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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: War & Peace
- Published: 03/20/2014
Kill The Carrier
Born 2000, M, from Newmanstown, PA, United StatesJacob woke up from his nap.
“Dude, we're going to jump in 5 minutes” said Patrick.
“You sleep like a rock, my friend. They shot rockets at the plane and we were almost hit.” Said Nico.
“I Bet he would have fallen like a rock too!” Patrick said.
Nico and Patrick laughed for a few seconds.
“Ha-Ha-Ha, guys very funny.”
He started to get his parachute on. He pulled out his wallet to look at the pictures of his family. There were his four sons and three daughters and his wife. Then he looked at the picture of his 2 dogs. Sheppy and Rodger. Sheppy was his German shepherd that he had rescued from terrorists 7 months before. Jacob’s family adored him and his other dog, which was a golden retriever, loved him too. Sheppy had bombs attached and was about to be let go to attack some U.S.A soldiers. But Jacob rescued him along with a bunch of other dogs. He believed that God has a place for all dogs up in heaven but he believed that it wasn’t this Sheppy’s time yet. He got Sheppy certified as a military dog and now he goes wherever Jacob goes. If Jacob gets deployed so does Sheppy. But this mission was too dangerous to bring his dog with him so he has a few men watching for him. Then Jacob pulled out his drivers’ license.
DANG! I look old for a 27-year-old man he thought. He hoped that him and his 2 men can get the job done so he can go home and get on with his citizen life, and do stuff like watch football, play with his kids, sleep in his own bed, and read. He keeps thinking about the “Lord of The Rings” book he has sitting on his desk, which he needs to finish. On his license he is Height is 6’8, he has black hair and is 267 pounds. Tonight he has only one goal: Kill this man who caused death to many people.
He started to help the other two get their parachutes on. Then they went to the back of the plane and grabbed their guns. Then went back to where they were.
“Men get ready to jump in two minutes. Two minutes I repeat two minutes.” Said the pilot.
“Okay guys we need to go in there quietly and quickly eliminate him, set the charges and get away. Everyone have at least 5 c4s?” asked Jacob.
“Yes” both the other men said.
“Man I hate killing people, It makes me sad sometimes, but I know I have to do it for our country.” Said Nico.
“Hey, this mission may get you guys promoted if the general is feeling good.” Said Jacob
They waited for 2 minutes.
“Okay let’s jump” Jacob said.
The red light over the door went on and they all opened it and jumped out.
15 minutes later they were in a empty courtyard in the enemy base. Jacob pulled out his military issued PDA and typed in what was needed.
Date: 11-2-23/ November 2nd 2023
Mission name: Kill the carrier
Objective: Eliminate the leader
Place: Death house, Iraq
GPS Cords: 4.5LO – 7.3LA
They cut off the parachutes and threw them in the back of a car. They walked toward and into the building and started down a hallway. With the silencers on their guns their gunshots would not be heard. Jacob set his first c4 on the wall and they kept walking. The first pair of soldiers came around the turn arguing about something.
“NO YOU THE BOMB!”
“NO YOU!”
“YOU ARE”
“NO YOU MUST BE!!”
Jacob and Patrick shot them both before they could see the three of them. Patrick set 2 charges on the second hallway. One in the front of the hallway and one on the other end. They turned left and saw some stairs with 6 guards there. Jacob thought they were getting closer because of the number of guards. They were just lounging around and not even expecting an attack. Jacob set a charge right behind himself on the floor. Nico threw a smoke grenade and shot 2 of them and Jacob and Patrick shot the last four. Nico set a charge on the stairs. Jacob set his last 3 charges as they headed down the hallway.
They made another right and saw ten guards by an iron door. Nico set another charge. The iron door was opened half-way and he saw the man. The leader just standing there with his wife. They took fire on all of the guards and hoped that they wouldn’t make any noise. Good thing they didn’t, the leader didn’t even notice. Nico also set the rest of his charges, one in the middle, one at the end, and one on the iron door. Jacob opened the iron door just a little more and saw an ak47 barrel in his face. He looked up to see the wife standing in front of him smiling coldly at him and she said,
“Welcome to your death.”
