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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Courage / Heroism
- Published: 04/18/2014
How it all Began
Born 1995, M, from Modesto, California, United StatesWhy is this happening? I was happy having a great day. I'll go back to the beginning of the day before I ended up in the hospital.
"Get up lazy ass. It's time for you to go to school. Wake up!"
"I'm up mom, can you leave my room now. I need to get dressed."
"Fine food is downstairs. Hurry up."
I hope today will get better I don't want to make her sad again. I would hate myself if I made her cry again. I need to stop thinking like this, it makes me sad.
My walk to school was almost normal. It had taken an hour like normal, but I felt odd. It felt like I was being followed to school. I felt a lot better when i got to school.
"Brian, there you are. class is about to start. Hurry up!"
"Sorry Alex, my walk was...different. Anyway, I'm here now."
This is Alex, my sister. She is not my real sister, but we have been together for years. My real sister had died three years ago due to a murder. Truth be told I love her but I'm such a baby and don't say anything.
"Okay class we are going to start with a project."
The teacher said a bunch of other stuff, but that is not important in this story. Maybe another time...maybe.
My other classes went extremely slow and were boring. Although i had fun during my P.E class.
"Alex are you busy because I was going to the movies with some friends and I wanted you come with us."
"Sure, I'd love to but your friends don't like me, are you sure."
"Yea I'm sure, they will be fine with it, they won't mind if I am there."
I was so happy that I was going to be with Alex. Although that wouldn't last. As I got ready my mom handed me the keys to my dad's car. My mom was crying because i remind her of dad and he still hasn't come back from the war; He is currently MIA.
"Brian! Your friends didn't want to stay because I'm here. Anyway how do I look."
"You look great, the red highlights look good with your black hair."
"Thank you so much. You are so sweet. Oh the movie is about to start."
I didn't like the movie, it was like all of the other of the teenage dramas with vampires and crap. Although Alex loved it so I was happy. After the movie had ended we went out to the car. That's when i heard a mans voice.
"hey you give me your damn car."
"Why should I give you my car? It's mine. Just because you have a gun. Dumbass."
"What the hell did you just say to me? Do you know who you are messing with? Boy I will kill you, no your little girlfriend if you don't give me your car."
"Leave her out of this. She has done nothing."
As I told him that I pulled out my knife that I always keep on me. When i pulled it out he backed up, aimed the gun and shot three times.
"Ahhh! Brian! No!"
I had just enough time to protect Alex from the bullets. I felt all three shots hit me. One in my right leg, right arm, and my collar bone. I don't Know why, but I felt no pain then.
"I...won't..die! I won't! Although the same can't be said for you!"
I started to walk to him, but he felt so far away. My vision was blurred and I couldn't hear much. Alex was screaming but I paid no attention to her. I Pushed the man over and pulled my arm back.
"Please! Please don't! Take pity! Give me mercey! Please! Stop! Help!"
"A man like you deserves no mercey! Only death!"
I pulled the knife and swung to his neck. That's how it all began.
How it all Began(Sean Maxwell)
Why is this happening? I was happy having a great day. I'll go back to the beginning of the day before I ended up in the hospital.
"Get up lazy ass. It's time for you to go to school. Wake up!"
"I'm up mom, can you leave my room now. I need to get dressed."
"Fine food is downstairs. Hurry up."
I hope today will get better I don't want to make her sad again. I would hate myself if I made her cry again. I need to stop thinking like this, it makes me sad.
My walk to school was almost normal. It had taken an hour like normal, but I felt odd. It felt like I was being followed to school. I felt a lot better when i got to school.
"Brian, there you are. class is about to start. Hurry up!"
"Sorry Alex, my walk was...different. Anyway, I'm here now."
This is Alex, my sister. She is not my real sister, but we have been together for years. My real sister had died three years ago due to a murder. Truth be told I love her but I'm such a baby and don't say anything.
"Okay class we are going to start with a project."
The teacher said a bunch of other stuff, but that is not important in this story. Maybe another time...maybe.
My other classes went extremely slow and were boring. Although i had fun during my P.E class.
"Alex are you busy because I was going to the movies with some friends and I wanted you come with us."
"Sure, I'd love to but your friends don't like me, are you sure."
"Yea I'm sure, they will be fine with it, they won't mind if I am there."
I was so happy that I was going to be with Alex. Although that wouldn't last. As I got ready my mom handed me the keys to my dad's car. My mom was crying because i remind her of dad and he still hasn't come back from the war; He is currently MIA.
"Brian! Your friends didn't want to stay because I'm here. Anyway how do I look."
"You look great, the red highlights look good with your black hair."
"Thank you so much. You are so sweet. Oh the movie is about to start."
I didn't like the movie, it was like all of the other of the teenage dramas with vampires and crap. Although Alex loved it so I was happy. After the movie had ended we went out to the car. That's when i heard a mans voice.
"hey you give me your damn car."
"Why should I give you my car? It's mine. Just because you have a gun. Dumbass."
"What the hell did you just say to me? Do you know who you are messing with? Boy I will kill you, no your little girlfriend if you don't give me your car."
"Leave her out of this. She has done nothing."
As I told him that I pulled out my knife that I always keep on me. When i pulled it out he backed up, aimed the gun and shot three times.
"Ahhh! Brian! No!"
I had just enough time to protect Alex from the bullets. I felt all three shots hit me. One in my right leg, right arm, and my collar bone. I don't Know why, but I felt no pain then.
"I...won't..die! I won't! Although the same can't be said for you!"
I started to walk to him, but he felt so far away. My vision was blurred and I couldn't hear much. Alex was screaming but I paid no attention to her. I Pushed the man over and pulled my arm back.
"Please! Please don't! Take pity! Give me mercey! Please! Stop! Help!"
"A man like you deserves no mercey! Only death!"
I pulled the knife and swung to his neck. That's how it all began.
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