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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
- Published: 02/27/2014
Soul Guardian (english version)
I am writing this because someone lost a life because of dangers in life. I thought of someone, someone could be guarding us.
That is why I created a fiction story to give hope to everyday life because we need to cherish it every single time.
Chapter One: Who am I?
Now to start my story, I am Ms Mariel Mendoza, I grew up as an ordinary person. Let's just say everyone shows their real attitude to me. My parents don't often say they love me. When I was just a kid I was always emotional. My parents always scolded me knowing that its for my own sake but inside I keep it in. I feel I am most of the times misunderstood. Since I was a teenager I grew up and studied in a religion school and the rest was history.
In egypt many years ago an archeologist found a necklace with gold string, inside was a red stone worn by the mummy. They took it and sent it for checking on how much it would cost perhaps. When they removed the necklace from the mummy a sudden wind gushed and a white looking ghost appeared then disappeared. The red stone is priceless, weird, knowing it came from the mummy. only the gold necklace is expensive. The archeologist removed the red stone from the necklace for further study but on the way to the laboratory accidentally it fell and a vendor found it and sent it to her family in Bicutan. The relative of the vendor who recieved the stone, since priceless, did not give attention to it and she made it a necklace and tried to sell it in the church.
On that day Ms Mariel Mendoza went to the church. Knowing there are less people that night the vendor decided to go home and the necklace dropped on the floor without her knowing it, then she rode on the jeepney. Ms Mendoza saw the necklace fall and tried to give it back to the vendor but did not reach her. She looked at the necklace and she found and noticed it was shimmering. she was shocked and looked at everybody but it seems she is the only one who saw the spark on the neclace. She wore the necklace then went home.
That night she woke up hearing someone calling her. Mariel Mariel. When she woke up she sees a white ghost. Whoa, who are you? asked Mariel.
Hi, I am the guardian of that necklace you're wearing.
I just found this, said Mariel.
Uh huh, I see, said the ghost.
You're a ghost! I can see through you? said Ms Mendoza. She tried to hold the ghost but her hands are just passing through. I am just dreaming, said Ms Mendoza.
The ghost answered, I wish that's true Ms Mariel, but No I am here to guard
that necklace. You see when they took it from egypt It came with me.
Huh I see, I do see a ghost from captured cameras, but it was a long time ago? said Mariel.
Yes, now you must shut up or they'll think you're crazy said the ghost.
Ah uhuh I see, you got a point, said Mariel.
I see that you're always sad and emotional Ms Mendoza, said the ghost.
How did you know? said Ms Mendoza.
I just know, I know things you don't know, said the ghost.
You're super weird, said Mariel.
You don't know what you're talking about, when that neclace fell into your hand let's see whose weird, you or me, said by the ghost.
Alright, alright, I see, so what's your name?
I don't have a name, said the ghost. You could call me Soul Guardian, I'm your guardian angel.
Ms Mariel nodded and said, whatever, you're already dead.
Haha, said her soul g. but I'll take care of you and that necklace from now on.
Whatever, it's mine, I found it, You want to take it back? asked Mariel. Her soul g. said No, its rightfully yours now. I can never leave you as long as you have that necklace.
What is this for? why are you guarding it? asked Ms Mendoza.
When the time comes you will definetely know. Now If you don't mind I'll be here by your side from now on, said by her soul g.
Oh alright, said Mariel, at least you don't eat, I don't need to pay for your fare, but If I tell anybody about you they'll put me in a straight jacket.
In the years that I am with my soul g, wearing that necklace, some weird things happened. Time flies fast. I had to go to work and when I go home it will be midnight. I usually just walk to save money, at midnight in a dark street. Unaware someone was watching me. The next night after I am with my co-workmate at midnight, we walked through the dark road to get to the near terminal. I just noticed my co-workmate upon seeing 2 guys in front of us. since it's dark I just rushed and ran going to the direction back to work. I looked at my workmate running then on my next look 2 icepicks are pointing on my belly. Those 2 guys are threatening me to give them my phone. I tried to get my phone under my bag while crying my workmate's name to somehow help me, and thinking it would be the end. All of a sudden my soul g looked at a car, the driver is a guy accompanied by his girlfriend. Please stop said my soul g. and the driver said please stop as well. His girlfriend said, what did you say? The driver went to the direction where Ms Mariel is. Her soul g said to the accomplice of the holdaper look behind you someone is coming, Run! The accomplice looked behind him and told his company to run since someone is coming and saw the car going to their direction. Both of the holdapers run seeing from the first holdaper's face anger from what happened that he did not get Mariel's celphone. The driver asked Mariel to ride in his car and offered to be sent to the police station for reporting, but Mariel declined while crying and said Thank you but No. She ran back to the direction going to her office. When Ms Mendoza went home she cried alone and her soul g hugged her. There there your alright..said by her soul g. Ms Mendoza called the hotline of police to report the incident so that police would now check the premises of the incident from now on. But what happened, Ms Mendoza did not know what her soul g did to her to save her life.
