gave me her mobile and I called in Vivek’s number. I said, ”hello!”. Vivek said, “You are so afraid of me that you have given me those diamonds to me yourself”. I said “Shut up! I have never seen a fool like you in my life”. Vivek said, ”What?” I said, ”Yes! You think yourself very clever but you didn’t think why someone will give you those diamonds for free? Those are duplicate. Real are with me”. Vivek shouted, ”Idiot! making me fool. You have to suffer for this. You have to suffer a lot for this”. I laughed and said, ”Dialogue doesn’t make anyone a hero. If you want those diamonds then come to that ruined place at the end of Mumbai at 12:30 p.m.”. I cut the phone. My friends were standing surprised. Neil said, “Brilliant! Indro”. Proma said, “Indro you are really clever”. I said, “Inspector you be ready with force at 12:00a:m.I shall give you a signal through radio transmission”. Inspector said, ”Ok! You don’t worry”. Inspector took out six guns and radio-transmissions and handed it to us and said, “Use this if needed”. We thanked Inspector and came out of the police station. There was a field beside. I said, “eyelet’s going to take a drive this evening”. Neil said, “Right let’s go”. Disha said, “Good idea! You don’t tense Proma”.
Chapter 3: A lot of Fun
In the evening we got up in our cars and I began to drive. There was full moon in the sky and the stars were shining like diamonds and pearls in the sky. There were high beam lights of cars in the road. I said, “First where”. Dona said, “Shopping mall”. I parked the car near shopping mall. We went inside. I bought some t-shirts and others too bought something. We were again going. Neil said, ”Club!”. I parked the car near a club and we went inside. A marriage ceremony was going on there. Everyone were dancing and celebrating. We all jumped inside. At 11:30 p.m. we went to a restaurant and ate a lot of food. Then I parked my car near a lake. The shadow of moon and stars were falling on lake which made a beautiful scene. We got down and began to drink cold-drink. I said, “guys! Look at the moon. It’s looking as if all the beautifulness of the earth is hidden inside it.” Disha said, ”Indro!”. Proma said, “You love moon and that’s why you left two marks in moon on exam”. I said, “Proma grades and marks are not only life. There is something outside it. Enjoy it. Live every moment of your life. Life only comes once and enjoy it as much as you can”. Neil said, “Today I am very happy”. I and Neil began to dance in joy. Suddenly some one hit in my head from back and I fell down unconscious.
Chapter-4: The final Fight
When my sense came in the morning I got up and saw myself falling there alone. But where are my friends? Suddenly my mobile rang. I hold it and said, ”Hello!”. Vivek said, “I am Vivek” I shouted, “Where are my friends? ”Vivek laughed and said, “Your friends are with me. If you want to save them then come to that ruined place at the same time with the real diamonds”. I was angry. I threw the phone. I took my car and went to the flat. I took a same looking plastic and put some stones in i.e. went to inspector. Inspector asked, “What happened Indro? ”I said, “My friends are kidnapped by Vivek”. Inspector said, “I was hoping such a thing”. I said, “This shouldn’t be known by anyone. I alone will go and no sooner I give you signal you go with force”. Inspector said, “I must go with you”. I said, “No Sir! If I die I will die for my friends. Either I will die or I shall kill”. I went out. At 12:30 I reached that place and gave a signal to inspector. Inspector was coming with force. I went inside and saw Vivek and other five guards holding my friends. Vivek clapped and laughed and said, “Come! Come! I was waiting for you”. I said, “Leave my friends”. Vivek said, “First diamonds!”. I said, “First friends! ”Vivek said, ”Ok! Let’s see what you do. Leave them”. The guards left my friends and my friends came back to me. Vivek said, ”Now give real diamonds.” I said, “First the fake one”. Vivek said, ”Ok! let’s see if you can defeat me.” Vivek gave the real diamonds to me and I gave the stones to him. I said, “Come!”. We were going but Vivek had seen the stones. He shouted, ”Hey! Making me fool. Wait! Guards!”