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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 07/23/2014
He was walking down the street and saw Carmen. He was moved. She looked really pretty in this short tight and belly revealing top. "You look beautiful."
"Thankyou."
Little did he know. She just saw him passing by and rushed out of her house dressed like that as if she just wanted to get something. So she got scolded by someone, "You look stupid. He has a girl, tall, beautiful complexion, really pretty, and a bad girl with a bad sagitarrius tattoo on her back."
"Really, so, he thinks I am beautiful."
"Get to your house now silly!"
She kept thinking of him all day. He looked so hot that morning going to work in his dark brown suit, white shirt and trousers. His hair ruffled in big curles to the front.
When he got back she saw a girl in his car down the street. "God she is so beautiful, but am big, bold and sexy in my own way."
She had changed to another pair of trousers and a fancy top. He paid no attention to her.
She said to Linda. "I am the hottest thing ever!"
"You are sick. What do you think, wake up, that beautiful girl is not just a log. She is the baddest of them all, can't you see she's too damn beautiful"
"I guess everyone out here is hot too, even you and maybe aunty and mummy."
"Why mock your mum. She was once young and she is not old anyway she has her life. Your pretty mum swept your handsome dad off his feet and that's why you are here."
"Gosh you don't have to say that, whatever!"
"That girl is just too bad. She takes him to a world where there are no sounds, only they exist in a vision of ecstacy, she knocks him off after convulsing in passion. Everyday. Deal with it love." She chuckled excitedly
"Okay I'm going to cry." "And what about you, what do you do?"
Ha ha, okay I am also bad, lots of sparks and I take my guy to a haven, maybe not as freaky as the coma and convulsion."
"Sick, that's arrant nonsense, get serious, okay, you are bad in your mind. Do you know how it feels to be out here longing for this guy being the unwanted girl."
"I know, give it up. He is never going to date you cos he has a reason not to, he has a girl and he won't leave her."
"More like a prejudice not the coma thing."
"Obviously maybe."
Love and Prejudice(Meg)
He was walking down the street and saw Carmen. He was moved. She looked really pretty in this short tight and belly revealing top. "You look beautiful."
"Thankyou."
Little did he know. She just saw him passing by and rushed out of her house dressed like that as if she just wanted to get something. So she got scolded by someone, "You look stupid. He has a girl, tall, beautiful complexion, really pretty, and a bad girl with a bad sagitarrius tattoo on her back."
"Really, so, he thinks I am beautiful."
"Get to your house now silly!"
She kept thinking of him all day. He looked so hot that morning going to work in his dark brown suit, white shirt and trousers. His hair ruffled in big curles to the front.
When he got back she saw a girl in his car down the street. "God she is so beautiful, but am big, bold and sexy in my own way."
She had changed to another pair of trousers and a fancy top. He paid no attention to her.
She said to Linda. "I am the hottest thing ever!"
"You are sick. What do you think, wake up, that beautiful girl is not just a log. She is the baddest of them all, can't you see she's too damn beautiful"
"I guess everyone out here is hot too, even you and maybe aunty and mummy."
"Why mock your mum. She was once young and she is not old anyway she has her life. Your pretty mum swept your handsome dad off his feet and that's why you are here."
"Gosh you don't have to say that, whatever!"
"That girl is just too bad. She takes him to a world where there are no sounds, only they exist in a vision of ecstacy, she knocks him off after convulsing in passion. Everyday. Deal with it love." She chuckled excitedly
"Okay I'm going to cry." "And what about you, what do you do?"
Ha ha, okay I am also bad, lots of sparks and I take my guy to a haven, maybe not as freaky as the coma and convulsion."
"Sick, that's arrant nonsense, get serious, okay, you are bad in your mind. Do you know how it feels to be out here longing for this guy being the unwanted girl."
"I know, give it up. He is never going to date you cos he has a reason not to, he has a girl and he won't leave her."
"More like a prejudice not the coma thing."
"Obviously maybe."
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