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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 08/27/2014
Oof-Land
Born 2002, M, from QLD, AustraliaOof-Land
One nice and sunny day there was a kind, loving boy named Jordan and his faithful friend Oof Oof, he’s a dog. They went for a walk through the woods. “What’s this?” Jordan asked. “Uh it’s a door” Oof Oof replied sarcastically. “Oh na” Jordan said, “but really, where does it lead?” “I don’t know” Oof Oof replied. “Well let’s find out” Jordan suggested. So they anxiously went through.
SPLASH! They landed in some red liquid. “AAAHHH, BLOOD!” They both shouted simultaneously at the top of their lungs. “Not blood” a soft, calm voice replied, “Red wine”. Jordan and Oof Oof exploded with laughter. “Ha Ha Ha” “What’s so funny?” a little girl asked coming out from behind a tree. “Oh it’s just that our parents drink it” Jordan replied. “Anyway who are you?” Oof Oof asked. The girl almost fainted to see a dog talking. “I’m Liz, is that natural, your dog is talking.” “Yes, the problem is that I just can’t get him to be quiet sometimes.” “Anyway, I’m Jordan and this is Oof- “ “Why is there a sign with my name on it?” Oof Oof asked cutting into Jordan’s sentence. “Are you Oof Oof?” Liz asked astonished. “Yes, why?” “You have to come with me” Liz said commandingly. “Why?” Oof Oof asked. “Ivan said bring you.” Liz replied. “We can go in your present from him”. “My present?” Oof Oof asked. “Yeah your elevator.” “Wow an elevator” Jordan said.
They all raced to get to the elevator. “Which level should we go to?” Jordan asked. “There’s Atuma, there’s Oof-land, there’s Cl-“ “Oof-land?” Oof Oof asked shocked. “Let’s go there” Jordan said. Up, up, up they went, until the elevator made a loud DING! They all walked cautiously out; when they saw there was nothing out there they sprinted out. Jordan tripped over something metal. He then landed on another metal thing. “Train tracks?” Jordan wheezed. HONK!!!!!!!!!!
SCREECH!!! Went the wheels of the train. “Who in heavens name is that” the driver asked as he hopped out of the train. “Who are you- Oof Oof is that you?” “Yes it is, who’s asking?” “I’m Ivan” ‘Ivan’ replied. “Who are these guys?” “Well I’m Jordan and this is Liz.” Jordan replied. Do you want to travel around Oof-Land with me in my train?” Ivan asked. “Yeah sure” Oof Oof replied. So the four of them travelled around Oof-Land, and they lived happily ever after.
THE END
Oof-Land(Jordan Sheather)
Oof-Land
One nice and sunny day there was a kind, loving boy named Jordan and his faithful friend Oof Oof, he’s a dog. They went for a walk through the woods. “What’s this?” Jordan asked. “Uh it’s a door” Oof Oof replied sarcastically. “Oh na” Jordan said, “but really, where does it lead?” “I don’t know” Oof Oof replied. “Well let’s find out” Jordan suggested. So they anxiously went through.
SPLASH! They landed in some red liquid. “AAAHHH, BLOOD!” They both shouted simultaneously at the top of their lungs. “Not blood” a soft, calm voice replied, “Red wine”. Jordan and Oof Oof exploded with laughter. “Ha Ha Ha” “What’s so funny?” a little girl asked coming out from behind a tree. “Oh it’s just that our parents drink it” Jordan replied. “Anyway who are you?” Oof Oof asked. The girl almost fainted to see a dog talking. “I’m Liz, is that natural, your dog is talking.” “Yes, the problem is that I just can’t get him to be quiet sometimes.” “Anyway, I’m Jordan and this is Oof- “ “Why is there a sign with my name on it?” Oof Oof asked cutting into Jordan’s sentence. “Are you Oof Oof?” Liz asked astonished. “Yes, why?” “You have to come with me” Liz said commandingly. “Why?” Oof Oof asked. “Ivan said bring you.” Liz replied. “We can go in your present from him”. “My present?” Oof Oof asked. “Yeah your elevator.” “Wow an elevator” Jordan said.
They all raced to get to the elevator. “Which level should we go to?” Jordan asked. “There’s Atuma, there’s Oof-land, there’s Cl-“ “Oof-land?” Oof Oof asked shocked. “Let’s go there” Jordan said. Up, up, up they went, until the elevator made a loud DING! They all walked cautiously out; when they saw there was nothing out there they sprinted out. Jordan tripped over something metal. He then landed on another metal thing. “Train tracks?” Jordan wheezed. HONK!!!!!!!!!!
SCREECH!!! Went the wheels of the train. “Who in heavens name is that” the driver asked as he hopped out of the train. “Who are you- Oof Oof is that you?” “Yes it is, who’s asking?” “I’m Ivan” ‘Ivan’ replied. “Who are these guys?” “Well I’m Jordan and this is Liz.” Jordan replied. Do you want to travel around Oof-Land with me in my train?” Ivan asked. “Yeah sure” Oof Oof replied. So the four of them travelled around Oof-Land, and they lived happily ever after.
THE END
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