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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 04/17/2014
Trosius is a peaceful planet, but an organization called the Venom wanted the world for themselves.
July 25, year 592, a hero was born, named Lucas, of the Verdicus family. He always wanted to be hero since he was ten, it’s his dream. It was a game that really influences his will to be a hero. But the world just seem so plain, there’s nothing to save. Until…
January 28, year 609. Lucas loves to explore, and right at that day, his parents were busy with work, so after he arrive home, he went outside and start wandering around. He ended up in a space station, though of course he was not allowed to go inside, he still can watch the massive rocket from the outside. Lucas learned about rocket in the extra class he took. It was just one more minute for it to blast off. He was waiting eagerly. But something was wrong; he observed the rocket and saw a piece missing. He tried to convince the security guard but still he was not allowed to pass. So he jumped over the fence and ran into the station. The good news is, he found one of an officer that believe him, the bad news is, it was too late. The rocket was already creating the fire boosting it up little by little. The control room called the pilots and the pilots quickly went to the shuttle pod. The pilots were safe and the rocket exploded before it even reaches the outer space. Lucas was awarded a medal, but the problem is not over yet. The rocket was checked again before it launched, it wasn’t a coincidence, the piece was stolen. The piece is a really important substance that allows the rocket to be stable. They suspect an organization called the “Venom”. The Venom has always made a wreckage wherever they go. No one knows their true objective but they believe Venom will demolish anything in their path. And from that day on, Lucas know what to do to achieve his dream.
March 27, year 609. The rocket incident left no clue besides the possibility of Venom. Lucas waited and finally, something happen. That morning, a ruby was stolen from a jewelry store, the news quickly spread across the country, raising the alert about Venom. Lucas was allowed to investigate the scene. The glass was broken recklessly, which means Venom entered the room with no means of silence. It seems like Venom stole the ruby not for wealth, which means Venom’s objective is not to be rich. But they are stealing powerful materials. Lucas invited his friend, Ralph Vanderton, to search for answers. They recalled a legend that once said about a substance powerful enough to affect the universe. The substance was too dangerous that it was put in a special box locked by complicated codes, fingerprint scan, and impossible puzzles. The box was then launched into outer space followed by a special machine designed to protect the box. The machine was equipped by a special voice command only by the inventor, to turn in off. People call that substance “Retnum” and scientist had been researching it for years. And now it’s time for Lucas and Ralph to step up the game. They predicted that the next thing is the strongest engine from the car repair shop not far from the jewelry store. But Venom was smarter than they thought.
April 19, year 609. The car repair shop lost their strongest engine. But the event was unexpected. The shop did set the security system tighter and even the government gave the equipment needed to capture the culprit. But Venom knew the people knew they were coming. Venom sneaked in at 03:00 A.M. where everyone let their guard down. Everyone was so tired and sleepy; they did not expect Venom to move right at that time. And when the shop opened, they notice the missing item. Lucas and Ralph then arrive at the shop. Lucas decided to put a hidden camera in an exact hidden spot for the next location. What he failed to figure out is the Venom’s way to know what he is doing. This time, the plan was for Lucas and Ralph to actually be in the location themselves. The next location was the tool shop, Lucas and Ralph will be there at April 30 around 10:00 P.M. and stay until sunrise. But this did not happen…
April 27, year 609. Lucas and Ralph were at the tool shop to remind the owner that they will be there in three more days at night and also to warn him to be careful. BOOM!!!, the sound catches everyone’s attention people in the tool shop started storming out and look around. Meanwhile, inside the shop, Venom started to move. An employee was still inside and saw the Venom stealing things.
“HEY!!!” The employee shouted.
The Venom was prepared in these kinds of situations. And from behind, the employee was injected with a kind of fluid and fell unconscious. And when he woke up, people were gathering around him.
“What happened?” The owner asked.
“I… I don’t remember, I was just here checking the supplies and… I just fall unconscious, maybe I slip and fell.” He replied.
“Go home and rest first, I guess that’s all for today, we’ll just—“
“Wait!!!” Lucas interrupted.
Lucas just remembered that he set the hidden camera already. So everyone quickly rush to the hidden camera spot, the camera is not there. Everyone rummaged through the mess but the camera isn’t there. Lucas started to suspect a spy; it might be someone on their team or a tiny moving camera that follows him everywhere. Then, he saw something sticking out of the wall, it was a round red button with a white press me text on it. Lucas pressed the button with no hesitation, and a holographic image was projected above the button. It showed a silhouette of a cyborg behind a man with a lab coat on sitting on a chair with the arm-rest.
