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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 04/09/2014
Ring, Ring, Ring Max woke up and answered the phone. "Max, help Max, help 44th in the ally" then the phone cut. All day Max wondered what that call was. Anyway, Max didn't have time to go to 44th and especially not in the ally. Then Max remembered something. His dad went to 44th because he threw away something there! Max had to act fast so he called the police and went to 44th ally. When he got there, he saw faint blood but obviously he didn't die. The police arrived just as he was searching for clues. The first clue was that there were fingerprints going up the ally! Max hurried up the ally and saw a guy with his dad.
"Don't move or your dad dies" said the guy. Max acted quickly. With one swift movement he had the guy by his arm. "POLICE" he shouted. The police came up and arrested the guy. After this moment, Max's dad promised to never throw something that valuable in the garbage. Max asked his dad what he threw away. his dad answered, "my dentures"!
The Crime In the Ally(Caleb)
Ring, Ring, Ring Max woke up and answered the phone. "Max, help Max, help 44th in the ally" then the phone cut. All day Max wondered what that call was. Anyway, Max didn't have time to go to 44th and especially not in the ally. Then Max remembered something. His dad went to 44th because he threw away something there! Max had to act fast so he called the police and went to 44th ally. When he got there, he saw faint blood but obviously he didn't die. The police arrived just as he was searching for clues. The first clue was that there were fingerprints going up the ally! Max hurried up the ally and saw a guy with his dad.
"Don't move or your dad dies" said the guy. Max acted quickly. With one swift movement he had the guy by his arm. "POLICE" he shouted. The police came up and arrested the guy. After this moment, Max's dad promised to never throw something that valuable in the garbage. Max asked his dad what he threw away. his dad answered, "my dentures"!
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