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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 04/17/2014
A group of friends are going on a trip to one of their parents holiday cottage in sunny Los Angeles. There were Lana, Bree, Lola, Santana and Bridget. All of them were the popular ones since high school and still are now. But even though all of them are best friends, still there is still competition between them, who’s more pretty, who’s more rich and stuffs like that. On the way there they chatted.
“ I wish Brad could’ve come, i miss him so much.” Lana bragged.
“ Don’t bragged Lana, we know someone here is still single” Bree glared at Lola.
“ Stop it guys, don’t mocked our Lola like that, it wasn’t her fault that she was born kinda fat. “ Lola laughed.
“ Hey, i’m 47!” Bridget yelled.
“ Can you all shut up? I’m trying to sleep here.” Santana yelled
“ Whatever fat ass.” Lana bluffed
Hours later they’ve all arrived. Amazed with the view! Santana’s parent’s cottage is very big. It’s like a mansion. Santana didn’t like to bragged she is the quiet type and doesn’t talk much. It was dinner time, and all of them are hungry and start cooking. Although the house is big there was no maid to clean the house, so they should clean it together. Some complain and some don’t and the day went through just like that. All of them decided to sleep together since the house is too big and all of them are too scared to sleep alone.
All of them decided to play ouija board . The Ouija board also known as a spirit board or talking board, is a flat board marked with the letters of the alphabet, the numbers 0–9, the words "yes", "no", "hello" (occasionally), and "goodbye", along with various symbols and graphics. Because they wanted to act cool by playing this game and prove how brave they are, but Bridget and Santana the quiet ones wasn’t really interested.
“ I want to ask first! “ Lana yelled “ “Oh spirit, come as we want to ask some questions come oh spirit. “ Lana mumbled and the wind started to blow.
“ It’s happening guys!! “ Bree yelled excitedly.
“ Oh spirit, i wanna ask who is the prettiest among all of us. “ Lola asked
“ Not you” the ouija board move and everyone was surprised that it worked.
“ MY TURN! Oh dear spirit who will die first?” Bree yelled happily
“ YOU” the ouija board move once again
Everyone froze. The wind stopped and all of them get back to bed, Bree was terrified but she said that the spirit is joking and nothing will really happened, she choose not to believe it.
The next day everyone is going to the beach to get themselve tanned up and hot as well. The sun is fiery hot and everyone brought their sunblocks, the highest PH one. All of them used it and go tanning on the beach. It was so hot that even the water turns warm. They were chatting and chatting in their bathing suit. Everyone feels hot because of the weather and decided to get back now. But greedy Bree wanted perfect tanned skin and forced everyone to stay.
“ Bree i feel hot can we just get back now?” Bridget said angrily
“ You shut up fatty, you don’t know the risk to be beautiful as me is to take the pain, even if it kills you. “ Bree yelled.
“ Whatever..” Bridget said
Everyone went back and just after few steps they take Bree yelled in terror.
“ Ahhhh help guys my skin is burning! It hurts guys help me!” Bree yelled her skin is so red and some skin is peeled.
“ Oh my Bree did you use sunblock?” Santana asked
“ Yes stupid! Seee! “ Bree yelled
Santana saw her sunblock and saw it wasn’t sunblock cream it’s mosquito repellent cream.
“ Ugh you are not careful enough this is not sunblock!” Santana yelled
“ Agh just help me alright!” Bree yelled in pain
“ Hahaha i guess the ouija board is right after all.” Bridget said quietly.
Bree was brought to the nearest hospital, she is sunburnt and it’s not that bad, she just need to cool herself down and doesn’t move too much, and she returned home afer the good news. Everyone was thinking that it was just Bree’s careless mistake to mistakenly take the mosquito repellent instead of sunblock, but Bree is sure that she took sunblock! This is a mystery to her that she need to figure out. Who could did this? Is the ouija board right that she was going to die? She isn’t sure yet.
It was 2 am in the morning and everyone was sleeping, Bree is awake as she wanted to pee, her skin still hurts but she tried to move, she don’t want to disturb others by waking them up accompanying them. As she is walking down the hall, she heard a sound, footsteps. She looked back and there is no one so she walks still. She is inside the toilet and someone pushes her! She screams and asked for help but it was to late as the person banged her head to the closet and blood was everywhere, she is dead and no one knows.
It was 8 am in the morning and Lana went to the toilet.
“ OH MY GOD OH MY, BREE IS DEAD” Lana screamed in terror.