“Ah, Mister Verdicus, you have underestimated the Venom, you thought you were smarter, but it wouldn’t be so fun if it is that way, would it?” The guy on the chair started talking, he has a gentle voice. “Now, I bet you wonder how can I get the Retnum by the things I collect. Why don’t you come to the next location and find out?”
Looking at the things stolen, there is just one more powerful substance and that is in the science department center.
May 5, year 609. Ralph brought his brother, Felix Vanderton, because Felix likes these kinds of stuffs, he’s all about science. When they were about to get in the car, Lucas felt something was following him, he turned back but nothing was there. A few minutes later, he saw a little machine-like spider crawling behind him with a tiny camera on it. He picked it up and it seems like that’s how Venom always planned ahead of him. Knowing that it wouldn’t happen again, he formulated a plan. When they entered the science department, they split up, Felix went for the testing room, Ralph to the research room, and Lucas to the meeting room. Everything seemed normal until the Venom attacked. There was a large noise in the lobby so the three of them hurried there. And when they arrived, there were robots about ten-feet tall with a blaster shooting everywhere. One of the blasts from the blaster hit a five-inch diamond cube and it just shattered to pieces. Among the robots, there was one blaster that’s different; a normal blaster has a shiny metallic silver color, while one of them is gold in color. It might be of different use since it was not used yet. None of the boys knows how to fight so this is a big problem. All of a sudden, the firing stopped. A holographic image like the one they saw about a week ago formed, but this one was large, it appeared just right in the middle of the lobby, the man’s voice was loud and clear.
“You have failed Lucas, the science department failed to find out more about the Retnum, while I have been researching about it more than they do and found the answer, with the Retnum, I will wipe the memory of humanity and I can rule them, and you. Just one more step and I will have Retnum and then, humanity. Come and stop me if you can. I’d like to see you try.”
One of the robots, with the special blaster shot Felix, he fell back and hit the ground. When he opened his eyes, Lucas and Ralph were already around him. There were no scratches or anything; the blast did not even create the slightest mark. But there was something else, Felix doesn’t know who anyone is, his memory was wiped out completely, his mind is just like a clean sheet of paper. Everyone tried their best in bringing his memory back, but there was no coming back. Felix himself was confused the whole time. And a few days later, he’s gone; he went out in the middle of the night. Lucas and Ralph can’t go on a search for him; they still have the Venom to take care of. And then…
May 8, year 609. The Venom has started its move. At about 01:00 P.M. all electronic gadgets started to buzz. And then Venom was everywhere, he started his plan to use Retnum. No one knows how and where he found it. Lucas and Ralph started to move too, they went to the space station and saw something was on the sky, it was their satellite, and beside that was a spaceship. Lucas went in a rocket and leave while Ralph will monitor him from the station. Lucas entered the spaceship safely and met Venom, the Venom, the head of the organization.
“Welcome,” Venom said, “I will use the satellite as the main source of the memory wipe, the Retnum will be providing the energy needed for that. All that, by this button. Sorry kid, but there’s no chance to be a hero this time.” He pointed at a round red button on the control pad.
“Well I will stop you for sure!” Lucas rushed to Venom.
And with no hesitation, Venom pressed the button. There was a countdown, thirty seconds. Lucas started pressing random buttons and the spaceship has a complete lockdown.
“You fool!” Venom shouted, “The spaceship itself will be destroyed after the Retnum fires!”
“Shouldn’t there be a cancel button somewhere?” Lucas asked, feeling stupid.
“There’s no stopping it now!”
“Lucas! What’s happening up there?” Ralph interrupted.
“The ship’s gonna exp—“
BOOM!!! Ralph looked outside and there was a large explosion along with a beam coming. Both plans failed: Lucas failed to stop Venom. And Venom’s plan of wiping out the memory of the entire planet didn’t work out. Lucas didn’t survive and nor did Venom.
Everyone on the planet was frozen, not frozen as in ice but everything just stop, except time. A few centuries later, they started to move again, but cities have been turned to dust, trees were everywhere, people have forgotten many things, some people didn’t make it through time and decomposes. The planet Trosius is now known as Earth.
July 4, year 1776. A country was founded known as the United States of America,
War started to break out between countries, some wanted to gain more territory, some wanted more natural source.
August 17, year 1945. A country known as Indonesia was declared to be independent.
April 18, 2014. And here I am, finishing the story.