Why is Ms Mendoza has someone guarding her what is with her necklace that her soul g is guarding?
Ending: Ms Mariel grew old and was advised by her soul g to throw the neclace into the deep sea for someone to get it accidentally in replace to her.
Chapter 2: Soul G, A great adviser
Ms Mendoza started a new career at her new office, when she was rejected from her old work. Who knows why? but she believed it opened up a better opportunity she believed her new work is much better and much accessible than before, she felt comfortable in her new line of work. Ms Mendoza is new to the office and I would say she is a newbie in making friends. She would'nt expect her soul g would be a great adviser.
She has a crush to a guy in her work that is funny, very good in making friends, has good sense of humor also as mentioned by the guy he's religious. She almost feel that the guy knows what she is going to say whenever they talk. She thinks of him all the time and even dream of him and her being together. Ms Mariel is always happy and inspired whenever she sees her crush. The guy's name is Elmer. There is also a guy being linked to Ms Mariel he's name is Pablo and even having pick up lines and jokes with Mariel. He is a busy guy has high hopes for the future tries his luck on a tv show for cooking but only got until Top5. He is an experienced caterer and sells food in the office most of the times since he is busy that people can't seem to talk to him. Ms Mariel confessed her feelings to her soul g. I think I like elmer I like him so much what do you think soul g? Are we soulmates? Ms Mariel smiled. How about Pablo? asked her soul g. No I dont like him he does'nt even notice me. I dont like Elmer for you said her soul g? What? asked Mariel. Because I dont like him he is just good on mingling with other people. I like Pablo much better said her soul g. What? I dont like him, I cant even talk to him most of the times when he is busy? Ms mendoza if you, be with him, you will just be at home, be housewife you dont need to work and you have a great future ahead of you that's because he is hardworking.. said her soul g. I dont think so for me as long as were happy even if were poor that's alright.. said Mariel. Her soul g just nod that he does not agree with Mariel on what she said. Pablo gave speech on the company that he would resign since he already has a restaurant and catering named companies. Ms Mariel was shocked and proud of her friend. A few days later the company had a night party. She drank a lot of liquior and got drunk but she is with her crush. Ms Mendoza, since was drunk her sight was spinning and experiencing hard to walk. She was accompanied by her crush in a taxi since Ms Mariel was dizzy and feeling hot due to the liquior she drank she lean her shoulder to his crush and hugged him. Her crush Elmer was displeased on what she did and when they got off to a taxi she kept a distance with Mariel. Mariel was really slow in walking due to her vision was blurred but Elmer just walks fast. Elmer crossed 2 streets and since Mariel was slow in walking she can't keep up with Elmer. Ms Mariel needs to cross the street since that is the way going home. Her sight is going in circles and she can only see lights coming from the vehicles. Are you ok? asked her soul g. My sight is spinning and I need to cross those streets I can only see lights from vehicles. Elmer is waiting for you ahead, cmon I'll help you on my signal cross the street ok?said her soul g. Hmm ok said Mariel. Mariel saw that the light from vehicles are fading means they are far her soul g helped her cross the street. Raise your hands so that the next vehicle will see you. said her soul g then she did. She was slow in walking but seems like the vehicles are patient until shes finished crossing the street. She got home safe. The next day after she noticed people are talking about her behind her back and her crush elmer really kept her distance to her. She went to the washroom and in the cubicle to think. What did I tell you Ms Mariel? Oh hes so kind, oh hes my soulmate. said her soul g. Ms Mariel was speechless. You can never tell a person is kind or whatever in just a month or two you knew him it should be years remember that!
soul guardian(celeste marie)
Soul Guardian (english version)
I am writing this because someone lost a life because of dangers in life. I thought of someone, someone could be guarding us.
