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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 09/25/2014
The Mystery on WestField Apple Street
Born 2003, F, from Indianapolis, Indiana, United StatesThe Mystery on WestField Apple Street
One one stormy night, a group of friends went to the movies. Their names were Mary, Hazel, Gus and Justin. Gus, Mary, and Hazel are neighbors, but Justin lives on the other block. When the movie was over Justin started walking home all alone. Mary shouted “Wait Justin, are you sure you want to walk home alone?” “Yeah, i’ll be fine” he exclaimed.
In the morning Mary tries calling numerous of times, but he never answered. She tried going to his house, but nobody was home. Mary called Hazel and Gus to have a meeting in her treehouse. “I called you here because Justin is missing, i’ve tried calling and he never answered and I went to his house and the door was locked and nobody was home.” “ “We have to find him!” Hazel and Gus both said.”I’m starting to get worried.”
“Don’t worry, we will find him, lets think.” “We went to the movies and he walked home alone.” ” Well he has to go the park to get home. so he has to be at the park!”Hazel said. “We have to go to the park!”Hazel commanded.When they got to the park they found a strange trash bag between the swings and the bushes. They walked the the bag and untied it and inside was Justins sore body with tears in his clothes, duck tape all around head face and hands, he also had a rope tied around his neck.
Mary screamed “ No, my best friend, hes gone!!!! ” “ Ok we have to call the cops!” Hazel commanded. “ Ok we came as soon as you called, what is the case”Officer. Smith said “ I don’t know, we just found him here in a trash bag, please help us!”Mary complained.
The day after the murder Gus comes and bangs on Marys door. BANG!!! BANG!!!! “ What do you want Gus?” “ I know who the murder is!” “ Really? Who?” “ Mr. Peterson!” “Really, why would he do that? He loves us.” “ Yeah, but we need to go and talk to him!” Gus exclaimed.
KNOCK!!!!! KNOCK!!!! Mr. peterson opened the door very surprisingly.” Hi Mary and Gus, what do you come to me for, wait wheres Justin?” “ thats what we came to talk to you about! Justin is missing and we think you murdered him.” “ Why would I do that, I love Justin, wait Mr. Waldo had a trash bag last night. He was going to the park.” “ Hu, lets go, he has to be the murder.”
They met up with Hazel and went up to Mr. Waldos house. BANG!!! BANG!!!!! “What are you doing here oh wait wheres Justin?” Waldo said. “ Don’t be silly, you murdered him.” Mary said. “ Yeah I did, because he walked in my house and barged into me and the detectives conversation about the killing at apartment 202. “ He said well Who was it and so I got mad and I killed him.” “ We are calling the cops!!”
So now the whole West fieldApple Street was safe as ever. No murders or killings happened since.
The Mystery on WestField Apple Street(Kendall)
The Mystery on WestField Apple Street
One one stormy night, a group of friends went to the movies. Their names were Mary, Hazel, Gus and Justin. Gus, Mary, and Hazel are neighbors, but Justin lives on the other block. When the movie was over Justin started walking home all alone. Mary shouted “Wait Justin, are you sure you want to walk home alone?” “Yeah, i’ll be fine” he exclaimed.
In the morning Mary tries calling numerous of times, but he never answered. She tried going to his house, but nobody was home. Mary called Hazel and Gus to have a meeting in her treehouse. “I called you here because Justin is missing, i’ve tried calling and he never answered and I went to his house and the door was locked and nobody was home.” “ “We have to find him!” Hazel and Gus both said.”I’m starting to get worried.”
“Don’t worry, we will find him, lets think.” “We went to the movies and he walked home alone.” ” Well he has to go the park to get home. so he has to be at the park!”Hazel said. “We have to go to the park!”Hazel commanded.When they got to the park they found a strange trash bag between the swings and the bushes. They walked the the bag and untied it and inside was Justins sore body with tears in his clothes, duck tape all around head face and hands, he also had a rope tied around his neck.
Mary screamed “ No, my best friend, hes gone!!!! ” “ Ok we have to call the cops!” Hazel commanded. “ Ok we came as soon as you called, what is the case”Officer. Smith said “ I don’t know, we just found him here in a trash bag, please help us!”Mary complained.
The day after the murder Gus comes and bangs on Marys door. BANG!!! BANG!!!! “ What do you want Gus?” “ I know who the murder is!” “ Really? Who?” “ Mr. Peterson!” “Really, why would he do that? He loves us.” “ Yeah, but we need to go and talk to him!” Gus exclaimed.
KNOCK!!!!! KNOCK!!!! Mr. peterson opened the door very surprisingly.” Hi Mary and Gus, what do you come to me for, wait wheres Justin?” “ thats what we came to talk to you about! Justin is missing and we think you murdered him.” “ Why would I do that, I love Justin, wait Mr. Waldo had a trash bag last night. He was going to the park.” “ Hu, lets go, he has to be the murder.”
They met up with Hazel and went up to Mr. Waldos house. BANG!!! BANG!!!!! “What are you doing here oh wait wheres Justin?” Waldo said. “ Don’t be silly, you murdered him.” Mary said. “ Yeah I did, because he walked in my house and barged into me and the detectives conversation about the killing at apartment 202. “ He said well Who was it and so I got mad and I killed him.” “ We are calling the cops!!”
So now the whole West fieldApple Street was safe as ever. No murders or killings happened since.
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