Retnum(Adhikananda Kevin Tandiono)
Trosius is a peaceful planet, but an organization called the Venom wanted the world for themselves.
July 25, year 592, a hero was born, named Lucas, of the Verdicus family. He always wanted to be hero since he was ten, it’s his dream. It was a game that really influences his will to be a hero. But the world just seem so plain, there’s nothing to save. Until…
January 28, year 609. Lucas loves to explore, and right at that day, his parents were busy with work, so after he arrive home, he went outside and start wandering around. He ended up in a space station, though of course he was not allowed to go inside, he still can watch the massive rocket from the outside. Lucas learned about rocket in the extra class he took. It was just one more minute for it to blast off. He was waiting eagerly. But something was wrong; he observed the rocket and saw a piece missing. He tried to convince the security guard but still he was not allowed to pass. So he jumped over the fence and ran into the station. The good news is, he found one of an officer that believe him, the bad news is, it was too late. The rocket was already creating the fire boosting it up little by little. The control room called the pilots and the pilots quickly went to the shuttle pod. The pilots were safe and the rocket exploded before it even reaches the outer space. Lucas was awarded a medal, but the problem is not over yet. The rocket was checked again before it launched, it wasn’t a coincidence, the piece was stolen. The piece is a really important substance that allows the rocket to be stable. They suspect an organization called the “Venom”. The Venom has always made a wreckage wherever they go. No one knows their true objective but they believe Venom will demolish anything in their path. And from that day on, Lucas know what to do to achieve his dream.
March 27, year 609. The rocket incident left no clue besides the possibility of Venom. Lucas waited and finally, something happen. That morning, a ruby was stolen from a jewelry store, the news quickly spread across the country, raising the alert about Venom. Lucas was allowed to investigate the scene. The glass was broken recklessly, which means Venom entered the room with no means of silence. It seems like Venom stole the ruby not for wealth, which means Venom’s objective is not to be rich. But they are stealing powerful materials. Lucas invited his friend, Ralph Vanderton, to search for answers. They recalled a legend that once said about a substance powerful enough to affect the universe. The substance was too dangerous that it was put in a special box locked by complicated codes, fingerprint scan, and impossible puzzles. The box was then launched into outer space followed by a special machine designed to protect the box. The machine was equipped by a special voice command only by the inventor, to turn in off. People call that substance “Retnum” and scientist had been researching it for years. And now it’s time for Lucas and Ralph to step up the game. They predicted that the next thing is the strongest engine from the car repair shop not far from the jewelry store. But Venom was smarter than they thought.
April 19, year 609. The car repair shop lost their strongest engine. But the event was unexpected. The shop did set the security system tighter and even the government gave the equipment needed to capture the culprit. But Venom knew the people knew they were coming. Venom sneaked in at 03:00 A.M. where everyone let their guard down. Everyone was so tired and sleepy; they did not expect Venom to move right at that time. And when the shop opened, they notice the missing item. Lucas and Ralph then arrive at the shop. Lucas decided to put a hidden camera in an exact hidden spot for the next location. What he failed to figure out is the Venom’s way to know what he is doing. This time, the plan was for Lucas and Ralph to actually be in the location themselves. The next location was the tool shop, Lucas and Ralph will be there at April 30 around 10:00 P.M. and stay until sunrise. But this did not happen…
April 27, year 609. Lucas and Ralph were at the tool shop to remind the owner that they will be there in three more days at night and also to warn him to be careful. BOOM!!!, the sound catches everyone’s attention people in the tool shop started storming out and look around. Meanwhile, inside the shop, Venom started to move. An employee was still inside and saw the Venom stealing things.
“HEY!!!” The employee shouted.
The Venom was prepared in these kinds of situations. And from behind, the employee was injected with a kind of fluid and fell unconscious. And when he woke up, people were gathering around him.
“What happened?” The owner asked.
“I… I don’t remember, I was just here checking the supplies and… I just fall unconscious, maybe I slip and fell.” He replied.
“Go home and rest first, I guess that’s all for today, we’ll just—“
“Wait!!!” Lucas interrupted.
Lucas just remembered that he set the hidden camera already. So everyone quickly rush to the hidden camera spot, the camera is not there. Everyone rummaged through the mess but the camera isn’t there. Lucas started to suspect a spy; it might be someone on their team or a tiny moving camera that follows him everywhere. Then, he saw something sticking out of the wall, it was a round red button with a white press me text on it. Lucas pressed the button with no hesitation, and a holographic image was projected above the button. It showed a silhouette of a cyborg behind a man with a lab coat on sitting on a chair with the arm-rest.
