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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 04/16/2014
I woke up in the middle of a forest, the sun shining so brightly that i felt the burning sensation inside my body. The last thing I remembered was the ship that i was on was swallowed by a vicious wave of the ocean. Now I’m trapped in this weird forest, having no idea where to go. I searched for anything useful there, cut down wood to make weapons and traps to get some food, so that I can eat and survive.
The next day, I woke up and the first thing I saw was a giant eye, it was really big, as big as my body. I ran away from it and what surprised me the most was, it was actually a titan. It looked down on me as if I’m just an insect. I thought that it wanted to eat me, but it suddenly disappeared into thin air. I was startled to see that.
Not long after that, a man came from behind the tall grass.
“Hi! I’m sorry to surprise you, did you see that titan earlier? It was me, I’m a titan shifter. Which means that I could turn into a titan, a gigantic sized human with unique powers different from one and another, anytime I want without any limitation. My name is Bertolt, nice to meet you,” said Bertolt.
“Where am I?” asked me.
“You are in the middle of a forest near Trost City,” replied him.
I got up and asked him to help me get out of that place. He said that it’s going to be hard, because I came from a different world and I should fling the axe of despair to get to anywhere I want, which is now my home.
He brought me to Trost City, a city where lots of people are doing businesses. Yes, there are a lot of titan shifter, just like Bertolt. They were trained to be discipline and to control their power before they were allowed to go out of the city and turn into a titan. Bertolt said that there were many people who came from the other world, lost in the forest just like me. And they were trained here, given the power to be a titan shifter and stays here forever. I wanted to be able to turn into a titan too, but I want to go back to my home. So, I decided to join the training.
I never thought that it will be a tough training. We were all trained to push and break through our own limit, and that’s how all the titan shifter trained themselves back then. We were taught how to use weapons, and martial arts.
Two years had passed. I had a lot of friends, people loved me. And I made a team, the name was “Smite Ignite”. Together with Bertolt, we had decided to go and look for the axe of despair.
They said that the axe of despair can only be found if we go through the misty village in the north. So, we went to the north, bringing our horses with us. Sometimes, we would just take a rest near the river and get some water to drink. Hunt for animals on our titan body that would make it easier to look for animals. We spent around 3 days and 3 nights to arrive at misty village. And it’s still a long journey to get to Mount Taric, where the axe of despair lies.
The moment we arrived there, Bertolt asked us not to talk to loud. And to ignore all the things that we heard and not to draw out our weapon, because all of them were just an illusion, they were not real. And whoever draws out their weapon, will be lost in the misty village.
Suddenly I saw a flying ghost, later there were two, and later there were 10 of them. They flew in a very fast speed. One by one they came to everyone of us, and sucked our soul out. There was one who sucked mine too. It was horrible, painful, I was holding my sword and was ready to draw it out, but I remembered what Bertolt said. So I hold back, and just let my soul sucked by them. And slowly, I began to lost my sight, and everything turned dark. After a moment, I opened my eyes and saw myself outside the misty village.
“You almost lost your life there,” said Bertolt.
“Yeah, but thanks to you I can hold myself back,” I replied.
We continued our journey, through a cliff, where below we could see clearly an ocean of lava. The road was so narrow that we should be extra careful crossing the road. I heard someone shouted from behind. And i found out that one of us fell into the lava, his body was burned and sank into the lava. Everyone was scared, they stopped walking in the middle of the road, but Bertolt encouraged them. I know it’s hard to lose our comrades, but I felt that we need to continue. I will not let my comrade die in vain.
We arrived at the end of the road, and I saw this huge door in front of us. It was even bigger than the size of a titan. We tried to open it and inside was another long road. At the end was the Mount Taric we’re looking for. We rushed to the mountain, but on the way there, some of our horses were striked by arrows coming from the side. I hurried and lead everyone to a shelter to avoid the arrows. It turned out that they were the guardians of Mount Taric, the Gems Guardians. They were pointing their bows and arrows at us.
We tried to explain what was our intention. But, they were not listening. They were planning to burn us on fire, and Bertolt can’t hold it anymore. He turned into a titan and destroyed the cages we were in. He tried to explain it again and they understood.
They let us to continue our journey, and we arrive at the peak of Mount Taric. We found the axe of despair, and it said that it can only be used once. My comrades were cheering for me, they were happy, but also sad at the same time. It’s time for me to get back to where I belong. I hold the axe of despair above my head, and say the magic words, “EENIE MEENIE MINEY MO!”
The axe of despair shined so bright, and I heard someone calling out my name. I opened my eyes with a wet face. It was my mom waking me up to go to school, and I realized that it was just a dream.