Nico hit her in the head with the butt of his gun and she crumpled to the floor. Jacob thanked Nico and saw the leader running down the other hallway on the other end of the room. Patrick set a charge in the room and took out his last two and ran after the leader. Jacob and Nico followed after him. Patrick set 1 charge in the hallway and held onto his last one as he gained on the leader. Then Patrick took out a bottle of crazy glue and squeezed, it popped open onto the c4. He tackled the leader and put the c4 on his vest where he could not reach it. Then the leader kicked him off and started to run again. Nico and Jacob caught up with Patrick and they kept running. Patrick got up and ran too. They came to a door and saw the leader running toward a plane. They ran out of the building and toward the plane. once they were 200 feet away from the building Jacob, Nico, and Patrick all pulled out their c4 detonators and said in unison
“3…2…1…GO!”
They all pressed the buttons and the building collapsed and blew up. The plane was already lifting off and Patrick pressed his button again and there was a small explosion on the plane. Right in he front of the plane. The first engine exploded on the right wing. Then the last 3 of the engines on the right wing gave out and also exploded. The plane tilted to the side but was still gaining altitude. Then it occurred to them that he got the vest off. Just when the men’s hopes were pushed farther down, the plane lurched forward and crashed into the ground and exploded.
“Kill confirmed,” said Jacob.
The three men cheered. Then thud, thud, thud of a helicopter was coming. It was a U.S Army helicopter. The men cheered again. A team of men came to the plane and got the black box to watch the footage of what had happened in the plane.
The leader jumped onto the plane and went to where the pilots were and yelled at them and was trying to take off his vest. The plane lifted off and then some of his men came out and were getting the vest off. They got it off and just as they did it exploded and everyone was blown back. The leader tried to fly the plane but then the plane tilted to the left because the engines blew up but the only ones left were the left wing ones and then someone fell into the leader and he pressed onto the wheel and the plane went forward and crashed into the ground. Then the video cut off.
“Good work team!” Jacob said.
2 weeks later, back at the base In DC, the general gave them badges and patches for their bravery and good actions in combat.
The three men looked at each other and grinned.©
THE END
This isn't the end of this man and his squad!! You have only met the first three men of the whole squad! If you want more just email me at: nanowoot@gmail.com
I also will be posting more stories on here too. THANK YOU FOR READING -chase brooks-
Copyright of Chase Brooks Who it also titled nanowoot, or nanonanowootwoot Copyright is with all of those names. ©
Kill The Carrier(Chase Brooks)
Jacob woke up from his nap.
“Dude, we're going to jump in 5 minutes” said Patrick.
“You sleep like a rock, my friend. They shot rockets at the plane and we were almost hit.” Said Nico.
“I Bet he would have fallen like a rock too!” Patrick said.
Nico and Patrick laughed for a few seconds.
“Ha-Ha-Ha, guys very funny.”
He started to get his parachute on. He pulled out his wallet to look at the pictures of his family. There were his four sons and three daughters and his wife. Then he looked at the picture of his 2 dogs. Sheppy and Rodger. Sheppy was his German shepherd that he had rescued from terrorists 7 months before. Jacob’s family adored him and his other dog, which was a golden retriever, loved him too. Sheppy had bombs attached and was about to be let go to attack some U.S.A soldiers. But Jacob rescued him along with a bunch of other dogs. He believed that God has a place for all dogs up in heaven but he believed that it wasn’t this Sheppy’s time yet. He got Sheppy certified as a military dog and now he goes wherever Jacob goes. If Jacob gets deployed so does Sheppy. But this mission was too dangerous to bring his dog with him so he has a few men watching for him. Then Jacob pulled out his drivers’ license.
DANG! I look old for a 27-year-old man he thought. He hoped that him and his 2 men can get the job done so he can go home and get on with his citizen life, and do stuff like watch football, play with his kids, sleep in his own bed, and read. He keeps thinking about the “Lord of The Rings” book he has sitting on his desk, which he needs to finish. On his license he is Height is 6’8, he has black hair and is 267 pounds. Tonight he has only one goal: Kill this man who caused death to many people.
He started to help the other two get their parachutes on. Then they went to the back of the plane and grabbed their guns. Then went back to where they were.
“Men get ready to jump in two minutes. Two minutes I repeat two minutes.” Said the pilot.
“Okay guys we need to go in there quietly and quickly eliminate him, set the charges and get away. Everyone have at least 5 c4s?” asked Jacob.
“Yes” both the other men said.
“Man I hate killing people, It makes me sad sometimes, but I know I have to do it for our country.” Said Nico.
