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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 04/18/2014
The Ruby of The future
Me and my family just moved to a new house nearby grandma’s house because she is having a serious medical condition, so we decided to move our house so that we can take care of grandma anytime easily. There are 3 bedrooms in this new house, one is for my parents, the other one is for my big sister Ashley and my little sister mandy, the other room is for my little brother leo and me myself, jack!
At this late afternoon, Dad picks up the stuff and boxes from our old house to move to this house, mom is cleaning up the new kitchen and placing all the things at their places, mandy is playing with her cute Barbie dolls ; Ashley as usual, just doing her own stuff in her bedroom painting her nails, talk to her boyfriend on the found and just living in her own word without caring about the family, while me and leo being a good children, we helped dad to move the boxes from the cars to the attic.
When we are carrying the box to the attic, I heard weird voices of someone talking sounded like chipmunk. I got curious and decided to look where it come from.
‘’ hey leo, you heard that?’’
‘’what? I heard nothing! Come on just move those boxes because we only limited time’’
‘’but wait a second! Just please! What if there are someone hiding in this attic for a long time? Or a robber? or even a serial killer? That can happen!’’
‘’oh come on, you watched too much crime movies’’
But then suddenly there is a sound of boxes falling down inside, both of them shocked and directly looked where that sound came from. When leo walked silently to the back of the attic, he found something!
‘’jack! Come here , what kind of creature are those!’’
‘’what? Oh no we gotta tell mom and dad!’’
‘’ I think that’s a bad idea they’re both busy! You sure you want to disturb them?’’
Both of them saw 5 weird creatures with an antenna at their heads, green colored body, more like aliens. Jack and leo hide behind the boxes , watching and listening to those aliens.
‘’but dad, we need to find that ruby stone hurry before tomorrow the sun sets!’’
‘’yes I know dear, that’s why 5 of us came here. So lets together find where the ruby is hidden In this house and safe our planet!’’
Jack and leo still cannot believe there are aliens in ther attic wanted to steal a ruby stone. So both of them decided to plan something so that they can help those aliens safe their own planet. Jack and leo quietly get out of the attic trying to figure out plans to help the aliens. But then leo accidentally tripped on something and he makes quite a loud sound, that makes the aliens thought someone is about to kill them, so suddenly one of the alien take out its weapon that looks like a gun and try to shot us, but luckily it missed!
‘’hey sorry we doesn’t mean to do anything bad to you creatures! ‘
‘’ yes , we heard your conversation awhile ago about the ruby stone thingy, so can we help ?’’
‘’anyway, my name is jack and this is my little brother leo’’
And then the aliens discuss something that we didn’t know and then one of the alien says
‘’ okay thankyou boys, let me introduce myself, I’m king alien and at the same time I’m a father to this 4 little aliens’’
All of us began to know each other’s name and introduce ourselves.. king alien tells us all the plan about how to take the ruby stone inside this new house that we don’t know where it is placed.. I decided to ask them to go down the stairs and talk more inside my room, but then they refused because they need to watch their jet so it will not be stolen by someone and later on they can go home to their own planet safely.
King alien brought this weapon that can see anything hidden, for example the ruby stone that is hidden in this house. But the problem is, by using that weapon, it must be put in a big area in di middle and it will absorb sunlight and by that, the weapon can run easily..
Me and leo are in charge of looking for the area to put the weapon so that they can search for the ruby stone in my family’s new house..luckily I remembered, ashley’s boyfriend’s (justin) father owns a soccer field that for me is quite big. So I decided to talk to Ashley about this
‘’hey Ashley can I have a second?’’
‘’what? If it’s not important then get out’’
‘’chill.. this is really important’’
‘’okay then go for it. Faster. I need to dry my nails and curly my hair for jeanne’s birthday party’’
‘’justin’s dad owns a soccer field right?’’
‘’yes , why?’’
‘’um long story to tell, but can you give me justin’s number so that I can contact his dad because I really need to …..’’
‘’okay okay fine I’ll text you his number’’
‘’YAY! Thanks big sist!’’
I finally got justin’s number! All I gotta do is text him and set an appointment with his dad so that I can help the aliens put their weapon at the field.
Thank god justin’s father is a really kind man, he let us borrow his soccer field for a while and we will be there at 1 o’clock.
Okay so today we’ll go to that place. We arrived and I put all those aliens inside my suitcase because I brought suitcase to the soccer field so that justin’s father didn’t get curious and think that inside the suitcase are my things to play soccer
When we put the weapon in the middle of the field, it really worked! It lights up, and the size of the weapon is as small as a tennis ball. After we succeed making the weapon absorb sunlight, we directly go home and do our mission
We arrived home and king alien go to the attic with his kids and plan…he search and search for clues… finally he found something! The ruby stone is under our house! Which means that we need to dig a whole under our basemen to look for the ruby stone!
So me and leo took hammer and we dig the basemen..
Finally we found something! We found the ruby stone! We gave it to king president and he is so happy that we finally found the ruby stone! He is really thankful that me and leo wanted to help them..
After that, all of us go upstairs and all the aliens says goodbye to us and thankyou to us.. me and leo are both glad to help them! That is a nice experience.. to get to communicate with weird creature! So what I learn is that although there are a lot of creature in this universe, and although they look creepy , but we may not judge them or think directly that they are bad…. We are here to help!