Just A Dream(Youri)
I woke up in the middle of a forest, the sun shining so brightly that i felt the burning sensation inside my body. The last thing I remembered was the ship that i was on was swallowed by a vicious wave of the ocean. Now I’m trapped in this weird forest, having no idea where to go. I searched for anything useful there, cut down wood to make weapons and traps to get some food, so that I can eat and survive.
The next day, I woke up and the first thing I saw was a giant eye, it was really big, as big as my body. I ran away from it and what surprised me the most was, it was actually a titan. It looked down on me as if I’m just an insect. I thought that it wanted to eat me, but it suddenly disappeared into thin air. I was startled to see that.
Not long after that, a man came from behind the tall grass.
“Hi! I’m sorry to surprise you, did you see that titan earlier? It was me, I’m a titan shifter. Which means that I could turn into a titan, a gigantic sized human with unique powers different from one and another, anytime I want without any limitation. My name is Bertolt, nice to meet you,” said Bertolt.
“Where am I?” asked me.
“You are in the middle of a forest near Trost City,” replied him.
I got up and asked him to help me get out of that place. He said that it’s going to be hard, because I came from a different world and I should fling the axe of despair to get to anywhere I want, which is now my home.
He brought me to Trost City, a city where lots of people are doing businesses. Yes, there are a lot of titan shifter, just like Bertolt. They were trained to be discipline and to control their power before they were allowed to go out of the city and turn into a titan. Bertolt said that there were many people who came from the other world, lost in the forest just like me. And they were trained here, given the power to be a titan shifter and stays here forever. I wanted to be able to turn into a titan too, but I want to go back to my home. So, I decided to join the training.
I never thought that it will be a tough training. We were all trained to push and break through our own limit, and that’s how all the titan shifter trained themselves back then. We were taught how to use weapons, and martial arts.
Two years had passed. I had a lot of friends, people loved me. And I made a team, the name was “Smite Ignite”. Together with Bertolt, we had decided to go and look for the axe of despair.
They said that the axe of despair can only be found if we go through the misty village in the north. So, we went to the north, bringing our horses with us. Sometimes, we would just take a rest near the river and get some water to drink. Hunt for animals on our titan body that would make it easier to look for animals. We spent around 3 days and 3 nights to arrive at misty village. And it’s still a long journey to get to Mount Taric, where the axe of despair lies.
The moment we arrived there, Bertolt asked us not to talk to loud. And to ignore all the things that we heard and not to draw out our weapon, because all of them were just an illusion, they were not real. And whoever draws out their weapon, will be lost in the misty village.
Suddenly I saw a flying ghost, later there were two, and later there were 10 of them. They flew in a very fast speed. One by one they came to everyone of us, and sucked our soul out. There was one who sucked mine too. It was horrible, painful, I was holding my sword and was ready to draw it out, but I remembered what Bertolt said. So I hold back, and just let my soul sucked by them. And slowly, I began to lost my sight, and everything turned dark. After a moment, I opened my eyes and saw myself outside the misty village.
“You almost lost your life there,” said Bertolt.
“Yeah, but thanks to you I can hold myself back,” I replied.
We continued our journey, through a cliff, where below we could see clearly an ocean of lava. The road was so narrow that we should be extra careful crossing the road. I heard someone shouted from behind. And i found out that one of us fell into the lava, his body was burned and sank into the lava. Everyone was scared, they stopped walking in the middle of the road, but Bertolt encouraged them. I know it’s hard to lose our comrades, but I felt that we need to continue. I will not let my comrade die in vain.
We arrived at the end of the road, and I saw this huge door in front of us. It was even bigger than the size of a titan. We tried to open it and inside was another long road. At the end was the Mount Taric we’re looking for. We rushed to the mountain, but on the way there, some of our horses were striked by arrows coming from the side. I hurried and lead everyone to a shelter to avoid the arrows. It turned out that they were the guardians of Mount Taric, the Gems Guardians. They were pointing their bows and arrows at us.
We tried to explain what was our intention. But, they were not listening. They were planning to burn us on fire, and Bertolt can’t hold it anymore. He turned into a titan and destroyed the cages we were in. He tried to explain it again and they understood.
They let us to continue our journey, and we arrive at the peak of Mount Taric. We found the axe of despair, and it said that it can only be used once. My comrades were cheering for me, they were happy, but also sad at the same time. It’s time for me to get back to where I belong. I hold the axe of despair above my head, and say the magic words, “EENIE MEENIE MINEY MO!”
The axe of despair shined so bright, and I heard someone calling out my name. I opened my eyes with a wet face. It was my mom waking me up to go to school, and I realized that it was just a dream.
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