That is why I created a fiction story to give hope to everyday life because we need to cherish it every single time.
Chapter One: Who am I?
Now to start my story, I am Ms Mariel Mendoza, I grew up as an ordinary person. Let's just say everyone shows their real attitude to me. My parents don't often say they love me. When I was just a kid I was always emotional. My parents always scolded me knowing that its for my own sake but inside I keep it in. I feel I am most of the times misunderstood. Since I was a teenager I grew up and studied in a religion school and the rest was history.
In egypt many years ago an archeologist found a necklace with gold string, inside was a red stone worn by the mummy. They took it and sent it for checking on how much it would cost perhaps. When they removed the necklace from the mummy a sudden wind gushed and a white looking ghost appeared then disappeared. The red stone is priceless, weird, knowing it came from the mummy. only the gold necklace is expensive. The archeologist removed the red stone from the necklace for further study but on the way to the laboratory accidentally it fell and a vendor found it and sent it to her family in Bicutan. The relative of the vendor who recieved the stone, since priceless, did not give attention to it and she made it a necklace and tried to sell it in the church.
On that day Ms Mariel Mendoza went to the church. Knowing there are less people that night the vendor decided to go home and the necklace dropped on the floor without her knowing it, then she rode on the jeepney. Ms Mendoza saw the necklace fall and tried to give it back to the vendor but did not reach her. She looked at the necklace and she found and noticed it was shimmering. she was shocked and looked at everybody but it seems she is the only one who saw the spark on the neclace. She wore the necklace then went home.
That night she woke up hearing someone calling her. Mariel Mariel. When she woke up she sees a white ghost. Whoa, who are you? asked Mariel.
Hi, I am the guardian of that necklace you're wearing.
I just found this, said Mariel.
Uh huh, I see, said the ghost.
You're a ghost! I can see through you? said Ms Mendoza. She tried to hold the ghost but her hands are just passing through. I am just dreaming, said Ms Mendoza.
The ghost answered, I wish that's true Ms Mariel, but No I am here to guard
that necklace. You see when they took it from egypt It came with me.
Huh I see, I do see a ghost from captured cameras, but it was a long time ago? said Mariel.
Yes, now you must shut up or they'll think you're crazy said the ghost.
Ah uhuh I see, you got a point, said Mariel.
I see that you're always sad and emotional Ms Mendoza, said the ghost.
How did you know? said Ms Mendoza.
I just know, I know things you don't know, said the ghost.
You're super weird, said Mariel.
You don't know what you're talking about, when that neclace fell into your hand let's see whose weird, you or me, said by the ghost.
Alright, alright, I see, so what's your name?
I don't have a name, said the ghost. You could call me Soul Guardian, I'm your guardian angel.
Ms Mariel nodded and said, whatever, you're already dead.
Haha, said her soul g. but I'll take care of you and that necklace from now on.
Whatever, it's mine, I found it, You want to take it back? asked Mariel. Her soul g. said No, its rightfully yours now. I can never leave you as long as you have that necklace.
What is this for? why are you guarding it? asked Ms Mendoza.
When the time comes you will definetely know. Now If you don't mind I'll be here by your side from now on, said by her soul g.
Oh alright, said Mariel, at least you don't eat, I don't need to pay for your fare, but If I tell anybody about you they'll put me in a straight jacket.
In the years that I am with my soul g, wearing that necklace, some weird things happened. Time flies fast. I had to go to work and when I go home it will be midnight. I usually just walk to save money, at midnight in a dark street. Unaware someone was watching me. The next night after I am with my co-workmate at midnight, we walked through the dark road to get to the near terminal. I just noticed my co-workmate upon seeing 2 guys in front of us. since it's dark I just rushed and ran going to the direction back to work. I looked at my workmate running then on my next look 2 icepicks are pointing on my belly. Those 2 guys are threatening me to give them my phone. I tried to get my phone under my bag while crying my workmate's name to somehow help me, and thinking it would be the end. All of a sudden my soul g looked at a car, the driver is a guy accompanied by his girlfriend. Please stop said my soul g. and the driver said please stop as well. His girlfriend said, what did you say? The driver went to the direction where Ms Mariel is. Her soul g said to the accomplice of the holdaper look behind you someone is coming, Run! The accomplice looked behind him and told his company to run since someone is coming and saw the car going to their direction. Both of the holdapers run seeing from the first holdaper's face anger from what happened that he did not get Mariel's celphone. The driver asked Mariel to ride in his car and offered to be sent to the police station for reporting, but Mariel declined while crying and said Thank you but No. She ran back to the direction going to her office. When Ms Mendoza went home she cried alone and her soul g hugged her. There there your alright..said by her soul g. Ms Mendoza called the hotline of police to report the incident so that police would now check the premises of the incident from now on. But what happened, Ms Mendoza did not know what her soul g did to her to save her life.
