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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 05/11/2014
A Legend That Stalks You
Born 1995, M, from Knox Indiana, United StatesIt was a warm night one saturday evening when I walked to a near by little store not far from my house. I had to grab some things from the store really quick and head back home for supper. As I neared the store I had a sudden feeling of being watched. My gut twisted, My ears rang, and my head gave a sudden pain. As I entered the near by store the feelings just disappeared randomly and I felt as if it never happened I was glad it was gone.
I grabbed the stuff I had come for and payed for it then headed back outside in the dark nightly hours with only the light from the store casting shadows. My head then started to hurt again my gut gave a twist, and my ears rang once more but at a low pitch sound. I looked around slowly but not a soul insight or even a midnight walker. I started to walk slowly back to my house as the feeling continued to hook on my body. As I was walking the feelings became stronger and harder to withstand My ears rang at a loud pitch, My gut twisted a tighter pain, and my head felt as if it was going to explode.
I stopped as my head made me wanna throw up so I stopped to sit down on a wooden bench by under an old Bus Stop to calm myself and keep my stomach steady. The feelings slowly faded away as I sat still for a little while longer to calm myself. As the feelings were gone I stood up and headed the rest of the way to my house. Once I reached my street the gut wrenching pain started again, My ears rang at a high pitch of sound, and my head bounded really bad that I had to throw up.
I stopped and held my ears, closed my eyes and went to my knees for a breather. My hands were shaking at a nervous manner. My body felt cold as if it was dead and i could not move as if I was paralyzed or something. I pulled from what ever Force Or Fear was holding me back and ran home scared to death, hands still shaking, and body was still a little cold. I got to my house and the cold faded aways the feelings drifted away and I felt that it never happened. I looked back and saw a tall and dark figure with red eyes lurk its way into a near by wooded area. What was this figure wanting from me what could of happened to me if I was got by it no one may never know this still lays in mystery
A Legend That Stalks You(Shawn Freeman)
It was a warm night one saturday evening when I walked to a near by little store not far from my house. I had to grab some things from the store really quick and head back home for supper. As I neared the store I had a sudden feeling of being watched. My gut twisted, My ears rang, and my head gave a sudden pain. As I entered the near by store the feelings just disappeared randomly and I felt as if it never happened I was glad it was gone.
I grabbed the stuff I had come for and payed for it then headed back outside in the dark nightly hours with only the light from the store casting shadows. My head then started to hurt again my gut gave a twist, and my ears rang once more but at a low pitch sound. I looked around slowly but not a soul insight or even a midnight walker. I started to walk slowly back to my house as the feeling continued to hook on my body. As I was walking the feelings became stronger and harder to withstand My ears rang at a loud pitch, My gut twisted a tighter pain, and my head felt as if it was going to explode.
I stopped as my head made me wanna throw up so I stopped to sit down on a wooden bench by under an old Bus Stop to calm myself and keep my stomach steady. The feelings slowly faded away as I sat still for a little while longer to calm myself. As the feelings were gone I stood up and headed the rest of the way to my house. Once I reached my street the gut wrenching pain started again, My ears rang at a high pitch of sound, and my head bounded really bad that I had to throw up.
I stopped and held my ears, closed my eyes and went to my knees for a breather. My hands were shaking at a nervous manner. My body felt cold as if it was dead and i could not move as if I was paralyzed or something. I pulled from what ever Force Or Fear was holding me back and ran home scared to death, hands still shaking, and body was still a little cold. I got to my house and the cold faded aways the feelings drifted away and I felt that it never happened. I looked back and saw a tall and dark figure with red eyes lurk its way into a near by wooded area. What was this figure wanting from me what could of happened to me if I was got by it no one may never know this still lays in mystery
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