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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 08/13/2014
Once upon a time in a magical world of colors....there was a town named Pali Hali. There lived many interesting people and painters,poets,writers,readers,magician,jokers,and many good people.It was a place of no worry and everything worked by magic.But anyhow this is a story of a town named Hali Pali....there lived a poor magician in a street.He was the only not happy person in that town.people helped him a lot to make him happy but the result was zero..That old man's name was Elliot.he was kind and humble.he lived in a tree house without magic in his life and without the bright colors.
ONE DAY...Elliot was passing by a shop and saw a little girl peeping on a shops window and staring it continually...she wore a large yellow coat with red boats.It looks like she came from a place where there had been rain.and that girl was staring on a rented shop.it has no colors just nothing written too but she starred a lot.Elliot thought that he was only the sad person in that town but she was too he thought.Elliot slowly stepped forward and asked "little girl,what are u looking at!" She didn't replied..Elliot asked again,but then also she didn't answered.and at last she said "Can you help me buy this shop!"
"I don't think,but why are you staring at this shop?"asked Eliot
"I need a shop if you can't help me then no thanks mister,"girl said angrily.
"Ok I'll talk to the owner"said Elliot politely.
Elliot went and searched the owner and he found him .when he bought the shop.elliot gave the keys to the girl.
"Thanks mister!you can join me if you want to be happy..."said the girl smiling.
"I think I need happiness but no one can make me nor you can!"said Elliot sadly.
"Oh don't be sad you had a little life you should give me a try!"said little girl nicely.
"Ok!as you wish..."said Elliot
THEN DAYS PASSED THAT GIRL AND ELLIOT MANAGED TO SETTLE THINGS AND STUFFS...
ONE Bright morning,Elliot was heading to the market and saw that girl buying some brushes and paints and painting stuffs...Elliot went after her and reached at last to the shop.when Elliot saw the shop it was full of beautiful colors and pictures and logos....Elliot just got a attack of colors that he fell down the ground..and he fell in a dream...he saw that he was himself a painter and that girl too.they both painted beautiful scene and they were all famous.Elliot was famous in his dream and had magical powers too...and then he got up and saw that girl in front of him.and days passed that girl taught Elliot how to paint and enjoy painting with brushes.days went by and by...Elliot knew more and more and one day people knew Elliot has changed he laughs and smiles and says jokes to kids and teaches them how to paint.
Elliot started a school named as the "HOPE NO,KIDS SCHOOL"
Elliot named and for years people loved him.that small girl grew up too.she was 14 now.young and beautiful.One day Elliot took hides paints and wanted to paint but her hands were so old to work...that young girl came and said.
"Elliot! Can you name me please!"said the girl
'"Oh ok what name you prefer"asked Elliot.
"Any name that will be a name by you and a gift also"said the girl humbly.
Elliot thought for a minute and said
"How about.....yea...I'll name you....."and thought...
That girl took his hand and said
"You are like my grandpa he used to think a lot but was so talented indeed...he used to tell me life and death has a big relationship with each other but the difference is life is more colorful then death."
Elliot thought just a second and said
"That's right!so I'll name you .....Elle the girl of wonders"
And Elle got a name she laughed a lot and after a while she fell down.elliot was shocked.and when he checked his heartbeat she was all dead and cold.elliot cried and coughed. And did a magical colors painting for her..and died too with that girl lying beside her...his last words were..
"I love you my Elle,I am proud to be your grandpa"
AND THE END BUT STILL NO ONE KNOWS WHERE THEY ARE NOW BECAUSE ELLE IS ALIVE SOMEWHERE IN THE WORLD...DOCTOR SAID IT WAS JUST A SHOCK OF COLORS....
#~{THE END.....thank you~}£€
Elliot the magical painter(N princess)
Once upon a time in a magical world of colors....there was a town named Pali Hali. There lived many interesting people and painters,poets,writers,readers,magician,jokers,and many good people.It was a place of no worry and everything worked by magic.But anyhow this is a story of a town named Hali Pali....there lived a poor magician in a street.He was the only not happy person in that town.people helped him a lot to make him happy but the result was zero..That old man's name was Elliot.he was kind and humble.he lived in a tree house without magic in his life and without the bright colors.
ONE DAY...Elliot was passing by a shop and saw a little girl peeping on a shops window and staring it continually...she wore a large yellow coat with red boats.It looks like she came from a place where there had been rain.and that girl was staring on a rented shop.it has no colors just nothing written too but she starred a lot.Elliot thought that he was only the sad person in that town but she was too he thought.Elliot slowly stepped forward and asked "little girl,what are u looking at!" She didn't replied..Elliot asked again,but then also she didn't answered.and at last she said "Can you help me buy this shop!"
"I don't think,but why are you staring at this shop?"asked Eliot
"I need a shop if you can't help me then no thanks mister,"girl said angrily.
"Ok I'll talk to the owner"said Elliot politely.
Elliot went and searched the owner and he found him .when he bought the shop.elliot gave the keys to the girl.
"Thanks mister!you can join me if you want to be happy..."said the girl smiling.
"I think I need happiness but no one can make me nor you can!"said Elliot sadly.
"Oh don't be sad you had a little life you should give me a try!"said little girl nicely.
"Ok!as you wish..."said Elliot
THEN DAYS PASSED THAT GIRL AND ELLIOT MANAGED TO SETTLE THINGS AND STUFFS...
ONE Bright morning,Elliot was heading to the market and saw that girl buying some brushes and paints and painting stuffs...Elliot went after her and reached at last to the shop.when Elliot saw the shop it was full of beautiful colors and pictures and logos....Elliot just got a attack of colors that he fell down the ground..and he fell in a dream...he saw that he was himself a painter and that girl too.they both painted beautiful scene and they were all famous.Elliot was famous in his dream and had magical powers too...and then he got up and saw that girl in front of him.and days passed that girl taught Elliot how to paint and enjoy painting with brushes.days went by and by...Elliot knew more and more and one day people knew Elliot has changed he laughs and smiles and says jokes to kids and teaches them how to paint.
Elliot started a school named as the "HOPE NO,KIDS SCHOOL"
Elliot named and for years people loved him.that small girl grew up too.she was 14 now.young and beautiful.One day Elliot took hides paints and wanted to paint but her hands were so old to work...that young girl came and said.
"Elliot! Can you name me please!"said the girl
'"Oh ok what name you prefer"asked Elliot.
"Any name that will be a name by you and a gift also"said the girl humbly.
Elliot thought for a minute and said
"How about.....yea...I'll name you....."and thought...
That girl took his hand and said
"You are like my grandpa he used to think a lot but was so talented indeed...he used to tell me life and death has a big relationship with each other but the difference is life is more colorful then death."
Elliot thought just a second and said
"That's right!so I'll name you .....Elle the girl of wonders"
And Elle got a name she laughed a lot and after a while she fell down.elliot was shocked.and when he checked his heartbeat she was all dead and cold.elliot cried and coughed. And did a magical colors painting for her..and died too with that girl lying beside her...his last words were..
"I love you my Elle,I am proud to be your grandpa"
AND THE END BUT STILL NO ONE KNOWS WHERE THEY ARE NOW BECAUSE ELLE IS ALIVE SOMEWHERE IN THE WORLD...DOCTOR SAID IT WAS JUST A SHOCK OF COLORS....
#~{THE END.....thank you~}£€
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