. All of a sudden lots of guards jumped and came with weapons. The police force had already reached. Both started shooting at each other violently. The guards shot at policemen and all the policemen too shot. We went and hid behind a wall. I said, “I and Neil are going and you four be here”. Neil said, “Come on Indro, It’s time to fight”. I and Neil took out our guns and went. We too started shooting. All the guards fell dead. Only Vivek and five guards were left. Those five guards came. I kicked one guard. Neil bate one guard at his chest. I kicked and punched two guards. Neil kicked two guards. Suddenly, Vivek began to laugh. We saw Vivek’s guards had put gun in four of our friends head. One guard came and attacked Neil and put gun on his head. Vivek shouted, ”I 'll kill them”. I said, “Vivek don’t hurt them. If you want to kill then kill me”. Vivek kept laughing. I said, “If you don’t kill me then I shall kill myself”. Vivek said, “Kill no Kill! What are you waiting for? Kill! Kill!”. I put the gun on my chest. Neil shouted, ”No Indro! ”Ishaan shouted, ”No! don’t...” Disha shouted, ”Indro no!”. Dona said, “He is trying to kill you ”Proma said, “Vivek you kill us and leave indro”. I put the target and bullet inside my body. ”oooohhhh!” I cried and fell down and Vivek laughed. Suddenly, Vivek’s five guards fell dead. I have fired them from back. Vivek said, “You are shooting from back. If you dare come from front”. I shouted, “Everything is fair in love and war”. I shot and Vivek fell dead and I fell down. My friends came to me and said, “Indro! Are you ok?”. I showed my hands and said, “We are for-ever friends”. They kept their hand in my hand. I became unconscious. After that what happened I don’t know. When my sense came I saw I was in hospital and my friends were sitting surrounding me. Neil asked, “How are you?”. I said, ”Fine!”. Dona said, ”Those diamonds are given back to museum. Proma said, “We are rewarded 10 lakhs from government”. I said, ”Really!”. Disha said, ”Again began shameless”. Ishaan said, “Be well soon my friend lots of pressure to take in the office”…We laughed aloud. However, according to Mr. William Shakespeare all is well that ends well…
Exciting eight(Anirban Ghosh)
Chapter 1: Mystery begins
21 june, night 11:30 p.m, 2013
I lived in Mumbai with my other six friends Proma, Neil, Ishaan, Dona and Disha. It was night when suddenly Proma’s mobile rang loudly. We were disturbed from sleep. Proma was disturbed from sleep. She got up and took the phone and said, “hello!” A voice said, ”VP13!Vp13!”. Proma asked, “What Vp13?”. The voice repeated these words a number of times and the call cut. In the morning we all were taking tea. Proma said, ”Guys! do you know yesterday one call came to me and said, ”VP13!Vp13!”. Disha asked, “What is the meaning?”. I took my mobile and searched in ‘Google’. Neil asked,” What are you doing indro?” I said,” searching on net. Answers came. I said,”Vp13 I don’t know but vp is a garage-Vehicle processing.” Dona said, ”Let’s go and see there”. I said ”What do you say proma?” Ishaan said, ”I think we should go. It’s serious man”. We got up in our car and I drove the car and stood near vehicle processing garage. We went inside. The person in the counter asked, ”Yes sir how can I help you?” I said, ”We want to check the cars. We want to buy a new one”. we went inside. I said, ”Guys! check the numbers of all the cars and see if there is any VP13in any car. we began to check all the cars. Suddenly ishaan called us, ”Hey! guys come and see here”. We ran and went to him. Ishaan said, ”See this car’s number”. We saw the number. It was “C4201A5 VP13”. Neil said, ”Guys! I think there is something in this car. Let’s check it” I said, ”May be! let’s check”. We started checking the cars. We checked all the places of the cars like the seats, drawers but found nothing. At last I saw inside the engine and found a black plastic bag. I said, ”Guys!see here is a bag”. Proma said, “See what is inside”. I opened the bag and we were astonished to see 20 unique blue diamonds. Disha said with big eyes,” From where this came?” Dona cried, ”Oh my god!” I said, ”First let’s go back to our flat and then we shall discuss about it. I put the bag in my pocket and we came outside. we got up in the car and went back to our flat. we sat in a circle position with a small round table in the middle and that bag on it…I said, ”See we are joined with it”. Dona said, ”I am feeling very afraid”. Neil said, ”Don’t be so afraid. Proma said, ”what to do now?” Suddenly proma’s phone rang. She took it and said, ”It’s the same number”. Ishaan said, ”Hold it!”. Proma hold it and put the loudspeaker on and said, ”Hello”. A voice said, ”I am Vivek”. Proma asked, ”So?”