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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 06/09/2014
Time
Born 1970, M, from Punta gorda/F.L., United StatesAs the rain came down Don looked out the window of the coffee shop. There was the thought of Tammy, the bosses girlfriend, that he had feelings for her. Don knew that it was something that would get him killed. There was just something about Tammy that he had fallen in love with. He did not know if she had the same feelings. It was something that Don knew that he had to get out of his mind and fast. For he could tell someone who would tell the boss, then that would be the end of Don for good.
Don was told to go to a place where he was told to wait. It was something that he did not like. It was an old warehouse. Don had a feeling that this might be the end. He waited and was about to leave when a car came up the dirt road. The window opened and a gun came out and shot Don dead. Don's last words were "Why?" What he never knew is that it was not the boss but it was his girlfriend. Jane had found out that Tommy was looking at the bosses girlfriend. That made her see red. seeing she could not get to the woman, she killed Don.
It was something that Don would never know, who really killed him. You could say he should of not have had feelings for someone who was not his girlfriend.
Time(Leo Laclair)
As the rain came down Don looked out the window of the coffee shop. There was the thought of Tammy, the bosses girlfriend, that he had feelings for her. Don knew that it was something that would get him killed. There was just something about Tammy that he had fallen in love with. He did not know if she had the same feelings. It was something that Don knew that he had to get out of his mind and fast. For he could tell someone who would tell the boss, then that would be the end of Don for good.
Don was told to go to a place where he was told to wait. It was something that he did not like. It was an old warehouse. Don had a feeling that this might be the end. He waited and was about to leave when a car came up the dirt road. The window opened and a gun came out and shot Don dead. Don's last words were "Why?" What he never knew is that it was not the boss but it was his girlfriend. Jane had found out that Tommy was looking at the bosses girlfriend. That made her see red. seeing she could not get to the woman, she killed Don.
It was something that Don would never know, who really killed him. You could say he should of not have had feelings for someone who was not his girlfriend.
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