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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 05/07/2014
The Blaze Hotel
Born 2000, F, from Leighton Buzzard, United KingdomJuly 19th 1850
All the members of the Barecross family, were asleep when a blaze broke out, killing all six members of the family.
Five Days Later………
A memorial service was held by Vicar Clark. As no one knew this family, they didn't have any names.
The bodies were never found, so the souls of the family were unrested, unloved and hidden for centuries to come.
Only the souls of the departed family know their final resting place. Or do they????
February 19th 2014.
One miserable half term holiday, the Bradford and the Jones family decided to go on holiday together as both parents had been friends since childhood. They stayed in a hotel in the middle of nowhere in Wales.
It was a rainy morning on the first day of the holiday when Harry Jones, 6 and Jack Bradford, 6, piped up from their chairs.
“Mum, can I show Jack my new Superhero comics please?” Harry asked Rachel Jones, 35.
“Seeing as you have finished your breakfast, yes.” Replied Rachel
“Mum, can Harry show me his new Superhero comics please?” Jack asked Claire Bradford, 35
“Yes.” Replied Claire replied.
Harry and Jack ran off before Rachel could say, “Don’t forget your key!!”
Jack was first to reach Harry’s room.
Jack quizzed Harry the moment he reached the room, “You do have the key don’t you?”
“No?” Replied Harry sheepishly.
Harry ran down and grabbed the key and he and Jack enjoyed a full hour of Superman and Spiderman.
After an eventful week of site seeing, visiting museums, playing on the beaches and eating ice cream, the families returned home to bright and sunny Cornwall, which at, the moment is very, very, very rainy.
2 weeks later……….
The families brought the hotel that they stayed in during February half term. They changed the hotel into a 20 bedroomed house with loads of playrooms for Maisie Jones, 8, Harry, Jack and Grace Bradford, 8.
6 months later………
The families had settled into life at Chalklane, which was the new name for the former hotel.
The first thing the families noticed about the house was the fact that the house creaked and groaned, but they expected that seeing as the house was 414 years old.
The families noticed other noises such as footsteps in the attic and the basement.
Also, whenever the time read, sixteen minutes past midnight, the smoke alarms went off, causing the families to go into mass panic, as they tried to figure out the cause of the smoke alarms going off.
The two pet dogs, Magic and Shadow, growled every time they went anywhere near the attic or the basement. Lee Jones, 34 thought it was because the dogs had caught sent of an animal that used to live there.
October 31st 2014
Lee, Claire, Rachel and Simon Bradford, 34, were all enjoying a quiet Halloween watching a comedy movie, when suddenly a loud bang came from Jack and Harry’s room. Lee and Simon jumped out of their seats, like they had been shot, and legged it up the stairs.
Jack started crying, “MUMMY, MUMMY, DADDY, DADDY!!!!”
All the noise woke Grace and Maisie up who both started crying, “MUMMY, MUMMY, DADDY, DADDY!!!!” the pleading screams shock Lee and Simon to the bone. At once they knew something serious was happening.
When Lee and Simon, finally ran into the boys room, a look of horror washed over their faces. Jack was standing on the bed, his face as a white as snow and Harry, was curled up in a ball, his face was ashen. Harry had a very visible, bloody mark on his face.
On the wall, opposite the beds, were big bloody letters which read, “GET OUT. YOU SHALL LEAVE THIS PLACE AND NEVER RETURN.”
Lee and Simon were clearly in great shock when suddenly, Jack gave a bloodcurdling scream.
Jack pointed a shaky finger at the corner of the room and said, “Look Daddy, look Uncle Lee, they want to play”
“Who wants to play, Jack?” Simon and Lee puzzled.
“The children, Daddy. I’m going to play with them now Daddy.”
“Si, get the kids, the girls and the dogs out now!” commanded Lee.
Si ushered the kids, the girls and the dogs out and waited for Lee to explain himself.
“This house is haunted, Si. On the night of the July 19th 1850, at sixteen minutes past midnight, a family were asleep when they were killed by a mysterious fire that broke out. The bodies were never found, so they roam this place and they treat it as there final resting place. So it’s up to us to find the bodies.” Lee explained.
Simon and Lee set to work to find the lost bodies and they finally found 5 bodies in the attic and 1 in the basement.
Simon and Lee had found the cause of the growling dogs and the footsteps.
Lee and Simon buried the bodies so they would be at peace. Chalklane was knocked down to make way for new houses and flats.
Finally after years of being unrested, the unknown family were put to rest.
But question still remains, how did the unknown family end up under the floorboards of the attic and the basement?
Were the family killed and placed under the floorboards of the attic and the basement before the house caught fire or did they hide in the floorboards to escape and couldn't get out?
The only people that know are the unknown family and they took the answer with them to their graves.
Only someone with great knowledge can solve this great mystery, but now it’s too late for anyone to solve.