Everyone wakes up and saw Bree’s dead body and call 911. Everyone was still confused who could do such things to Bree. Everyone is shocked, and afraid that this might happen to them. So tomorrow they are coming home, but there is no signal for them to call 911. They were confused as yesterday’s the signal was fine, and suspect that there is a killer after them. Suddenly the TV was on in the living room and a man covered in mask speaks,
“ Hello, you might be wondering what is going on, who killed Bree and other stuffs like that.” The unknown man said
“ WHO ARE YOU AND WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS.” Lola screamed
“ HAHA you are going to die, DIE! Like i kill Bree and Santana.” The unkown man yelled
They all realized that Santana isn’t there and began to panicked.
“ WHERE IS SANTANA YOU BETTER GIVE HER BACK TO US NOW. “ Bridget yelled
The TV was off and everyone is panicking, the doors were locked, the windows too and they can’t escape. The tried to push and kick the window but it won’t break. Everyone is confused, what’s going on, what have they done to make that unknown person did this to them. Few hours pass and they still didn’t get any clue who did this to them.
As everyone was panicking, the TV was on again. The anonymous person appears once more.
“ Hello, if you want to stay alive you better watch out because i am coming.” The person said
“ I DONT CARE! JUST GET ALL OF US OUT OF HERE YOU EVIL..! “ Bridget screamed
“ Eyyy, don’t mock me like that.” The person said
“ I DON’T CARE I AM NOT AFRAID OF YOU “ Bridget yelled
“ Hey, watch your back “ The person said
Bridget ignores him, and a person dressed in black with a mask on appears at Bridget’s back. Everyone was screaming and Bridget saw him. She asked for help but there was no use, that person shot her in the head and she was dead. Everyone saw it and run away! And the person follows, each of them was caught and was shot. Everyone is dead now.
“ Hahaha i did it.” The person said as she opens her mask
It was Santana, the barely alive Lana saw it and was asking her why.
“ Well Lana, you see i hated you all since that time you guys talk about me at the back. We were best friends and you betrayed me. And i’m not such a forgiving person. You guys ruined me as i had no friend and deppressed and now you guys will pay, HAHAHA. “ Santana yelled
Lana catches her last breath and was dead, Santana went out of her house and going back home alone. She act like she didn’t know who did this and said that she was the last survivor. Since then the media is interested with her and she became the world most famous author with the story of her surviving a murder case. When she was the killer. Nobody knows, and no one will know. You better watch out, the person you know the most may be the enemy.
The Unexpected(Karen)
A group of friends are going on a trip to one of their parents holiday cottage in sunny Los Angeles. There were Lana, Bree, Lola, Santana and Bridget. All of them were the popular ones since high school and still are now. But even though all of them are best friends, still there is still competition between them, who’s more pretty, who’s more rich and stuffs like that. On the way there they chatted.
“ I wish Brad could’ve come, i miss him so much.” Lana bragged.
“ Don’t bragged Lana, we know someone here is still single” Bree glared at Lola.
“ Stop it guys, don’t mocked our Lola like that, it wasn’t her fault that she was born kinda fat. “ Lola laughed.
“ Hey, i’m 47!” Bridget yelled.
“ Can you all shut up? I’m trying to sleep here.” Santana yelled
“ Whatever fat ass.” Lana bluffed
Hours later they’ve all arrived. Amazed with the view! Santana’s parent’s cottage is very big. It’s like a mansion. Santana didn’t like to bragged she is the quiet type and doesn’t talk much. It was dinner time, and all of them are hungry and start cooking. Although the house is big there was no maid to clean the house, so they should clean it together. Some complain and some don’t and the day went through just like that. All of them decided to sleep together since the house is too big and all of them are too scared to sleep alone.
All of them decided to play ouija board . The Ouija board also known as a spirit board or talking board, is a flat board marked with the letters of the alphabet, the numbers 0–9, the words "yes", "no", "hello" (occasionally), and "goodbye", along with various symbols and graphics. Because they wanted to act cool by playing this game and prove how brave they are, but Bridget and Santana the quiet ones wasn’t really interested.
“ I want to ask first! “ Lana yelled “ “Oh spirit, come as we want to ask some questions come oh spirit. “ Lana mumbled and the wind started to blow.
“ It’s happening guys!! “ Bree yelled excitedly.
“ Oh spirit, i wanna ask who is the prettiest among all of us. “ Lola asked
“ Not you” the ouija board move and everyone was surprised that it worked.
“ MY TURN! Oh dear spirit who will die first?” Bree yelled happily
“ YOU” the ouija board move once again
Everyone froze. The wind stopped and all of them get back to bed, Bree was terrified but she said that the spirit is joking and nothing will really happened, she choose not to believe it.
