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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 02/18/2014
"Vanni want to go to a movie after school?" asked Nicole. "Sure, can Danny and Solis come?" he asked, trying to involve his brothers. "Yeah, I'll see if Lexi and Amber will come." Nicole replied. Vanni told his brothers the plan and they agreed to go see a new movie. They arrive at the movie theater and see some of their friends from school. They meet up with the girls and pay for the tickets. Halfway through the movie you can see Danny and Lexi talking, Solis holding Amber's hand and Vanni trying to kiss Nicole. He starts to lean over when a thundering sound erupted beside Vanni. He looks towards his brothers to see if they are OK and see they are all OK. he looks to the other side and sees Nicole, sitting next to him with a blank face. He pulls her closer and discovers a bullet hole in her side. She starts to cry silently beside him as he held her close. The group ran outside to flag down some help while Vanni tries to comforts her. Danny rushes back in to check on Nicole when he sees his brother crying on the floor. "Shes gone Danny. Shes gone." Vanni said between sobs. The ambulance ran in and took Nicole away to investigate the crime scene. Vanni stood their and waited for everyone to leave before he even said a word. Danny and Solis took their dates home. Solis came back to take his brother home. Vanni got in the car and was silent the whole ride home. He didn't eat dinner and he hardly got any sleep. He went to school the next day and saw the TV announcements that almost made hi all most relive the whole scene again. Solis walked up to his brother with Danny right behind to help support their brother in his time of need and closure. it was later revealed that Nicole had gone into shock from the situation and would make a full recovery with Vanni by her side. The criminal was found days later and was testified against by Vanni who convinced that the shooter didn't even have a target and could have easily killed anyone in the movie theater. The jury thought about there kids and how this could have been their teens.
Vengance(Blackknight2o5) "Vanni want to go to a movie after school?" asked Nicole. "Sure, can Danny and Solis come?" he asked, trying to involve his brothers. "Yeah, I'll see if Lexi and Amber will come." Nicole replied. Vanni told his brothers the plan and they agreed to go see a new movie. They arrive at the movie theater and see some of their friends from school. They meet up with the girls and pay for the tickets. Halfway through the movie you can see Danny and Lexi talking, Solis holding Amber's hand and Vanni trying to kiss Nicole. He starts to lean over when a thundering sound erupted beside Vanni. He looks towards his brothers to see if they are OK and see they are all OK. he looks to the other side and sees Nicole, sitting next to him with a blank face. He pulls her closer and discovers a bullet hole in her side. She starts to cry silently beside him as he held her close. The group ran outside to flag down some help while Vanni tries to comforts her. Danny rushes back in to check on Nicole when he sees his brother crying on the floor. "Shes gone Danny. Shes gone." Vanni said between sobs. The ambulance ran in and took Nicole away to investigate the crime scene. Vanni stood their and waited for everyone to leave before he even said a word. Danny and Solis took their dates home. Solis came back to take his brother home. Vanni got in the car and was silent the whole ride home. He didn't eat dinner and he hardly got any sleep. He went to school the next day and saw the TV announcements that almost made hi all most relive the whole scene again. Solis walked up to his brother with Danny right behind to help support their brother in his time of need and closure. it was later revealed that Nicole had gone into shock from the situation and would make a full recovery with Vanni by her side. The criminal was found days later and was testified against by Vanni who convinced that the shooter didn't even have a target and could have easily killed anyone in the movie theater. The jury thought about there kids and how this could have been their teens.
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