“Ah, Mister Verdicus, you have underestimated the Venom, you thought you were smarter, but it wouldn’t be so fun if it is that way, would it?” The guy on the chair started talking, he has a gentle voice. “Now, I bet you wonder how can I get the Retnum by the things I collect. Why don’t you come to the next location and find out?”
Looking at the things stolen, there is just one more powerful substance and that is in the science department center.
May 5, year 609. Ralph brought his brother, Felix Vanderton, because Felix likes these kinds of stuffs, he’s all about science. When they were about to get in the car, Lucas felt something was following him, he turned back but nothing was there. A few minutes later, he saw a little machine-like spider crawling behind him with a tiny camera on it. He picked it up and it seems like that’s how Venom always planned ahead of him. Knowing that it wouldn’t happen again, he formulated a plan. When they entered the science department, they split up, Felix went for the testing room, Ralph to the research room, and Lucas to the meeting room. Everything seemed normal until the Venom attacked. There was a large noise in the lobby so the three of them hurried there. And when they arrived, there were robots about ten-feet tall with a blaster shooting everywhere. One of the blasts from the blaster hit a five-inch diamond cube and it just shattered to pieces. Among the robots, there was one blaster that’s different; a normal blaster has a shiny metallic silver color, while one of them is gold in color. It might be of different use since it was not used yet. None of the boys knows how to fight so this is a big problem. All of a sudden, the firing stopped. A holographic image like the one they saw about a week ago formed, but this one was large, it appeared just right in the middle of the lobby, the man’s voice was loud and clear.
“You have failed Lucas, the science department failed to find out more about the Retnum, while I have been researching about it more than they do and found the answer, with the Retnum, I will wipe the memory of humanity and I can rule them, and you. Just one more step and I will have Retnum and then, humanity. Come and stop me if you can. I’d like to see you try.”
One of the robots, with the special blaster shot Felix, he fell back and hit the ground. When he opened his eyes, Lucas and Ralph were already around him. There were no scratches or anything; the blast did not even create the slightest mark. But there was something else, Felix doesn’t know who anyone is, his memory was wiped out completely, his mind is just like a clean sheet of paper. Everyone tried their best in bringing his memory back, but there was no coming back. Felix himself was confused the whole time. And a few days later, he’s gone; he went out in the middle of the night. Lucas and Ralph can’t go on a search for him; they still have the Venom to take care of. And then…
May 8, year 609. The Venom has started its move. At about 01:00 P.M. all electronic gadgets started to buzz. And then Venom was everywhere, he started his plan to use Retnum. No one knows how and where he found it. Lucas and Ralph started to move too, they went to the space station and saw something was on the sky, it was their satellite, and beside that was a spaceship. Lucas went in a rocket and leave while Ralph will monitor him from the station. Lucas entered the spaceship safely and met Venom, the Venom, the head of the organization.
“Welcome,” Venom said, “I will use the satellite as the main source of the memory wipe, the Retnum will be providing the energy needed for that. All that, by this button. Sorry kid, but there’s no chance to be a hero this time.” He pointed at a round red button on the control pad.
“Well I will stop you for sure!” Lucas rushed to Venom.
And with no hesitation, Venom pressed the button. There was a countdown, thirty seconds. Lucas started pressing random buttons and the spaceship has a complete lockdown.
“You fool!” Venom shouted, “The spaceship itself will be destroyed after the Retnum fires!”
“Shouldn’t there be a cancel button somewhere?” Lucas asked, feeling stupid.
“There’s no stopping it now!”
“Lucas! What’s happening up there?” Ralph interrupted.
“The ship’s gonna exp—“
BOOM!!! Ralph looked outside and there was a large explosion along with a beam coming. Both plans failed: Lucas failed to stop Venom. And Venom’s plan of wiping out the memory of the entire planet didn’t work out. Lucas didn’t survive and nor did Venom.
Everyone on the planet was frozen, not frozen as in ice but everything just stop, except time. A few centuries later, they started to move again, but cities have been turned to dust, trees were everywhere, people have forgotten many things, some people didn’t make it through time and decomposes. The planet Trosius is now known as Earth.
July 4, year 1776. A country was founded known as the United States of America,
War started to break out between countries, some wanted to gain more territory, some wanted more natural source.
August 17, year 1945. A country known as Indonesia was declared to be independent.
April 18, 2014. And here I am, finishing the story.
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