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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 02/12/2014
I was 14 and it was a warm sunny morning and the wind blew through the trees. There was nothing to do, so I went for a walk. I put my coat on and went out. The sky was clear and blue and the field was green but still had puddles because of the rain. That’s when i saw it. A beast ran out of the forest after my 2 sisters and their friend. I got on my horse and took my sword out. I raced over to them I told them to run to the village and to run as fast as possible. I distracted the beast and it chased after me killing the lush green grass as it ran. It grabbed my arm so u stabbed it. It made a blood curdling kind of scream as it stopped and fell to the ground. It was a god that had a demon attached to it. The demon had taken over its body and thee god was in so much pain it ran until the demon was in control of it. The beast had infected my arm and I was told that soon it would kill me! OMG my sister said when she found out I had to leave. “YOU CANT GO U JUST CANT!” that’s when I told her that if I didn’t leave and find the god of Life and Death then I would definitely die.
So I left my home with my horse and my sword. I saw farmers innocent people getting killed and trying to run from vicious killers. I saw one man running from one of the killers. The killer drew his swords and cut both the man’s arms off. He screamed in pain and then the killer cut his throat to see him choke on his own blood. I looked at him from a distance as he lay twitching and a puddle of red. I drew my bow and shot the man; it went right through his head and killed him instantly.
The others saw me and with their bows they got on their horses and shot at me. Then u turned round on my horse and hot at one. His head came clean off. I got away and found a small village or that’s what I thought. It was a place that made iron. He stayed there for a while and helped out then he was going to leave but a wolf girl and the leader of the town were fighting. He then hit them bother in the belly and they bother went limp. He gave the leader to one of the women and put the wolf girl over his shoulder’s. A woman came out with a gun and told him to stop but Thomas kept on going. Another jogged her and she fired……. It went right through Thomas but he carried on walking. He came to the door and told them to open. They said “we can’t it takes 15 men to open this door, we are thankful for you helping us but please go back” Thomas then put his arm on the door and pushed a man shouted at him as the blood dripped form his wound onto the cold stone ground “STOP YOU WILL KILL YOURSELF!” He opened the door with his one hand and everyone looked surprised. He helped the girl but as they left on Thomas’s horse he fell onto the ground. She hated him for saving her but brought him to the god of life and death. The god healed him for all the good he did and the boy went back to his village. He had the scar of where he was shot but nothing happen to him; he had no infection and no gun wound so people after a long while stopped and didn’t speak of it any more. He had no adventures after that. Until one day and horrifying, massive and vicious bird attacked his village and as he got on his horse with his bow and sword he went after the bird and well that is another story.
The big Adventure(Holly Dunn)
I was 14 and it was a warm sunny morning and the wind blew through the trees. There was nothing to do, so I went for a walk. I put my coat on and went out. The sky was clear and blue and the field was green but still had puddles because of the rain. That’s when i saw it. A beast ran out of the forest after my 2 sisters and their friend. I got on my horse and took my sword out. I raced over to them I told them to run to the village and to run as fast as possible. I distracted the beast and it chased after me killing the lush green grass as it ran. It grabbed my arm so u stabbed it. It made a blood curdling kind of scream as it stopped and fell to the ground. It was a god that had a demon attached to it. The demon had taken over its body and thee god was in so much pain it ran until the demon was in control of it. The beast had infected my arm and I was told that soon it would kill me! OMG my sister said when she found out I had to leave. “YOU CANT GO U JUST CANT!” that’s when I told her that if I didn’t leave and find the god of Life and Death then I would definitely die.
So I left my home with my horse and my sword. I saw farmers innocent people getting killed and trying to run from vicious killers. I saw one man running from one of the killers. The killer drew his swords and cut both the man’s arms off. He screamed in pain and then the killer cut his throat to see him choke on his own blood. I looked at him from a distance as he lay twitching and a puddle of red. I drew my bow and shot the man; it went right through his head and killed him instantly.
The others saw me and with their bows they got on their horses and shot at me. Then u turned round on my horse and hot at one. His head came clean off. I got away and found a small village or that’s what I thought. It was a place that made iron. He stayed there for a while and helped out then he was going to leave but a wolf girl and the leader of the town were fighting. He then hit them bother in the belly and they bother went limp. He gave the leader to one of the women and put the wolf girl over his shoulder’s. A woman came out with a gun and told him to stop but Thomas kept on going. Another jogged her and she fired……. It went right through Thomas but he carried on walking. He came to the door and told them to open. They said “we can’t it takes 15 men to open this door, we are thankful for you helping us but please go back” Thomas then put his arm on the door and pushed a man shouted at him as the blood dripped form his wound onto the cold stone ground “STOP YOU WILL KILL YOURSELF!” He opened the door with his one hand and everyone looked surprised. He helped the girl but as they left on Thomas’s horse he fell onto the ground. She hated him for saving her but brought him to the god of life and death. The god healed him for all the good he did and the boy went back to his village. He had the scar of where he was shot but nothing happen to him; he had no infection and no gun wound so people after a long while stopped and didn’t speak of it any more. He had no adventures after that. Until one day and horrifying, massive and vicious bird attacked his village and as he got on his horse with his bow and sword he went after the bird and well that is another story.
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