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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 02/13/2014
Where was my happy ending?
Born 1996, M, from St.Charles, United StatesIt doesn't take long to realize when your so called best friend turns on you. To realize when your so called best friend shoves a metal pipe through your chest... Trust me it doesn't take long to realize. It's so painful you can't do anything but realize what has happened to you. Crouched over on the ground coughing up pools of blood, my eyes felt like they were burning and wanted to pop out of my head. My body was sore and all I could feel, hear, or smell was the intense aroma of electricity. It was as if electricity itself was coursing through my veins making my body feel like it was on fire! Then they approached me. Two tall people, my eyes were still half blinded at the time so I couldn't tell who they were until I heard their voices. It was Monica and Brad, two high school seniors that everyone except their friends thought were huge ass-holes, but it wasn't until I was lying on the floor in front of both of them... Watching as they slung a blade at me. I couldn't help but call for help. As my wounds and injuries burned with pain all I could think about was how to escape. Then I saw it. The sun was coming up and coming in from a tiny crack in the wall was a beam of light. I knew that the beam of light shining from the crack in the wall had to be coming from a crack in the door. So without hesitation I lunged forward, bringing my captors to their knees. I ran towards the door full blast and then it happened. My chest burned and my shirt started to feel moist. My breath shortened and my vision flared and it takes me long to realize what had happened. I slowly looked down to my chest and saw the horrific sight. The long blade that Brad had once held over my neck execution style was now through my chest. I dropped to my knees in pain and all I could do was scream. The shriek echoed throughout the entire building and I was in complete agony. In a split second I looked back towards my captors and all I saw was their size 11 Nike Airs flying towards and plowing into my face and the last thing I saw was a blinding bright light...!
Where was my happy ending?(Zachary Smith) It doesn't take long to realize when your so called best friend turns on you. To realize when your so called best friend shoves a metal pipe through your chest... Trust me it doesn't take long to realize. It's so painful you can't do anything but realize what has happened to you. Crouched over on the ground coughing up pools of blood, my eyes felt like they were burning and wanted to pop out of my head. My body was sore and all I could feel, hear, or smell was the intense aroma of electricity. It was as if electricity itself was coursing through my veins making my body feel like it was on fire! Then they approached me. Two tall people, my eyes were still half blinded at the time so I couldn't tell who they were until I heard their voices. It was Monica and Brad, two high school seniors that everyone except their friends thought were huge ass-holes, but it wasn't until I was lying on the floor in front of both of them... Watching as they slung a blade at me. I couldn't help but call for help. As my wounds and injuries burned with pain all I could think about was how to escape. Then I saw it. The sun was coming up and coming in from a tiny crack in the wall was a beam of light. I knew that the beam of light shining from the crack in the wall had to be coming from a crack in the door. So without hesitation I lunged forward, bringing my captors to their knees. I ran towards the door full blast and then it happened. My chest burned and my shirt started to feel moist. My breath shortened and my vision flared and it takes me long to realize what had happened. I slowly looked down to my chest and saw the horrific sight. The long blade that Brad had once held over my neck execution style was now through my chest. I dropped to my knees in pain and all I could do was scream. The shriek echoed throughout the entire building and I was in complete agony. In a split second I looked back towards my captors and all I saw was their size 11 Nike Airs flying towards and plowing into my face and the last thing I saw was a blinding bright light...!
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