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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 02/10/2014
How about that
Born 1970, M, from Punta gorda/F.L., United StatesIt was something to see Dan on the floor in a pool of his own blood. It was that he had kill so many people when he was alive. There had to be one of those that were family of one that was killed. That had done in Dan and it was something that Tammy had to figure out. There was a part of her that did not want to know who was the one that had killed Dan. All she knew that she was glad that he was gone, she knew that it was something that she should not think like. It was something that she was just glad he was dead so he could not kill any one else.
There was a note on her door the next morning, telling her to just let things go or she would be next. It was some thing that she took to heart that she did not want to die over Dan. It was that she wanted to get the one that had killed Dan. It was some thing that she had been trained to do and that was just what she had to do. Even if it ment going though the list of people that she might of killed him. The one thought was that this was a waste of time that no one care about Dan. It was a feeling that Tammy had to push to the back of her mind.
Then the one thing that she never thought would happen some one came forward. It was a local meat cutter Tommy he told her that he had found out that he had killed his wife. One night he went to his house and stabbed Dan to death. He did not clean any thing up he wanted to be found out. All he knew that he had to come clean before Tammy got to his name. He told her that he was going to clean up but some one had called the cops when they looked in the window. It was a old man that was walking his dog and the dog ran from him to the window. Tommy knew the old man did not see him but it was just to much to handle. So he gave himself up and there was justice for a man that had killed so many him self.
How about that(Leo Laclair)
It was something to see Dan on the floor in a pool of his own blood. It was that he had kill so many people when he was alive. There had to be one of those that were family of one that was killed. That had done in Dan and it was something that Tammy had to figure out. There was a part of her that did not want to know who was the one that had killed Dan. All she knew that she was glad that he was gone, she knew that it was something that she should not think like. It was something that she was just glad he was dead so he could not kill any one else.
There was a note on her door the next morning, telling her to just let things go or she would be next. It was some thing that she took to heart that she did not want to die over Dan. It was that she wanted to get the one that had killed Dan. It was some thing that she had been trained to do and that was just what she had to do. Even if it ment going though the list of people that she might of killed him. The one thought was that this was a waste of time that no one care about Dan. It was a feeling that Tammy had to push to the back of her mind.
Then the one thing that she never thought would happen some one came forward. It was a local meat cutter Tommy he told her that he had found out that he had killed his wife. One night he went to his house and stabbed Dan to death. He did not clean any thing up he wanted to be found out. All he knew that he had to come clean before Tammy got to his name. He told her that he was going to clean up but some one had called the cops when they looked in the window. It was a old man that was walking his dog and the dog ran from him to the window. Tommy knew the old man did not see him but it was just to much to handle. So he gave himself up and there was justice for a man that had killed so many him self.
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