“Hey, this mission may get you guys promoted if the general is feeling good.” Said Jacob
They waited for 2 minutes.
“Okay let’s jump” Jacob said.
The red light over the door went on and they all opened it and jumped out.
15 minutes later they were in a empty courtyard in the enemy base. Jacob pulled out his military issued PDA and typed in what was needed.
Date: 11-2-23/ November 2nd 2023
Mission name: Kill the carrier
Objective: Eliminate the leader
Place: Death house, Iraq
GPS Cords: 4.5LO – 7.3LA
They cut off the parachutes and threw them in the back of a car. They walked toward and into the building and started down a hallway. With the silencers on their guns their gunshots would not be heard. Jacob set his first c4 on the wall and they kept walking. The first pair of soldiers came around the turn arguing about something.
“NO YOU THE BOMB!”
“NO YOU!”
“YOU ARE”
“NO YOU MUST BE!!”
Jacob and Patrick shot them both before they could see the three of them. Patrick set 2 charges on the second hallway. One in the front of the hallway and one on the other end. They turned left and saw some stairs with 6 guards there. Jacob thought they were getting closer because of the number of guards. They were just lounging around and not even expecting an attack. Jacob set a charge right behind himself on the floor. Nico threw a smoke grenade and shot 2 of them and Jacob and Patrick shot the last four. Nico set a charge on the stairs. Jacob set his last 3 charges as they headed down the hallway.
They made another right and saw ten guards by an iron door. Nico set another charge. The iron door was opened half-way and he saw the man. The leader just standing there with his wife. They took fire on all of the guards and hoped that they wouldn’t make any noise. Good thing they didn’t, the leader didn’t even notice. Nico also set the rest of his charges, one in the middle, one at the end, and one on the iron door. Jacob opened the iron door just a little more and saw an ak47 barrel in his face. He looked up to see the wife standing in front of him smiling coldly at him and she said,
“Welcome to your death.”
Nico hit her in the head with the butt of his gun and she crumpled to the floor. Jacob thanked Nico and saw the leader running down the other hallway on the other end of the room. Patrick set a charge in the room and took out his last two and ran after the leader. Jacob and Nico followed after him. Patrick set 1 charge in the hallway and held onto his last one as he gained on the leader. Then Patrick took out a bottle of crazy glue and squeezed, it popped open onto the c4. He tackled the leader and put the c4 on his vest where he could not reach it. Then the leader kicked him off and started to run again. Nico and Jacob caught up with Patrick and they kept running. Patrick got up and ran too. They came to a door and saw the leader running toward a plane. They ran out of the building and toward the plane. once they were 200 feet away from the building Jacob, Nico, and Patrick all pulled out their c4 detonators and said in unison
“3…2…1…GO!”
They all pressed the buttons and the building collapsed and blew up. The plane was already lifting off and Patrick pressed his button again and there was a small explosion on the plane. Right in he front of the plane. The first engine exploded on the right wing. Then the last 3 of the engines on the right wing gave out and also exploded. The plane tilted to the side but was still gaining altitude. Then it occurred to them that he got the vest off. Just when the men’s hopes were pushed farther down, the plane lurched forward and crashed into the ground and exploded.
“Kill confirmed,” said Jacob.
The three men cheered. Then thud, thud, thud of a helicopter was coming. It was a U.S Army helicopter. The men cheered again. A team of men came to the plane and got the black box to watch the footage of what had happened in the plane.
The leader jumped onto the plane and went to where the pilots were and yelled at them and was trying to take off his vest. The plane lifted off and then some of his men came out and were getting the vest off. They got it off and just as they did it exploded and everyone was blown back. The leader tried to fly the plane but then the plane tilted to the left because the engines blew up but the only ones left were the left wing ones and then someone fell into the leader and he pressed onto the wheel and the plane went forward and crashed into the ground. Then the video cut off.
“Good work team!” Jacob said.
2 weeks later, back at the base In DC, the general gave them badges and patches for their bravery and good actions in combat.
The three men looked at each other and grinned.©
THE END
This isn't the end of this man and his squad!! You have only met the first three men of the whole squad! If you want more just email me at: nanowoot@gmail.com
I also will be posting more stories on here too. THANK YOU FOR READING -chase brooks-
Copyright of Chase Brooks Who it also titled nanowoot, or nanonanowootwoot Copyright is with all of those names. ©
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