The next day everyone is going to the beach to get themselve tanned up and hot as well. The sun is fiery hot and everyone brought their sunblocks, the highest PH one. All of them used it and go tanning on the beach. It was so hot that even the water turns warm. They were chatting and chatting in their bathing suit. Everyone feels hot because of the weather and decided to get back now. But greedy Bree wanted perfect tanned skin and forced everyone to stay.
“ Bree i feel hot can we just get back now?” Bridget said angrily
“ You shut up fatty, you don’t know the risk to be beautiful as me is to take the pain, even if it kills you. “ Bree yelled.
“ Whatever..” Bridget said
Everyone went back and just after few steps they take Bree yelled in terror.
“ Ahhhh help guys my skin is burning! It hurts guys help me!” Bree yelled her skin is so red and some skin is peeled.
“ Oh my Bree did you use sunblock?” Santana asked
“ Yes stupid! Seee! “ Bree yelled
Santana saw her sunblock and saw it wasn’t sunblock cream it’s mosquito repellent cream.
“ Ugh you are not careful enough this is not sunblock!” Santana yelled
“ Agh just help me alright!” Bree yelled in pain
“ Hahaha i guess the ouija board is right after all.” Bridget said quietly.
Bree was brought to the nearest hospital, she is sunburnt and it’s not that bad, she just need to cool herself down and doesn’t move too much, and she returned home afer the good news. Everyone was thinking that it was just Bree’s careless mistake to mistakenly take the mosquito repellent instead of sunblock, but Bree is sure that she took sunblock! This is a mystery to her that she need to figure out. Who could did this? Is the ouija board right that she was going to die? She isn’t sure yet.
It was 2 am in the morning and everyone was sleeping, Bree is awake as she wanted to pee, her skin still hurts but she tried to move, she don’t want to disturb others by waking them up accompanying them. As she is walking down the hall, she heard a sound, footsteps. She looked back and there is no one so she walks still. She is inside the toilet and someone pushes her! She screams and asked for help but it was to late as the person banged her head to the closet and blood was everywhere, she is dead and no one knows.
It was 8 am in the morning and Lana went to the toilet.
“ OH MY GOD OH MY, BREE IS DEAD” Lana screamed in terror.
Everyone wakes up and saw Bree’s dead body and call 911. Everyone was still confused who could do such things to Bree. Everyone is shocked, and afraid that this might happen to them. So tomorrow they are coming home, but there is no signal for them to call 911. They were confused as yesterday’s the signal was fine, and suspect that there is a killer after them. Suddenly the TV was on in the living room and a man covered in mask speaks,
“ Hello, you might be wondering what is going on, who killed Bree and other stuffs like that.” The unknown man said
“ WHO ARE YOU AND WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS.” Lola screamed
“ HAHA you are going to die, DIE! Like i kill Bree and Santana.” The unkown man yelled
They all realized that Santana isn’t there and began to panicked.
“ WHERE IS SANTANA YOU BETTER GIVE HER BACK TO US NOW. “ Bridget yelled
The TV was off and everyone is panicking, the doors were locked, the windows too and they can’t escape. The tried to push and kick the window but it won’t break. Everyone is confused, what’s going on, what have they done to make that unknown person did this to them. Few hours pass and they still didn’t get any clue who did this to them.
As everyone was panicking, the TV was on again. The anonymous person appears once more.
“ Hello, if you want to stay alive you better watch out because i am coming.” The person said
“ I DONT CARE! JUST GET ALL OF US OUT OF HERE YOU EVIL..! “ Bridget screamed
“ Eyyy, don’t mock me like that.” The person said
“ I DON’T CARE I AM NOT AFRAID OF YOU “ Bridget yelled
“ Hey, watch your back “ The person said
Bridget ignores him, and a person dressed in black with a mask on appears at Bridget’s back. Everyone was screaming and Bridget saw him. She asked for help but there was no use, that person shot her in the head and she was dead. Everyone saw it and run away! And the person follows, each of them was caught and was shot. Everyone is dead now.
“ Hahaha i did it.” The person said as she opens her mask
It was Santana, the barely alive Lana saw it and was asking her why.
“ Well Lana, you see i hated you all since that time you guys talk about me at the back. We were best friends and you betrayed me. And i’m not such a forgiving person. You guys ruined me as i had no friend and deppressed and now you guys will pay, HAHAHA. “ Santana yelled
Lana catches her last breath and was dead, Santana went out of her house and going back home alone. She act like she didn’t know who did this and said that she was the last survivor. Since then the media is interested with her and she became the world most famous author with the story of her surviving a murder case. When she was the killer. Nobody knows, and no one will know. You better watch out, the person you know the most may be the enemy.
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