. Vivek said ”I hope you have got those diamonds”. Proma asked very astonished, ”How do you know?”. Vivek said, ”I know everything. If you want to save you and your friend’s life then meet me at the ruined place at the end of Mumbai at 12:30 p.m.”. The call cut. Proma said, ”Now what to do?”. I said, ”You will go”. Neil said, ”Are you crazy?”. I said, ”You will go and ask him everything but never hand the diamonds to him”. Dona said, ”It’s a great risk”. Disha said, ”If vivek attacks her”. I said, ”We shall be near you or somewhere. If you fill any problem just scream loudly in which you are a champion”. Proma bate me with her poly bag. Everyone was tensed…
Chapter -2: Chase begins
Next day at 12:30 p.m. I drove the car and we went to that ruined place at the end of Mumbai. I parked the car beside and we all got down. Proma was holding the bag where those diamonds were kept. She looked very tensed. I said, “Remember Proma you are going to know what he wants but never hand him this bag”. Proma nodded and crept inside that place. She went and stood and saw there was nothing. Suddenly, a white car came from front and stood rising a lot of dust in air. A person got down who was wearing white suit and black spectacles. He came in front of proma and showed his hands. He said, “I am Vivek. Where are the diamonds? ”Proma said, ”How did you know that these are with us and from where these came”. Vivek said, ”Actually I stole those blue diamonds from museum. But police started chasing media went to that garage and hid those diamonds inside the car’s engine and went to Hyderabad. Proma said, “why should I believe? ”Vivek began to snatch the bag from Proma. Vivek shouted, ”Guards!” Suddenly, from somewhere lots of guards came with weapons. Proma slapped Vivek and ran and came out to us. Proma shouted, “Run they are coming!”. We ran and got up in the car and I drove the car very fast. Suddenly, five cars started following us. Neil shouted, ”Indro fast they are coming”. I increased the speed. Those guards began to shoot at us and we saved from the bullets. The window panes of my car had broken. Proma shouted, “Do something!”. I said, “give me the diamonds”. Proma gave me the diamonds and I threw them in the road outside the window. Neil shouted, ”What did you do? Proma shouted, “Those cost billions and are of museum”. Disha said, ”His is mad or what?”. Dona said, ”Indro what you did? ”Ishaan said, “Someone slap this boy”. Neil asked me ”Indro why you did this man?”. I said, “I should have done this before”. I drove the car very fast and parked it near the police station. I said, “everyone get down”. Ishaan said, “Let’s see what next he will do?”. We went to inspector’s room and sat down. Inspector said, “Indro my boy what happened? Why are you in police station “I narrated the whole story of those blue diamonds and all about Vivek. Inspector said, ”Vivek! I couldn’t catch Vivek for three years. Before few days he had stolen diamonds from museum. This time I shall catch him”. Neil said, “But he will come back then you will catch him. But he had got diamonds and not going to return”. Dona said, “because of this stupid Indro”. I said, ”Proma give me your mobile”. Proma gave me her mobile and I called in Vivek’s number. I said, ”hello!”. Vivek said, “You are so afraid of me that you have given me those diamonds to me yourself”. I said “Shut up! I have never seen a fool like you in my life”. Vivek said, ”What?” I said, ”Yes! You think yourself very clever but you didn’t think why someone will give you those diamonds for free? Those are duplicate. Real are with me”. Vivek shouted, ”Idiot! making me fool. You have to suffer for this. You have to suffer a lot for this”. I laughed and said, ”Dialogue doesn’t make anyone a hero. If you want those diamonds then come to that ruined place at the end of Mumbai at 12:30 p.m.”. I cut the phone. My friends were standing surprised. Neil said, “Brilliant! Indro”. Proma said, “Indro you are really clever”. I said, “Inspector you be ready with force at 12:00a:m.I shall give you a signal through radio transmission”. Inspector said, ”Ok! You don’t worry”. Inspector took out six guns and radio-transmissions and handed it to us and said, “Use this if needed”. We thanked Inspector and came out of the police station. There was a field beside. I said, “eyelet’s going to take a drive this evening”. Neil said, “Right let’s go”. Disha said, “Good idea! You don’t tense Proma”.
