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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
- Published: 05/03/2014
The Mysterious and Magical Time Machine
Born 1990, F, from Columbia, SC, United StatesA long time ago in the state of Louisiana, lived a young boy and three friends. The young boy, Daniel, lived with his grandpa on a small farm. One day Daniel and his friends Zachary, Amy, and Christy were walking home from school when Daniel's grandpa asked them if they wanted to help him clean the shed. Daniel went to the shed and when he opened it he found something.
"Grandpa, what is that?", Daniel asked excitedly. Grandpa replied, "that is a time machine that my daddy built for me when I was little". "A time machine?! Wow! Does it work?" asked Zachary. "Why don't you get in and find out?", Grandpa said.
So Daniel, Zachary, Amy, and Christy got in and pulled the handle. All of a sudden they started spinning around and around 'till finally they stopped. But when Zachary stepped out, his friends were gone. Then he found a sign that said "Welcome to the magical land of Majestic". He walked down the path 'till he came upon a castle. He knocked on the door, then out came a knight.
"May I help you sir?", said the knight. "Zachary, why are you dressed like that?" asked Daniel. "How do you know my name and what do you want?" "You're my friend, and where is Christy and Amy?" Daniel asked. Zachary replied, "Christy, the evil queen, took Amy, the good queen, and locked her in the tallest tower of the Dark Castle."
What Daniel didn't know was that, when they were spinning in the machine, it turned his friends into magical characters and made them forget who he was. So he just played along.
"So do you need my help to free the queen?" Daniel asked. "Yes I do need your help. So what is your name sir?" Zachary asked. "My name is Daniel". "Well Daniel, let's go save the queen."
Finally they were on their way. When they got to the castle, there was a fire breathing dragon sitting at the door. Zachary handed Daniel a sword and together they slayed the dragon. But when they got to the top of the tallest tower, Christy the evil queen was also waiting.
"Hand over Queen Amy or else!" Zachary demanded. "You have to make me first", Amy said. "give her to us NOW!" Daniel said. "Fine, you can have her, but only if you give me the time machine you came in first", Evil Queen Amy said. "OK you can have it", Daniel said. So they took her to the time machine and pushed her in. They got in with her and pulled the lever. Within only five seconds they were back in Louisiana.
Neither Zachary, Amy, nor Christy remembered what happened. So Daniel told his friends and grandpa everything that happened and they all lived magically ever after.
The Mysterious and Magical Time Machine(Lisa Mosley)
A long time ago in the state of Louisiana, lived a young boy and three friends. The young boy, Daniel, lived with his grandpa on a small farm. One day Daniel and his friends Zachary, Amy, and Christy were walking home from school when Daniel's grandpa asked them if they wanted to help him clean the shed. Daniel went to the shed and when he opened it he found something.
"Grandpa, what is that?", Daniel asked excitedly. Grandpa replied, "that is a time machine that my daddy built for me when I was little". "A time machine?! Wow! Does it work?" asked Zachary. "Why don't you get in and find out?", Grandpa said.
So Daniel, Zachary, Amy, and Christy got in and pulled the handle. All of a sudden they started spinning around and around 'till finally they stopped. But when Zachary stepped out, his friends were gone. Then he found a sign that said "Welcome to the magical land of Majestic". He walked down the path 'till he came upon a castle. He knocked on the door, then out came a knight.
"May I help you sir?", said the knight. "Zachary, why are you dressed like that?" asked Daniel. "How do you know my name and what do you want?" "You're my friend, and where is Christy and Amy?" Daniel asked. Zachary replied, "Christy, the evil queen, took Amy, the good queen, and locked her in the tallest tower of the Dark Castle."
What Daniel didn't know was that, when they were spinning in the machine, it turned his friends into magical characters and made them forget who he was. So he just played along.
"So do you need my help to free the queen?" Daniel asked. "Yes I do need your help. So what is your name sir?" Zachary asked. "My name is Daniel". "Well Daniel, let's go save the queen."
Finally they were on their way. When they got to the castle, there was a fire breathing dragon sitting at the door. Zachary handed Daniel a sword and together they slayed the dragon. But when they got to the top of the tallest tower, Christy the evil queen was also waiting.
"Hand over Queen Amy or else!" Zachary demanded. "You have to make me first", Amy said. "give her to us NOW!" Daniel said. "Fine, you can have her, but only if you give me the time machine you came in first", Evil Queen Amy said. "OK you can have it", Daniel said. So they took her to the time machine and pushed her in. They got in with her and pulled the lever. Within only five seconds they were back in Louisiana.
Neither Zachary, Amy, nor Christy remembered what happened. So Daniel told his friends and grandpa everything that happened and they all lived magically ever after.
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