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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 08/27/2014
Back to Reality
Born 2002, M, from QLD, AustraliaBack to reality
Part 1 New Time, New Place, New Friends, New Foes
2013
¡§HURRY!¡¨ Jordan shouted.
¡§WE¡¦RE GOING, HELP!¡¨ Aidan shouted.
Then there was silence in the lab.
¡§Where are ¡V Oh no¡¨ Jordan said shocked.
¡§Is that.. ?¡¨ Aidan asked.
¡§Yep¡¨ Jordan replied.
¡§We we we¡¨ Aidan stammered, ¡§in 2006?
¡§It looks like it¡¨ Jordan replied.
¡§Um Hello¡¨, someone in a soft calm voice said.
¡§Liz is that you?¡¨ Jordan asked
Then there was silence in 2006
2013
¡§We need to get it fixed¡¨ 2nd in command ordered.
¡§We can¡¦t!¡¨ someone in a lab coat shouted, ¡§Only Aidan and Jordan can!¡¨.
2006
¡§How do you know my name?¡¨ Liz asked.
¡§We are from the future, so yeah, we met the future you in the book ¡§Oof-Land¡¨, near a red wine filled lake¡¨ Jordan explained.
¡§Oh¡¨ Liz said shocked,
¡§You have the most beautiful voice I have ever heard¡¨. Jordan told her.
¡§Thank you¡¨ She said.
¡§Let¡¦s get down to business¡¨ Aidan said bored from the conversation.
¡§Ok¡¨ Jordan said still looking at Liz dreamily.
2013
¡§We need to send someone else back in time!¡¨, 2nd in command, commanded.
¡§We can only send someone sma-¡§, the guy in the lab coat shouted (actually instead of wasting paper, I¡¦ll just call him Alan).
¡§Well do it¡¨, mysterious voices shouted.
It was Oof Oof and Ivan, they were Aidan and Jordan¡¦s mates. ¡§They¡¦ll be the right size¡¨, Alan said a bit cheery.
2006
¡§What was that?¡¨, Jordan asked as a huge flash well, flashed. In an instant they saw what it was; it was Ivan and Oof Oof.
¡§Hey guys¡¨, Jordan said.
¡§No time for a family reunion¡¨, Ivan said, ¡§We have news for you guys¡¨.
¡§1. Someone sabotaged the time machine.
2. You need to find past all of us to have the power to fix the time machine.
3. We think Alan did the sabotaging.
4. The family is missing you guys.
5. There is no number 5, wait who has been playing with my list?¡¨
2013
¡§Where did daddy go?¡¨ Oof Oof Jr asked in a worried and scared way.
¡§He went back in time to help Aidan and Jordan get back here¡¨, Mrs Oof Oof explained to her son.
The same thing happened in the Ivan household but I¡¦m not going to waste paper having to write it all again.
Part 2 The Journey Begins
2006
¡§We had better start looking for us,¡¨ Jordan said, ¡§We¡¦ll split up, Oof Oof with me, Ivan with Aidan, Oh and Liz, follow this map and meet us at our house in the future¡¨.
(We¡¦ll put it like this, Aidan and Ivan are Team A. Jordan and Oof Oof are Team J, and Liz is Team L.)
Team A Aidan and Ivan set off for Narangba State School because that is where they went in 2006. But the big problem was getting past the teachers.
Team J Meanwhile Jordan and Oof Oof went to their Kindy because that¡¦s where they went in 2006. But the big problem is getting 2006 Jordan and Oof Oof out without them crying and getting the teachers onto them.
Team L Meanwhile Liz followed the map to Aidan, Jordan, Oof Oof and Ivan¡¦s house in 2013 (of course it was 2006 now). But the big problem was the original owners of the house might get them off the land (probably in very unpleasant ways).
Team A Aidan and Ivan got to N.S.S (short for Narangba State School). They first went to the school office to try to sign young Ivan and Aidan out. ¡§You are not allowed to¡¨ said the lady in the office strictly.
¡§That is why I hated the school¡¨, Aidan said to Ivan,as they walked outside. ¡§Should we break them out?¡¨ Aidan asked.
¡§I have a better idea¡¨ Ivan said ¡§I can use my super powers to fly them out¡¨.
¡§Awesome¡¨ Aidan shouted.
¡§Ssshhh!!!¡¨ the lady in the office said.
Team J It wasn¡¦t that hard at the Kindy. Oof Oof just walked in got young Jordan and Oof Oof on his back and walked out. Luckily no one spotted him.
Team L Liz spotted a baby possum. She had a closer look and saw it had a wound. She tore a bit off her shirt and covered its wound up. The possum hugged her; they¡¦ll be best friends to the end!
Team A They were a long way away from the school by the time the teachers found out. They reached the house by 4pm.
Team J They reached the house at about 4:10pm to see Aidan and Ivan already there.