The Blaze Hotel(Megan)
July 19th 1850
All the members of the Barecross family, were asleep when a blaze broke out, killing all six members of the family.
Five Days Later………
A memorial service was held by Vicar Clark. As no one knew this family, they didn't have any names.
The bodies were never found, so the souls of the family were unrested, unloved and hidden for centuries to come.
Only the souls of the departed family know their final resting place. Or do they????
February 19th 2014.
One miserable half term holiday, the Bradford and the Jones family decided to go on holiday together as both parents had been friends since childhood. They stayed in a hotel in the middle of nowhere in Wales.
It was a rainy morning on the first day of the holiday when Harry Jones, 6 and Jack Bradford, 6, piped up from their chairs.
“Mum, can I show Jack my new Superhero comics please?” Harry asked Rachel Jones, 35.
“Seeing as you have finished your breakfast, yes.” Replied Rachel
“Mum, can Harry show me his new Superhero comics please?” Jack asked Claire Bradford, 35
“Yes.” Replied Claire replied.
Harry and Jack ran off before Rachel could say, “Don’t forget your key!!”
Jack was first to reach Harry’s room.
Jack quizzed Harry the moment he reached the room, “You do have the key don’t you?”
“No?” Replied Harry sheepishly.
Harry ran down and grabbed the key and he and Jack enjoyed a full hour of Superman and Spiderman.
After an eventful week of site seeing, visiting museums, playing on the beaches and eating ice cream, the families returned home to bright and sunny Cornwall, which at, the moment is very, very, very rainy.
2 weeks later……….
The families brought the hotel that they stayed in during February half term. They changed the hotel into a 20 bedroomed house with loads of playrooms for Maisie Jones, 8, Harry, Jack and Grace Bradford, 8.
6 months later………
The families had settled into life at Chalklane, which was the new name for the former hotel.
The first thing the families noticed about the house was the fact that the house creaked and groaned, but they expected that seeing as the house was 414 years old.
The families noticed other noises such as footsteps in the attic and the basement.
Also, whenever the time read, sixteen minutes past midnight, the smoke alarms went off, causing the families to go into mass panic, as they tried to figure out the cause of the smoke alarms going off.
The two pet dogs, Magic and Shadow, growled every time they went anywhere near the attic or the basement. Lee Jones, 34 thought it was because the dogs had caught sent of an animal that used to live there.
October 31st 2014
Lee, Claire, Rachel and Simon Bradford, 34, were all enjoying a quiet Halloween watching a comedy movie, when suddenly a loud bang came from Jack and Harry’s room. Lee and Simon jumped out of their seats, like they had been shot, and legged it up the stairs.
Jack started crying, “MUMMY, MUMMY, DADDY, DADDY!!!!”
All the noise woke Grace and Maisie up who both started crying, “MUMMY, MUMMY, DADDY, DADDY!!!!” the pleading screams shock Lee and Simon to the bone. At once they knew something serious was happening.
When Lee and Simon, finally ran into the boys room, a look of horror washed over their faces. Jack was standing on the bed, his face as a white as snow and Harry, was curled up in a ball, his face was ashen. Harry had a very visible, bloody mark on his face.
On the wall, opposite the beds, were big bloody letters which read, “GET OUT. YOU SHALL LEAVE THIS PLACE AND NEVER RETURN.”
Lee and Simon were clearly in great shock when suddenly, Jack gave a bloodcurdling scream.
Jack pointed a shaky finger at the corner of the room and said, “Look Daddy, look Uncle Lee, they want to play”
“Who wants to play, Jack?” Simon and Lee puzzled.
“The children, Daddy. I’m going to play with them now Daddy.”
“Si, get the kids, the girls and the dogs out now!” commanded Lee.
Si ushered the kids, the girls and the dogs out and waited for Lee to explain himself.
“This house is haunted, Si. On the night of the July 19th 1850, at sixteen minutes past midnight, a family were asleep when they were killed by a mysterious fire that broke out. The bodies were never found, so they roam this place and they treat it as there final resting place. So it’s up to us to find the bodies.” Lee explained.
Simon and Lee set to work to find the lost bodies and they finally found 5 bodies in the attic and 1 in the basement.
Simon and Lee had found the cause of the growling dogs and the footsteps.
Lee and Simon buried the bodies so they would be at peace. Chalklane was knocked down to make way for new houses and flats.
Finally after years of being unrested, the unknown family were put to rest.
But question still remains, how did the unknown family end up under the floorboards of the attic and the basement?
Were the family killed and placed under the floorboards of the attic and the basement before the house caught fire or did they hide in the floorboards to escape and couldn't get out?
The only people that know are the unknown family and they took the answer with them to their graves.
Only someone with great knowledge can solve this great mystery, but now it’s too late for anyone to solve.
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