Why is Ms Mendoza has someone guarding her what is with her necklace that her soul g is guarding?
Ending: Ms Mariel grew old and was advised by her soul g to throw the neclace into the deep sea for someone to get it accidentally in replace to her.
Chapter 2: Soul G, A great adviser
Ms Mendoza started a new career at her new office, when she was rejected from her old work. Who knows why? but she believed it opened up a better opportunity she believed her new work is much better and much accessible than before, she felt comfortable in her new line of work. Ms Mendoza is new to the office and I would say she is a newbie in making friends. She would'nt expect her soul g would be a great adviser.
She has a crush to a guy in her work that is funny, very good in making friends, has good sense of humor also as mentioned by the guy he's religious. She almost feel that the guy knows what she is going to say whenever they talk. She thinks of him all the time and even dream of him and her being together. Ms Mariel is always happy and inspired whenever she sees her crush. The guy's name is Elmer. There is also a guy being linked to Ms Mariel he's name is Pablo and even having pick up lines and jokes with Mariel. He is a busy guy has high hopes for the future tries his luck on a tv show for cooking but only got until Top5. He is an experienced caterer and sells food in the office most of the times since he is busy that people can't seem to talk to him. Ms Mariel confessed her feelings to her soul g. I think I like elmer I like him so much what do you think soul g? Are we soulmates? Ms Mariel smiled. How about Pablo? asked her soul g. No I dont like him he does'nt even notice me. I dont like Elmer for you said her soul g? What? asked Mariel. Because I dont like him he is just good on mingling with other people. I like Pablo much better said her soul g. What? I dont like him, I cant even talk to him most of the times when he is busy? Ms mendoza if you, be with him, you will just be at home, be housewife you dont need to work and you have a great future ahead of you that's because he is hardworking.. said her soul g. I dont think so for me as long as were happy even if were poor that's alright.. said Mariel. Her soul g just nod that he does not agree with Mariel on what she said. Pablo gave speech on the company that he would resign since he already has a restaurant and catering named companies. Ms Mariel was shocked and proud of her friend. A few days later the company had a night party. She drank a lot of liquior and got drunk but she is with her crush. Ms Mendoza, since was drunk her sight was spinning and experiencing hard to walk. She was accompanied by her crush in a taxi since Ms Mariel was dizzy and feeling hot due to the liquior she drank she lean her shoulder to his crush and hugged him. Her crush Elmer was displeased on what she did and when they got off to a taxi she kept a distance with Mariel. Mariel was really slow in walking due to her vision was blurred but Elmer just walks fast. Elmer crossed 2 streets and since Mariel was slow in walking she can't keep up with Elmer. Ms Mariel needs to cross the street since that is the way going home. Her sight is going in circles and she can only see lights coming from the vehicles. Are you ok? asked her soul g. My sight is spinning and I need to cross those streets I can only see lights from vehicles. Elmer is waiting for you ahead, cmon I'll help you on my signal cross the street ok?said her soul g. Hmm ok said Mariel. Mariel saw that the light from vehicles are fading means they are far her soul g helped her cross the street. Raise your hands so that the next vehicle will see you. said her soul g then she did. She was slow in walking but seems like the vehicles are patient until shes finished crossing the street. She got home safe. The next day after she noticed people are talking about her behind her back and her crush elmer really kept her distance to her. She went to the washroom and in the cubicle to think. What did I tell you Ms Mariel? Oh hes so kind, oh hes my soulmate. said her soul g. Ms Mariel was speechless. You can never tell a person is kind or whatever in just a month or two you knew him it should be years remember that!
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