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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
  • Subject: Time: PAST/Present/FUTURE
  • Published: 08/27/2014

doctor who and the desert monster

By Xavier Bastyn Copeland
Born 2001, M, from Brisbane, Australia
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Xavier Copeland
doctor who adventure stories

One day ago I the doctor and my faithful companion Amelia pond were trying to land the tardis when suddenly we crashed. We were heading for the planet Hillonia 1977 in earth time. We crashed into a pond in the planet hector 7 & 8. when we walked outside Amy said “it’s a barren wasteland out here and I thought it was severely populated in Hillonia.” I replied “it’s not Hillonia, it’s hector 7 & 8." Amy replied “how did we end up here and why does this planet have two numbers?” and I replied “I don’t know why we crashed here and the reason why this planet has two numbers is because it makes it different and interesting”. I said “we can’t get home, the tardis is overheated.” so we wandered around a bit and we found sand, so we dug up some sand. it was a window to a underground base, it was filled with cryo-pods full of Silurians. then I said “that’s strange. I thought reptilian like the hotness are in cold cryo-sleep chambers. I thought they would be running and roaming and ruling this place and hunting all of the desert animals.

Chapter two: trying to find a door
We are trying to find an entrance to the underground base. about five minutes later we find a metal door with a lot of locks on it. The sonic screw driver took a long time because of how many locks, button codes, codex, passwords and electric locks there were. When we went in it was extremely cold and we wondered how they could survive in the coldness and why they weren’t on the surface and also why they are in the cryo-pods. We were trying to find a red button to wake up the Silurians and ask a couple of questions to find out the situation so he can help or solve the problem. We found a button but it had a lock on it. we had to wait ten minutes for the sonic screw driver to work because it had to recharge its power source and wait for its memory to boot up. When I pressed the button all of the cryo-pods opened and all of the Silurians cried “YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE DONE!” and I said “OH NO WHAT'S GOING ON”. The Silurians screamed “YOU HAVE KILLED US ALL” I SAID “HOW DID I KILL US ALL!” The Silurians replied “please be quiet you are going to get us all killed” I replied “sorry” I said what is going to kill us then” and the Silurians replied “THAT” I shouted “RUN”. We ran down the corridor through the reinforced metal electric locked door. We locked the door and the thing on the other side kept thudding at the door it took twelve minutes until it finally stopped thudding at the door. I said “WHAT WAS THAT” the Silurians replied “we don’t know all we know that it is very dangerous and it is trying to kill us” another Silurian said “should we try to kill the thing” I said “no we should try to talk to it or capture it at least.” We tried to communicate to the thing but it roared louder and louder harder and harder until it finally it just stopped and there was complete silence. I said “we should try to look for another exit around the place or try to break our way out”
The Silurians said “we will try our best to help” I said “how did you get here anyway and is this your home planet” the Silurians replied “we were drilling underground and found a thing buried in dirt so we took it in our ship when we took off about 30 minutes later the thing came crashing through the ship ripped the engine fuel tank, the engine and the backup fuel right off and no we crash landed here”. “Why did you pick up the piece of dirt for you didn’t need it do you?” The Silurians said “we thought it was a rare mineral so we excavated the chuck of it” I said “that’s ok then it’s just you don’t normally see that happen or though it’s happen twice since before different creatures though but that doesn’t matter because we are the situation right now so we have to get started on finding a way out and try and block further future accident’s with crashing here and erase this place from the universal map so no one can find this place by planning it but that still is a problem of fluke finding this planet so we have to hide or move the creature of the planet or even move the planet itself”.

doctor who and the desert monster(Xavier Bastyn Copeland) Xavier Copeland
doctor who adventure stories

One day ago I the doctor and my faithful companion Amelia pond were trying to land the tardis when suddenly we crashed. We were heading for the planet Hillonia 1977 in earth time. We crashed into a pond in the planet hector 7 & 8. when we walked outside Amy said “it’s a barren wasteland out here and I thought it was severely populated in Hillonia.” I replied “it’s not Hillonia, it’s hector 7 & 8." Amy replied “how did we end up here and why does this planet have two numbers?” and I replied “I don’t know why we crashed here and the reason why this planet has two numbers is because it makes it different and interesting”. I said “we can’t get home, the tardis is overheated.” so we wandered around a bit and we found sand, so we dug up some sand. it was a window to a underground base, it was filled with cryo-pods full of Silurians. then I said “that’s strange. I thought reptilian like the hotness are in cold cryo-sleep chambers. I thought they would be running and roaming and ruling this place and hunting all of the desert animals.

Chapter two: trying to find a door
We are trying to find an entrance to the underground base. about five minutes later we find a metal door with a lot of locks on it. The sonic screw driver took a long time because of how many locks, button codes, codex, passwords and electric locks there were. When we went in it was extremely cold and we wondered how they could survive in the coldness and why they weren’t on the surface and also why they are in the cryo-pods. We were trying to find a red button to wake up the Silurians and ask a couple of questions to find out the situation so he can help or solve the problem. We found a button but it had a lock on it. we had to wait ten minutes for the sonic screw driver to work because it had to recharge its power source and wait for its memory to boot up. When I pressed the button all of the cryo-pods opened and all of the Silurians cried “YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE DONE!” and I said “OH NO WHAT'S GOING ON”. The Silurians screamed “YOU HAVE KILLED US ALL” I SAID “HOW DID I KILL US ALL!” The Silurians replied “please be quiet you are going to get us all killed” I replied “sorry” I said what is going to kill us then” and the Silurians replied “THAT” I shouted “RUN”. We ran down the corridor through the reinforced metal electric locked door. We locked the door and the thing on the other side kept thudding at the door it took twelve minutes until it finally stopped thudding at the door. I said “WHAT WAS THAT” the Silurians replied “we don’t know all we know that it is very dangerous and it is trying to kill us” another Silurian said “should we try to kill the thing” I said “no we should try to talk to it or capture it at least.” We tried to communicate to the thing but it roared louder and louder harder and harder until it finally it just stopped and there was complete silence. I said “we should try to look for another exit around the place or try to break our way out”
The Silurians said “we will try our best to help” I said “how did you get here anyway and is this your home planet” the Silurians replied “we were drilling underground and found a thing buried in dirt so we took it in our ship when we took off about 30 minutes later the thing came crashing through the ship ripped the engine fuel tank, the engine and the backup fuel right off and no we crash landed here”. “Why did you pick up the piece of dirt for you didn’t need it do you?” The Silurians said “we thought it was a rare mineral so we excavated the chuck of it” I said “that’s ok then it’s just you don’t normally see that happen or though it’s happen twice since before different creatures though but that doesn’t matter because we are the situation right now so we have to get started on finding a way out and try and block further future accident’s with crashing here and erase this place from the universal map so no one can find this place by planning it but that still is a problem of fluke finding this planet so we have to hide or move the creature of the planet or even move the planet itself”.

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