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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Childhood / Youth
- Published: 09/30/2014
I will tell you a story of when I was in love. When I was younger I was always playing with this girl named Annabel. Our parents set us up to play and hopefully be married someday.
She had short brown hair and a weird eye color. It was violet. She was really pretty. We hung out everyday up until I was fourteen. When I was fourteen I started dating this other girl.
She was popular with long blonde flowing hair and green sparkling eyes. Way hotter than Annabel. Everyone wanted to date her. Her name was Alannah and I was so lucky. Well the whole time I was dating Ally, Anna was hurting inside and I didn’t know it.
She was so in love with me and I didn’t even see it. I wouldn’t know what I had till I lost it. Sometimes me and Anna hung out but it wasn’t the same. One day I waited at our corner but she never came. So I went to school.
I didn’t see her at school so after school I went to her house. No one was home. At first I thought nothing of it than I started to get a sick feeling. So I call Anna’s phone, no answer. For some reason than I start freaking out.
I call my mom. My mom answers and tells me Anna got killed in a car accident when she was out on her bike. I hang up and and crumple to the ground. I realized than that I loved Anna. I loved her as more than a friend.
Now I ninty-four. It’s been many years since I’ve seen Anna. I swear I see her around a lot tho, especially at night. I think she watches over me. I’m dying. As I take my last breath I say my dying words. “ I love you Anna, I’m coming.” “Now we can stay in love, and be in peace.”
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