2013
In his toilet break 2nd in command heard Alan planning his perilous plot. I¡¦ve got to tell everyone before he does anything bad, he thought.
2006
Meanwhile, 7 years before, Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan, Ivan, Liz and the possum (she named it before, its name is Saturn) looked at the burnt and broken time machine, that looked like a paper clip.
They went to the shop and bought 8 sets of headphones, they also got some wire and jumpstart leads.
2013
2nd in command told EVERYONE about how Alan sabotaged the machine and about his plot. Then there was a massive flash and Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan and Ivan (from that time, NOT from 2006) were standing there with angry looks on their faces.
¡§ALAN¡¨ Jordan shouted as he ran after him. As Jordan caught Alan he asked why he was cheery when Oof Oof and Ivan got sent through. (Oof Oof and Ivan had explained that he was cheery when they got sent through).
¡§I¡¦ve got a problem¡¨ Alan declared, ¡§I¡¦m always cheery¡¨ he said a bit cheery, ¡§ 2nd in command is the real plotter!¡¨
¡§Oh Thanks¡¨ Jordan said as he ran after 2nd in command.
¡§2ND IN COMMAND!!¡¨ Jordan shouted. He picked up his latest invention; The R.O.F.L ¡¥o¡¦ Tron and asked him questions. ¡§Did you sabotage the machine?¡¦.
¡§No¡¨, Jordan shoved The R.O.F.L ¡¥o¡¦ Tron into 2nd in commands side.
¡§One shot from this, and you¡¦ll be ROFLing so hard your insides will hurtƒº¡¨ Jordan said intimidatingly.
¡§Ok, yes, I did it¡¨.
¡§Take him away¡¨ Jordan shouted.
¡§I¡¦ll get you for this Jordan, if it is the last thing you do¡¨ he shouted angrily.
Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan and Ivan all shook hands and Jordan and Oof Oof went back to find Liz and tell her about their adventure. Aidan and Ivan went back to Oof-land.
Jordan and Oof Oof found Liz and the Oof Oof family. Jordan told Liz about their adventure and asked her where Saturn was. She took them to a tree-house and sure enough, there it was snuggling in some blankets. It was so cute. After that Jordan, Oof Oof and Liz invited everyone they knew to a big feast, it was the best! After that , every Sunday they did the exact same; had a big feast and invited everyone. They were happy doing that and lived happily ever after!
THE
END
Back to Reality(Jordan Sheather)
Back to reality
Part 1 New Time, New Place, New Friends, New Foes
2013
¡§HURRY!¡¨ Jordan shouted.
¡§WE¡¦RE GOING, HELP!¡¨ Aidan shouted.
Then there was silence in the lab.
¡§Where are ¡V Oh no¡¨ Jordan said shocked.
¡§Is that.. ?¡¨ Aidan asked.
¡§Yep¡¨ Jordan replied.
¡§We we we¡¨ Aidan stammered, ¡§in 2006?
¡§It looks like it¡¨ Jordan replied.
¡§Um Hello¡¨, someone in a soft calm voice said.
¡§Liz is that you?¡¨ Jordan asked
Then there was silence in 2006
2013
¡§We need to get it fixed¡¨ 2nd in command ordered.
¡§We can¡¦t!¡¨ someone in a lab coat shouted, ¡§Only Aidan and Jordan can!¡¨.
2006
¡§How do you know my name?¡¨ Liz asked.
¡§We are from the future, so yeah, we met the future you in the book ¡§Oof-Land¡¨, near a red wine filled lake¡¨ Jordan explained.
¡§Oh¡¨ Liz said shocked,
¡§You have the most beautiful voice I have ever heard¡¨. Jordan told her.
¡§Thank you¡¨ She said.
¡§Let¡¦s get down to business¡¨ Aidan said bored from the conversation.
¡§Ok¡¨ Jordan said still looking at Liz dreamily.
2013
¡§We need to send someone else back in time!¡¨, 2nd in command, commanded.
¡§We can only send someone sma-¡§, the guy in the lab coat shouted (actually instead of wasting paper, I¡¦ll just call him Alan).
¡§Well do it¡¨, mysterious voices shouted.
It was Oof Oof and Ivan, they were Aidan and Jordan¡¦s mates. ¡§They¡¦ll be the right size¡¨, Alan said a bit cheery.
2006
¡§What was that?¡¨, Jordan asked as a huge flash well, flashed. In an instant they saw what it was; it was Ivan and Oof Oof.
¡§Hey guys¡¨, Jordan said.
¡§No time for a family reunion¡¨, Ivan said, ¡§We have news for you guys¡¨.
¡§1. Someone sabotaged the time machine.
