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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 07/01/2014
The Loch Ness Monster
Born 2004, M, from New York, United StatesThe Loch Ness Monster
When we got there
Once last summer I went to Loch Ness a lake in northwest Scotland where the loch ness monster lives or also known as “Nessie.” I went there because I was a photographer and I wanted to take a picture of Nessie. I also brought my family and one friend with me. First when I got of the boring airplane that took about 8 hours because of some weather conditions I went to the lake right away and took my camera with me. When I got there I realized there were a lot of photographers that want to take a picture but I didn’t give up yet. My family owned a boat so I went on the boat. We had a summer house here so we kept a boat just in case. So I went on the boat with my dad.
When I saw it
First it was just a small thing out of the water but then it got bigger and I realized it was Nessie and when I saw it again it was swimming fast so we put the boat at maximum power and chased it. Nessie went to a cave and the boat couldn’t get through so my dad and I swam inside the cave and saw him inside the cave. We saw him sleeping in the cave on a bunch of rocks and took a couple of pictures and went outside the cave and got on the boat and went home. When we got there I talked about Nessie and Nessie’s home with my friend. The next day I went on the boat again with my dad and my friend. This time we went straight to the cave and we saw Nessie sleeping.
The amazing discovery
I thought to myself “Are those rocks that Nessie is sleeping on moving” and then I saw that they were moving and they cracked and I saw babies. I took a lot of photos.” We could be famous if we sell these photos” I said. When we got home we were all amazed that Nessie had babies. We told our whole family about the news. The next day we sold the pictures to a museum and we earned a good amount of money. We became famous all over the world. The next day we had to leave Scotland so I pleaded dad that I want to see Nessie and her babies one last time and we did and the babies were growing fast, then I said goodbye to Nessie and her babies and went home.
By Raj
The Loch Ness Monster(Rajarshi Mitra)
The Loch Ness Monster
When we got there
Once last summer I went to Loch Ness a lake in northwest Scotland where the loch ness monster lives or also known as “Nessie.” I went there because I was a photographer and I wanted to take a picture of Nessie. I also brought my family and one friend with me. First when I got of the boring airplane that took about 8 hours because of some weather conditions I went to the lake right away and took my camera with me. When I got there I realized there were a lot of photographers that want to take a picture but I didn’t give up yet. My family owned a boat so I went on the boat. We had a summer house here so we kept a boat just in case. So I went on the boat with my dad.
When I saw it
First it was just a small thing out of the water but then it got bigger and I realized it was Nessie and when I saw it again it was swimming fast so we put the boat at maximum power and chased it. Nessie went to a cave and the boat couldn’t get through so my dad and I swam inside the cave and saw him inside the cave. We saw him sleeping in the cave on a bunch of rocks and took a couple of pictures and went outside the cave and got on the boat and went home. When we got there I talked about Nessie and Nessie’s home with my friend. The next day I went on the boat again with my dad and my friend. This time we went straight to the cave and we saw Nessie sleeping.
The amazing discovery
I thought to myself “Are those rocks that Nessie is sleeping on moving” and then I saw that they were moving and they cracked and I saw babies. I took a lot of photos.” We could be famous if we sell these photos” I said. When we got home we were all amazed that Nessie had babies. We told our whole family about the news. The next day we sold the pictures to a museum and we earned a good amount of money. We became famous all over the world. The next day we had to leave Scotland so I pleaded dad that I want to see Nessie and her babies one last time and we did and the babies were growing fast, then I said goodbye to Nessie and her babies and went home.
By Raj
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