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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 04/17/2014
Ever since Maden was a primary student, he was just the boy who is fond of making weird things. You know how a primary student should be like right? But for Maden Vultor, he doesn’t want to spend his time to be doing that kind of activities. The students were looking at him strangely which affects that he has no friends at all.
But now his life change, it was when he entered college. Ever since he was secondary student he dreams to be a computer expert. So now in college he choose Information Technology (IT) department to study more about computer stuffs. His friends is not so cool or awesome as other think, his friends was a bunch of nerds which always wear a lousy t-shirt, jacket, jeans and an old Nike shoes. Maden himself wasn’t that type of person. Now he likes to follow up with today’s trends of clothing like using cardigans and cool jackets. If girls see him, they wouldn’t stop to look at him as he is the definition of the ‘perfect’ guy at school.
After he finishes all his classes, a group of guys came to him and handed him paper works to be done. Maden was confused and angry at the same time. Those guys said that if he finishes their paper works, he have to meet them at the park at 7o’clock; which is in the center of the city. Maden couldn’t deny as all of those guys stare at him intensely. He wasn’t a coward for sure.
Come noon. The guys who waited at the park for such a long time, waited for Maden to come. When the clock strikes at 7 o’clock, Maden comes towards them. Surprisingly he didn’t bring the paper works with him, he didn’t beg for forgiveness as he doesn’t care about them.
“Actually we are not college students. We are asked to cooperate with you to help our planet. We know that you are a human who have live here for quite a long time but what we need to hand to you first is this potion. Please drink this at exactly 10 o’clock.”
Maden was confused at first as he thought that those guys were bullies who acted out in front of him. So he got home and throws out the papers as they said it was no use. It was 7.30 at that time and he can’t choose whether to throw the drink or to drink it later at 10 o’clock.
It was 9.50 at that time and he was thinking what he will be if he drink this weird potion which could make him die.
“Fine, I’ll drink it!”
The next day he was lying down on his carpet. He got up and he saw his room in awe. Broken glass and all his toy figures broke into pieces. “Oh my, what happen here? And why my body is full of scratches?” He asked himself.
“Congratulation, you have made a great decision…” said a random man.
On the way to college, he looked at his body as it was changing into blue. He couldn’t hide his power to be a beast as he remembered all the things he does in the midnight, killing innocent animals and eat them until death. Then he suddenly felt worried because of the man that leaves him a heavy task, to kill all the innocent humans and bring back the name of planet ‘Vendor’. If he did kill all of the people, the man promise him to have a great life later on in planet ‘Vendor’.
He decided not to go to college today as he must think about the plan that he need to finish. But then the man popped into his car, “Go to that building and kill the people there. That’s why I give you this task!” Maden himself was shock so he decided to go back to the road to go to college. He arrived and when he got out of his car he can feel the heat in his body.”Ahh!” everyone heard one girl screams so loud. Everyone was looking at him and everyone knows that he is Maden who is the ‘popular’ guy in the IT class.
“I got to say that being like this is quite awesome.” He talks to himself and began to scare students. The man that orders him looks very happy as he doesn’t need to comfort him to kill these humans. “Just wait, planet Vendor will be bowed to every people.” He talks in a small volume.
“Gah!” Maden began to use his gigantic hands to squeeze those small humans. “Maden you go to stop this! What are you doing?” His IT teacher asks. “Uh, doing my thing..? That’s what.”
He just uses his ‘roar’ sound and his crazy feet and hands going through the entire city. Everyone was panic. They don’t want to die, but for Maden he just wanted a eternal life. He is a psycho that just believe in the words of a man’ who turned out to be an alien. Days gone and the city was rotting. “So I did this..Oops?” Maden said to the aliens who are flying around the city to check every single corner. A happy face could be seen through their faces. “Good.” They answered Maden.
“So what am I going to have my present?” He asks. “Oh ‘that’ present, yes let’s go.” They finishes their evil mission to kill planet earth. Maden happily applaud what he did. “Has he regained his real self?” The ‘man’ ask the other alien. “W-w-where am I? Ouch, that hurts!” “He did return.” The alien answered.
“Thank you for helping us in killing the humans, as a present you will live a happy life in our beloved planet, Vendor!” The aliens said loudly. Then he realizes that he had killed his own city and also he was hypnotized by bunch of aliens to kill human lives. One thing led to another, he was just a fake ‘beast’.