2. You need to find past all of us to have the power to fix the time machine.
3. We think Alan did the sabotaging.
4. The family is missing you guys.
5. There is no number 5, wait who has been playing with my list?¡¨
2013
¡§Where did daddy go?¡¨ Oof Oof Jr asked in a worried and scared way.
¡§He went back in time to help Aidan and Jordan get back here¡¨, Mrs Oof Oof explained to her son.
The same thing happened in the Ivan household but I¡¦m not going to waste paper having to write it all again.
Part 2 The Journey Begins
2006
¡§We had better start looking for us,¡¨ Jordan said, ¡§We¡¦ll split up, Oof Oof with me, Ivan with Aidan, Oh and Liz, follow this map and meet us at our house in the future¡¨.
(We¡¦ll put it like this, Aidan and Ivan are Team A. Jordan and Oof Oof are Team J, and Liz is Team L.)
Team A Aidan and Ivan set off for Narangba State School because that is where they went in 2006. But the big problem was getting past the teachers.
Team J Meanwhile Jordan and Oof Oof went to their Kindy because that¡¦s where they went in 2006. But the big problem is getting 2006 Jordan and Oof Oof out without them crying and getting the teachers onto them.
Team L Meanwhile Liz followed the map to Aidan, Jordan, Oof Oof and Ivan¡¦s house in 2013 (of course it was 2006 now). But the big problem was the original owners of the house might get them off the land (probably in very unpleasant ways).
Team A Aidan and Ivan got to N.S.S (short for Narangba State School). They first went to the school office to try to sign young Ivan and Aidan out. ¡§You are not allowed to¡¨ said the lady in the office strictly.
¡§That is why I hated the school¡¨, Aidan said to Ivan,as they walked outside. ¡§Should we break them out?¡¨ Aidan asked.
¡§I have a better idea¡¨ Ivan said ¡§I can use my super powers to fly them out¡¨.
¡§Awesome¡¨ Aidan shouted.
¡§Ssshhh!!!¡¨ the lady in the office said.
Team J It wasn¡¦t that hard at the Kindy. Oof Oof just walked in got young Jordan and Oof Oof on his back and walked out. Luckily no one spotted him.
Team L Liz spotted a baby possum. She had a closer look and saw it had a wound. She tore a bit off her shirt and covered its wound up. The possum hugged her; they¡¦ll be best friends to the end!
Team A They were a long way away from the school by the time the teachers found out. They reached the house by 4pm.
Team J They reached the house at about 4:10pm to see Aidan and Ivan already there.
2013
In his toilet break 2nd in command heard Alan planning his perilous plot. I¡¦ve got to tell everyone before he does anything bad, he thought.
2006
Meanwhile, 7 years before, Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan, Ivan, Liz and the possum (she named it before, its name is Saturn) looked at the burnt and broken time machine, that looked like a paper clip.
They went to the shop and bought 8 sets of headphones, they also got some wire and jumpstart leads.
2013
2nd in command told EVERYONE about how Alan sabotaged the machine and about his plot. Then there was a massive flash and Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan and Ivan (from that time, NOT from 2006) were standing there with angry looks on their faces.
¡§ALAN¡¨ Jordan shouted as he ran after him. As Jordan caught Alan he asked why he was cheery when Oof Oof and Ivan got sent through. (Oof Oof and Ivan had explained that he was cheery when they got sent through).
¡§I¡¦ve got a problem¡¨ Alan declared, ¡§I¡¦m always cheery¡¨ he said a bit cheery, ¡§ 2nd in command is the real plotter!¡¨
¡§Oh Thanks¡¨ Jordan said as he ran after 2nd in command.
¡§2ND IN COMMAND!!¡¨ Jordan shouted. He picked up his latest invention; The R.O.F.L ¡¥o¡¦ Tron and asked him questions. ¡§Did you sabotage the machine?¡¦.
¡§No¡¨, Jordan shoved The R.O.F.L ¡¥o¡¦ Tron into 2nd in commands side.
¡§One shot from this, and you¡¦ll be ROFLing so hard your insides will hurtƒº¡¨ Jordan said intimidatingly.
¡§Ok, yes, I did it¡¨.
¡§Take him away¡¨ Jordan shouted.
¡§I¡¦ll get you for this Jordan, if it is the last thing you do¡¨ he shouted angrily.
Jordan, Oof Oof, Aidan and Ivan all shook hands and Jordan and Oof Oof went back to find Liz and tell her about their adventure. Aidan and Ivan went back to Oof-land.
Jordan and Oof Oof found Liz and the Oof Oof family. Jordan told Liz about their adventure and asked her where Saturn was. She took them to a tree-house and sure enough, there it was snuggling in some blankets. It was so cute. After that Jordan, Oof Oof and Liz invited everyone they knew to a big feast, it was the best! After that , every Sunday they did the exact same; had a big feast and invited everyone. They were happy doing that and lived happily ever after!
THE
END
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