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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 04/18/2014
Not fair
Born 1970, M, from Punta gorda/F.L., United StatesThe old Brown house seem like not much to Tommy as he walked up to it. He had read all the stories that were wrote about this place, that people would go into the house and never come out. It was this kind of stories that Tommy want to find out if it was true. As he got to the door the was a cold chill that went down his back. He thought at that moment was this the right thing to do. As he went in the place had seem to be forgotten by time. The father he went he Tommy felt that he could not see the place where he had come in. It was said that they house feed on the people that came there, that some how the house would eat them like a human .
Then something happen it was as a hand came out to grab Tommy . He moved the one came out of a wall on his other side, it was just a place that he knew that he had to get out of. There was just some thing that as he looked at the arms that they were not ones with skin on them. Tommy had to find out why this was happening. There had to be some thing that happen that was bad that happen in this house.
There in the study he found some papers on the desk, he saw a report that there was mass killing in the house. That the father had killed his family , it was told by the father that he just could not take dealing with them. It was said when they came to get the father that the arms came out of the house and ate the father. The house had seen to much killing and seem to like the blood of the one that had done the killings. There were reports of other killing down the years. The one same thing was that the house ate the killer.
Tommy knew that the only way to stop all this was just to board up the house. That no more people would be killed and no one would be eaten.
Not fair(Leo Laclair)
The old Brown house seem like not much to Tommy as he walked up to it. He had read all the stories that were wrote about this place, that people would go into the house and never come out. It was this kind of stories that Tommy want to find out if it was true. As he got to the door the was a cold chill that went down his back. He thought at that moment was this the right thing to do. As he went in the place had seem to be forgotten by time. The father he went he Tommy felt that he could not see the place where he had come in. It was said that they house feed on the people that came there, that some how the house would eat them like a human .
Then something happen it was as a hand came out to grab Tommy . He moved the one came out of a wall on his other side, it was just a place that he knew that he had to get out of. There was just some thing that as he looked at the arms that they were not ones with skin on them. Tommy had to find out why this was happening. There had to be some thing that happen that was bad that happen in this house.
There in the study he found some papers on the desk, he saw a report that there was mass killing in the house. That the father had killed his family , it was told by the father that he just could not take dealing with them. It was said when they came to get the father that the arms came out of the house and ate the father. The house had seen to much killing and seem to like the blood of the one that had done the killings. There were reports of other killing down the years. The one same thing was that the house ate the killer.
Tommy knew that the only way to stop all this was just to board up the house. That no more people would be killed and no one would be eaten.
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