Beastly Nerd(Valerie w)
Ever since Maden was a primary student, he was just the boy who is fond of making weird things. You know how a primary student should be like right? But for Maden Vultor, he doesn’t want to spend his time to be doing that kind of activities. The students were looking at him strangely which affects that he has no friends at all.
But now his life change, it was when he entered college. Ever since he was secondary student he dreams to be a computer expert. So now in college he choose Information Technology (IT) department to study more about computer stuffs. His friends is not so cool or awesome as other think, his friends was a bunch of nerds which always wear a lousy t-shirt, jacket, jeans and an old Nike shoes. Maden himself wasn’t that type of person. Now he likes to follow up with today’s trends of clothing like using cardigans and cool jackets. If girls see him, they wouldn’t stop to look at him as he is the definition of the ‘perfect’ guy at school.
After he finishes all his classes, a group of guys came to him and handed him paper works to be done. Maden was confused and angry at the same time. Those guys said that if he finishes their paper works, he have to meet them at the park at 7o’clock; which is in the center of the city. Maden couldn’t deny as all of those guys stare at him intensely. He wasn’t a coward for sure.
Come noon. The guys who waited at the park for such a long time, waited for Maden to come. When the clock strikes at 7 o’clock, Maden comes towards them. Surprisingly he didn’t bring the paper works with him, he didn’t beg for forgiveness as he doesn’t care about them.
“Actually we are not college students. We are asked to cooperate with you to help our planet. We know that you are a human who have live here for quite a long time but what we need to hand to you first is this potion. Please drink this at exactly 10 o’clock.”
Maden was confused at first as he thought that those guys were bullies who acted out in front of him. So he got home and throws out the papers as they said it was no use. It was 7.30 at that time and he can’t choose whether to throw the drink or to drink it later at 10 o’clock.
It was 9.50 at that time and he was thinking what he will be if he drink this weird potion which could make him die.
“Fine, I’ll drink it!”
The next day he was lying down on his carpet. He got up and he saw his room in awe. Broken glass and all his toy figures broke into pieces. “Oh my, what happen here? And why my body is full of scratches?” He asked himself.
“Congratulation, you have made a great decision…” said a random man.
On the way to college, he looked at his body as it was changing into blue. He couldn’t hide his power to be a beast as he remembered all the things he does in the midnight, killing innocent animals and eat them until death. Then he suddenly felt worried because of the man that leaves him a heavy task, to kill all the innocent humans and bring back the name of planet ‘Vendor’. If he did kill all of the people, the man promise him to have a great life later on in planet ‘Vendor’.
He decided not to go to college today as he must think about the plan that he need to finish. But then the man popped into his car, “Go to that building and kill the people there. That’s why I give you this task!” Maden himself was shock so he decided to go back to the road to go to college. He arrived and when he got out of his car he can feel the heat in his body.”Ahh!” everyone heard one girl screams so loud. Everyone was looking at him and everyone knows that he is Maden who is the ‘popular’ guy in the IT class.
“I got to say that being like this is quite awesome.” He talks to himself and began to scare students. The man that orders him looks very happy as he doesn’t need to comfort him to kill these humans. “Just wait, planet Vendor will be bowed to every people.” He talks in a small volume.
“Gah!” Maden began to use his gigantic hands to squeeze those small humans. “Maden you go to stop this! What are you doing?” His IT teacher asks. “Uh, doing my thing..? That’s what.”
He just uses his ‘roar’ sound and his crazy feet and hands going through the entire city. Everyone was panic. They don’t want to die, but for Maden he just wanted a eternal life. He is a psycho that just believe in the words of a man’ who turned out to be an alien. Days gone and the city was rotting. “So I did this..Oops?” Maden said to the aliens who are flying around the city to check every single corner. A happy face could be seen through their faces. “Good.” They answered Maden.
“So what am I going to have my present?” He asks. “Oh ‘that’ present, yes let’s go.” They finishes their evil mission to kill planet earth. Maden happily applaud what he did. “Has he regained his real self?” The ‘man’ ask the other alien. “W-w-where am I? Ouch, that hurts!” “He did return.” The alien answered.
“Thank you for helping us in killing the humans, as a present you will live a happy life in our beloved planet, Vendor!” The aliens said loudly. Then he realizes that he had killed his own city and also he was hypnotized by bunch of aliens to kill human lives. One thing led to another, he was just a fake ‘beast’.
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