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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Aging / Maturity
- Published: 08/03/2014
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As always he saw a perfect line. Zack, since he can remember, had a clear idea of what his life is going to be like. Little did he know that life is not perfect and what he saw was never a perfect line or a perfect life.
At age 7 Zack fell in love with his class mate jasmine. At least that is what he thought he felt. He always had a good grasp on what’s right and what has to be done, but as the years passed by he realized that he didn’t. Now Zack is 26 and he has a ton of emotional scars.
Zack wakes to a vortex of horrible scream’s bouncing between his dad and brother.
“What is that a nightmare?! Am I awake?”
As he tries to make sense of what’s happening, walking slowly towards the door with a heavy head, A spark is lit in his head and makes him replay his entire life. “Whats happening?”
He can't shake this feeling and is more embedded in the idea. ”What if I tried to relive and fail”. “Maybe failing is the only option”. “Can some people have failure only dealt to them in all hands”.
Struggling through the tearing rain of ideas in his mind, he begins to hear sounds from the inside.
At start the sounds cluttered and were undistinguished then suddenly they all stopped and one began to speak.
“Zack listen to me. I’m X and I think you should listen to me”
Abruptly it is interrupted by another “Noo!! Don’t, I only speak the truth”.
Zack, feeling nauseous as to how he came to losing his mind, is snapped out by “This is Z and the truth is what I say”
X replied “What if the truth is not what you want”.
Zack, feeling a gaping hole in his chest through which the voice seem to emanate from, Holds his hand to his chest and says “I don’t know what I want”
A strong sting followed by “your parents will be soon here to see you“ is whispered to Zack by a woman in white. Zack couldn’t make out what’s happening until he hears “Nurse Roberts would you please check on the patient in room 777”.
He realized he is in a hospital and somehow it made him feel scared to his core.
“What’s happening to me” he asks as he tries to move his hands but can’t because he is shackled to his bed.
It turns out Zack is in a comma and what’s happening is just what he is imagining in his mind………
X to Z “Does this make a sense“ Z to X “Truth is there is no sense”.
The Hollow(Seif)
As always he saw a perfect line. Zack, since he can remember, had a clear idea of what his life is going to be like. Little did he know that life is not perfect and what he saw was never a perfect line or a perfect life.
At age 7 Zack fell in love with his class mate jasmine. At least that is what he thought he felt. He always had a good grasp on what’s right and what has to be done, but as the years passed by he realized that he didn’t. Now Zack is 26 and he has a ton of emotional scars.
Zack wakes to a vortex of horrible scream’s bouncing between his dad and brother.
“What is that a nightmare?! Am I awake?”
As he tries to make sense of what’s happening, walking slowly towards the door with a heavy head, A spark is lit in his head and makes him replay his entire life. “Whats happening?”
He can't shake this feeling and is more embedded in the idea. ”What if I tried to relive and fail”. “Maybe failing is the only option”. “Can some people have failure only dealt to them in all hands”.
Struggling through the tearing rain of ideas in his mind, he begins to hear sounds from the inside.
At start the sounds cluttered and were undistinguished then suddenly they all stopped and one began to speak.
“Zack listen to me. I’m X and I think you should listen to me”
Abruptly it is interrupted by another “Noo!! Don’t, I only speak the truth”.
Zack, feeling nauseous as to how he came to losing his mind, is snapped out by “This is Z and the truth is what I say”
X replied “What if the truth is not what you want”.
Zack, feeling a gaping hole in his chest through which the voice seem to emanate from, Holds his hand to his chest and says “I don’t know what I want”
A strong sting followed by “your parents will be soon here to see you“ is whispered to Zack by a woman in white. Zack couldn’t make out what’s happening until he hears “Nurse Roberts would you please check on the patient in room 777”.
He realized he is in a hospital and somehow it made him feel scared to his core.
“What’s happening to me” he asks as he tries to move his hands but can’t because he is shackled to his bed.
It turns out Zack is in a comma and what’s happening is just what he is imagining in his mind………
X to Z “Does this make a sense“ Z to X “Truth is there is no sense”.
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