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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 04/14/2014
Steel Man
In Year 2034, there was a guy name Robin Cruise who lived in a town called Xerath. Robin Cruise is a smart and intelligent man who worked as an engineer. He worked as an engineer for about 5 years learning how to make machines and other mechanical stuffs. But his uniqueness was that he could make things that other people could not make. He lived there with his Parents name Joe and Lucy, they are his parent who always supports him on the things he does and also the things he made. Suddenly, an unidentified flying object (U.F.O.) flies above him and his parents at that time. He was shock and do not know what it is because he never sees them. He then followed the direction where the U.F.O. might have fallen, but his parents did not let him to follow the U.F.O. so he stayed.
At approximately 12:00 pm, when Robin and his parents were at sleep, there was a buzzing voice behind their house, calling their name. Robin was awake at that time so he decided to see who were calling them. But when he opens his curtain and opens the window, a creature name Venom entered into his room very fast and pushes him down. He falls into the floor and can’t say anything because venom punches his neck. What he could do is only see and hear what venom said to him. Venom said that he wanted to rule over Xerath and will not attack Xerath citizens if they will obey him. After he said that, Joe came into his room and shout because he was shock at what he just seen before. Venom approach Joe slowly and kill him because he did not want people to sees him. Then he ran and gone after he killed Robin’s Father. Robin cried and he mother come and cried also.
The next day, Robin was really sad and still remembers what Venom did to his Father. Because of this, Robin decided to take revenge! He decided to make a suit which is very strong and powerful that will be made out of special steel called as Titanium. This steel is very strong to cover his body against bullet or even grenades. This takes him about a year to create that super high-tech suit. But there’s one thing that he need. He needs his friends to help him. So he called his friend name Jack Pack and Bill Kill to help him in making the costume that he need to take revenge against Venom.
In year 2035, He has done his suit and ready to take his revenge. But there is one problem; he did not know where Venom stayed in Xerath, because he is hiding and preparing equipments to start attacking and taking over Xerath. But what he knows is that Venom came from a planet called Zorgon. He then use Jack Pack’s jet pack to go to Zorgon. When He arrived at Zorgon, he saw there are a lot of citizens living there. But when he arrives there, one of the citizen came to approach him and told him where Venom stayed at His planet Xerath. This citizen also tell him that Venom was a really powerful person and one of his special powers is that he could sense anyone presence who is trying to attack him. So Robin decided to get back to Xerath but its too late that he saw his citizen in Xerath especially his mother had died. When he saw this, he directly become really mad and use his suit. His friends name him ‘Steel Man’ because he could fly without limit and no one could hurt him because his suit is made of Titanium. After he used his suit completely, he flies directly to where Venom is hiding.
At the time he arrived there, there is a lot of people who guard there using high-tech weapons. So he shoots the people one by one and kills them. So after he was done killing the guarders, he went directly to Venom and told him that he was here to take his revenge. Venom said, ‘So you’re here to take revenge huh? Come then and show me what you’ve got!’ Steel Man directly attacks him with his special high tech gun called Gong Gun. But this gun creates no impact to him because he was really strong. He suddenly remembered what has been told by the citizen on Zorgon. He pulled his knife right out the suit and stabbed him right at his heart. The Knife kills Venom and he died there directly faced to faced to Robin. Robin realize that now he should make his Citizen in Xerath save and secure. He will never forget what his mother and father had told him and do to him.
The End
Steel Man - The Iron Knight(Dennis Kho)
Steel Man
In Year 2034, there was a guy name Robin Cruise who lived in a town called Xerath. Robin Cruise is a smart and intelligent man who worked as an engineer. He worked as an engineer for about 5 years learning how to make machines and other mechanical stuffs. But his uniqueness was that he could make things that other people could not make. He lived there with his Parents name Joe and Lucy, they are his parent who always supports him on the things he does and also the things he made. Suddenly, an unidentified flying object (U.F.O.) flies above him and his parents at that time. He was shock and do not know what it is because he never sees them. He then followed the direction where the U.F.O. might have fallen, but his parents did not let him to follow the U.F.O. so he stayed.
At approximately 12:00 pm, when Robin and his parents were at sleep, there was a buzzing voice behind their house, calling their name. Robin was awake at that time so he decided to see who were calling them. But when he opens his curtain and opens the window, a creature name Venom entered into his room very fast and pushes him down. He falls into the floor and can’t say anything because venom punches his neck. What he could do is only see and hear what venom said to him. Venom said that he wanted to rule over Xerath and will not attack Xerath citizens if they will obey him. After he said that, Joe came into his room and shout because he was shock at what he just seen before. Venom approach Joe slowly and kill him because he did not want people to sees him. Then he ran and gone after he killed Robin’s Father. Robin cried and he mother come and cried also.
The next day, Robin was really sad and still remembers what Venom did to his Father. Because of this, Robin decided to take revenge! He decided to make a suit which is very strong and powerful that will be made out of special steel called as Titanium. This steel is very strong to cover his body against bullet or even grenades. This takes him about a year to create that super high-tech suit. But there’s one thing that he need. He needs his friends to help him. So he called his friend name Jack Pack and Bill Kill to help him in making the costume that he need to take revenge against Venom.
In year 2035, He has done his suit and ready to take his revenge. But there is one problem; he did not know where Venom stayed in Xerath, because he is hiding and preparing equipments to start attacking and taking over Xerath. But what he knows is that Venom came from a planet called Zorgon. He then use Jack Pack’s jet pack to go to Zorgon. When He arrived at Zorgon, he saw there are a lot of citizens living there. But when he arrives there, one of the citizen came to approach him and told him where Venom stayed at His planet Xerath. This citizen also tell him that Venom was a really powerful person and one of his special powers is that he could sense anyone presence who is trying to attack him. So Robin decided to get back to Xerath but its too late that he saw his citizen in Xerath especially his mother had died. When he saw this, he directly become really mad and use his suit. His friends name him ‘Steel Man’ because he could fly without limit and no one could hurt him because his suit is made of Titanium. After he used his suit completely, he flies directly to where Venom is hiding.
At the time he arrived there, there is a lot of people who guard there using high-tech weapons. So he shoots the people one by one and kills them. So after he was done killing the guarders, he went directly to Venom and told him that he was here to take his revenge. Venom said, ‘So you’re here to take revenge huh? Come then and show me what you’ve got!’ Steel Man directly attacks him with his special high tech gun called Gong Gun. But this gun creates no impact to him because he was really strong. He suddenly remembered what has been told by the citizen on Zorgon. He pulled his knife right out the suit and stabbed him right at his heart. The Knife kills Venom and he died there directly faced to faced to Robin. Robin realize that now he should make his Citizen in Xerath save and secure. He will never forget what his mother and father had told him and do to him.
The End
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