Chapter 3: A lot of Fun
In the evening we got up in our cars and I began to drive. There was full moon in the sky and the stars were shining like diamonds and pearls in the sky. There were high beam lights of cars in the road. I said, “First where”. Dona said, “Shopping mall”. I parked the car near shopping mall. We went inside. I bought some t-shirts and others too bought something. We were again going. Neil said, ”Club!”. I parked the car near a club and we went inside. A marriage ceremony was going on there. Everyone were dancing and celebrating. We all jumped inside. At 11:30 p.m. we went to a restaurant and ate a lot of food. Then I parked my car near a lake. The shadow of moon and stars were falling on lake which made a beautiful scene. We got down and began to drink cold-drink. I said, “guys! Look at the moon. It’s looking as if all the beautifulness of the earth is hidden inside it.” Disha said, ”Indro!”. Proma said, “You love moon and that’s why you left two marks in moon on exam”. I said, “Proma grades and marks are not only life. There is something outside it. Enjoy it. Live every moment of your life. Life only comes once and enjoy it as much as you can”. Neil said, “Today I am very happy”. I and Neil began to dance in joy. Suddenly some one hit in my head from back and I fell down unconscious.
Chapter-4: The final Fight
When my sense came in the morning I got up and saw myself falling there alone. But where are my friends? Suddenly my mobile rang. I hold it and said, ”Hello!”. Vivek said, “I am Vivek” I shouted, “Where are my friends? ”Vivek laughed and said, “Your friends are with me. If you want to save them then come to that ruined place at the same time with the real diamonds”. I was angry. I threw the phone. I took my car and went to the flat. I took a same looking plastic and put some stones in i.e. went to inspector. Inspector asked, “What happened Indro? ”I said, “My friends are kidnapped by Vivek”. Inspector said, “I was hoping such a thing”. I said, “This shouldn’t be known by anyone. I alone will go and no sooner I give you signal you go with force”. Inspector said, “I must go with you”. I said, “No Sir! If I die I will die for my friends. Either I will die or I shall kill”. I went out. At 12:30 I reached that place and gave a signal to inspector. Inspector was coming with force. I went inside and saw Vivek and other five guards holding my friends. Vivek clapped and laughed and said, “Come! Come! I was waiting for you”. I said, “Leave my friends”. Vivek said, “First diamonds!”. I said, “First friends! ”Vivek said, ”Ok! Let’s see what you do. Leave them”. The guards left my friends and my friends came back to me. Vivek said, ”Now give real diamonds.” I said, “First the fake one”. Vivek said, ”Ok! let’s see if you can defeat me.” Vivek gave the real diamonds to me and I gave the stones to him. I said, “Come!”. We were going but Vivek had seen the stones. He shouted, ”Hey! Making me fool. Wait! Guards!”. All of a sudden lots of guards jumped and came with weapons. The police force had already reached. Both started shooting at each other violently. The guards shot at policemen and all the policemen too shot. We went and hid behind a wall. I said, “I and Neil are going and you four be here”. Neil said, “Come on Indro, It’s time to fight”. I and Neil took out our guns and went. We too started shooting. All the guards fell dead. Only Vivek and five guards were left. Those five guards came. I kicked one guard. Neil bate one guard at his chest. I kicked and punched two guards. Neil kicked two guards. Suddenly, Vivek began to laugh. We saw Vivek’s guards had put gun in four of our friends head. One guard came and attacked Neil and put gun on his head. Vivek shouted, ”I 'll kill them”. I said, “Vivek don’t hurt them. If you want to kill then kill me”. Vivek kept laughing. I said, “If you don’t kill me then I shall kill myself”. Vivek said, “Kill no Kill! What are you waiting for? Kill! Kill!”. I put the gun on my chest. Neil shouted, ”No Indro! ”Ishaan shouted, ”No! don’t...” Disha shouted, ”Indro no!”. Dona said, “He is trying to kill you ”Proma said, “Vivek you kill us and leave indro”. I put the target and bullet inside my body. ”oooohhhh!” I cried and fell down and Vivek laughed. Suddenly, Vivek’s five guards fell dead. I have fired them from back. Vivek said, “You are shooting from back. If you dare come from front”. I shouted, “Everything is fair in love and war”. I shot and Vivek fell dead and I fell down. My friends came to me and said, “Indro! Are you ok?”. I showed my hands and said, “We are for-ever friends”. They kept their hand in my hand. I became unconscious. After that what happened I don’t know. When my sense came I saw I was in hospital and my friends were sitting surrounding me. Neil asked, “How are you?”. I said, ”Fine!”. Dona said, ”Those diamonds are given back to museum. Proma said, “We are rewarded 10 lakhs from government”. I said, ”Really!”. Disha said, ”Again began shameless”. Ishaan said, “Be well soon my friend lots of pressure to take in the office”…We laughed aloud. However, according to Mr. William Shakespeare all is well that ends well…
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