The Ruby of the Future(Naomi Sahiraa)
The Ruby of The future
Me and my family just moved to a new house nearby grandma’s house because she is having a serious medical condition, so we decided to move our house so that we can take care of grandma anytime easily. There are 3 bedrooms in this new house, one is for my parents, the other one is for my big sister Ashley and my little sister mandy, the other room is for my little brother leo and me myself, jack!
At this late afternoon, Dad picks up the stuff and boxes from our old house to move to this house, mom is cleaning up the new kitchen and placing all the things at their places, mandy is playing with her cute Barbie dolls ; Ashley as usual, just doing her own stuff in her bedroom painting her nails, talk to her boyfriend on the found and just living in her own word without caring about the family, while me and leo being a good children, we helped dad to move the boxes from the cars to the attic.
When we are carrying the box to the attic, I heard weird voices of someone talking sounded like chipmunk. I got curious and decided to look where it come from.
‘’ hey leo, you heard that?’’
‘’what? I heard nothing! Come on just move those boxes because we only limited time’’
‘’but wait a second! Just please! What if there are someone hiding in this attic for a long time? Or a robber? or even a serial killer? That can happen!’’
‘’oh come on, you watched too much crime movies’’
But then suddenly there is a sound of boxes falling down inside, both of them shocked and directly looked where that sound came from. When leo walked silently to the back of the attic, he found something!
‘’jack! Come here , what kind of creature are those!’’
‘’what? Oh no we gotta tell mom and dad!’’
‘’ I think that’s a bad idea they’re both busy! You sure you want to disturb them?’’
Both of them saw 5 weird creatures with an antenna at their heads, green colored body, more like aliens. Jack and leo hide behind the boxes , watching and listening to those aliens.
‘’but dad, we need to find that ruby stone hurry before tomorrow the sun sets!’’
‘’yes I know dear, that’s why 5 of us came here. So lets together find where the ruby is hidden In this house and safe our planet!’’
Jack and leo still cannot believe there are aliens in ther attic wanted to steal a ruby stone. So both of them decided to plan something so that they can help those aliens safe their own planet. Jack and leo quietly get out of the attic trying to figure out plans to help the aliens. But then leo accidentally tripped on something and he makes quite a loud sound, that makes the aliens thought someone is about to kill them, so suddenly one of the alien take out its weapon that looks like a gun and try to shot us, but luckily it missed!
‘’hey sorry we doesn’t mean to do anything bad to you creatures! ‘
‘’ yes , we heard your conversation awhile ago about the ruby stone thingy, so can we help ?’’
‘’anyway, my name is jack and this is my little brother leo’’
And then the aliens discuss something that we didn’t know and then one of the alien says
‘’ okay thankyou boys, let me introduce myself, I’m king alien and at the same time I’m a father to this 4 little aliens’’
All of us began to know each other’s name and introduce ourselves.. king alien tells us all the plan about how to take the ruby stone inside this new house that we don’t know where it is placed.. I decided to ask them to go down the stairs and talk more inside my room, but then they refused because they need to watch their jet so it will not be stolen by someone and later on they can go home to their own planet safely.
King alien brought this weapon that can see anything hidden, for example the ruby stone that is hidden in this house. But the problem is, by using that weapon, it must be put in a big area in di middle and it will absorb sunlight and by that, the weapon can run easily..
Me and leo are in charge of looking for the area to put the weapon so that they can search for the ruby stone in my family’s new house..luckily I remembered, ashley’s boyfriend’s (justin) father owns a soccer field that for me is quite big. So I decided to talk to Ashley about this
‘’hey Ashley can I have a second?’’
‘’what? If it’s not important then get out’’
‘’chill.. this is really important’’
‘’okay then go for it. Faster. I need to dry my nails and curly my hair for jeanne’s birthday party’’
‘’justin’s dad owns a soccer field right?’’
‘’yes , why?’’
‘’um long story to tell, but can you give me justin’s number so that I can contact his dad because I really need to …..’’
‘’okay okay fine I’ll text you his number’’
‘’YAY! Thanks big sist!’’
I finally got justin’s number! All I gotta do is text him and set an appointment with his dad so that I can help the aliens put their weapon at the field.
Thank god justin’s father is a really kind man, he let us borrow his soccer field for a while and we will be there at 1 o’clock.
Okay so today we’ll go to that place. We arrived and I put all those aliens inside my suitcase because I brought suitcase to the soccer field so that justin’s father didn’t get curious and think that inside the suitcase are my things to play soccer
When we put the weapon in the middle of the field, it really worked! It lights up, and the size of the weapon is as small as a tennis ball. After we succeed making the weapon absorb sunlight, we directly go home and do our mission
We arrived home and king alien go to the attic with his kids and plan…he search and search for clues… finally he found something! The ruby stone is under our house! Which means that we need to dig a whole under our basemen to look for the ruby stone!
So me and leo took hammer and we dig the basemen..
Finally we found something! We found the ruby stone! We gave it to king president and he is so happy that we finally found the ruby stone! He is really thankful that me and leo wanted to help them..
After that, all of us go upstairs and all the aliens says goodbye to us and thankyou to us.. me and leo are both glad to help them! That is a nice experience.. to get to communicate with weird creature! So what I learn is that although there are a lot of creature in this universe, and although they look creepy , but we may not judge them or think directly that they are bad…. We are here to help!
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