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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Family
- Published: 10/06/2014
Where Should We Go On Vacation?
Born 2000, F, from Boston, United StatesIt's vacation time! Who isn't excited? I'm sure everyone is excited. Including the von Bock family. Now here's a their vacation story:
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"I can't believe it's vacation already!" Alois von Bock said. He happily danced around the room. "I think you're overjoyed, Alois," said Allistor von Bock, Alois' older brother. "Suuuure! Who isn't overjoyed about vacation? We're free from horrible school works! Yeeee-haw!" Alois replied, still dancing around the room.
"Stop dancing around like a freak, Alois! Can't you just be sane for ONLY A FEW SECONDS?" Said Athena von Bock, the younger sister of Allistor and Alois. "Loosen up, Athena! Aren't you excited as well, Prissy Missy? If you are, let's dance together! Wooooohoooooo!" Alois replied. Athena facepalmed.
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Maybe you're still confused about the story. If you are, then let me tell you about the von Bock siblings, so you can understand the story more.
Let's start with the oldest first. Allistor Wilhelm von Bock is the oldest of the oldest of the von Bock siblings. In this story he is 12 years old. He has brown hair and green eyes, like all of his siblings. His hair is always slicked back. He is often seen wearing a white shirt, green vest, black pants, and black shoes. He is also known as a "Keep Calm and Be Cool" person because he doesn't speak so much, but keeps his style. Allistor had a slight dislike of girls, but a girl named Ulrike is obsessed with him, and he loathes her. His relationship with his siblings are okay. He likes to read books, write poetry, and watch movies. He has an obsession with maths. His favorite song is Bastille - Pompeii.
Alois Wilhelm von Bock is the middle sibling of the von Bock siblings. In this story he is 11 years old. His hair is always messy. He is often seen wearing a blue T-Shirt saying "Awesome Guy", jeans, and blue sandals. He is silly, funny, and friendly. Alois has a crush on a girl named Jadwiga, but she hates him. His relationship with Allistor is okay, but he often fights with Athena. He likes to play soccer and video games, and listening to pop music. He has an obsession with rappers. His favorite song is LMFAO - I'm Sexy and I Know It.
Athena Wilhelmina von Bock is the youngest of the von Bock siblings. In this story she is 10 years old. Her hair is often tied into a bun and decorated with pearls. She is often seen wearing purple trimmed glasses, a purple dress with frills, and purple, flat glass slippers. She is kinda prissy, that's why Alois nicknamed her Prissy Missy. She is also a crybaby, and sometimes a snob. Athena has a crush on an extremely rich boy in her school named Lukas, but her parents and brothers disliked him. Her relationship with Allistor is okay, but she often fights with Alois. She likes playing the piano and violin, and classical music. She has an obsession with aristocrats. Her favorite song is Pachabel - Canon.
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Now that you've known the von Bock siblings, let's move on to the story.
Mr. and Mrs. von Bock entered the room. Alois quickly stopped dancing around, and smiled goofily. Allistor and Athena kept quiet.
"Kids, where do you want to go for vacation?" Mrs. von Bock asked. "To the beach, of course!" Said Alois. "I'd like to go hiking in the mountains," said Allistor. "I want to go to art museums," said Athena. "BEACH!" Alois interrupted. "ART MUSEUM!" Athena replied. "BEACH!" "ART MUSEUM!" "BEACH!" "ART MUSEUM!" The argument turned into a fight.
"Stop fighting, hey!" Said Allistor. "But I really want to go to art museums," said Athena with a pleading face. "I also really want to go to the beach," said Alois. "Don't you have any solutions, Dad, Mom?" Asked Allistor.
Mr. von Bock smiled. "Children, you seemed to forget that the vacation lasts for a week. Today is Monday, and there is still six days left. How about if on Tuesday and Wednesday we go to the beach, on Thursday and Friday we go hiking, and on Saturday and Sunday we go to art museums?" He said.
"That's a good solution! Thanks, Dad!" Said Alois. "Thanks very much!" Said Athena. "I'm grateful for this," said Allistor. Mr. and Mrs. von Bock smiled happily. "You're so clever, Melvil," said Mrs. von Bock. Mr. von Bock laughed. "I always find solutions to problems, Tamara," he replied.
Where Should We Go On Vacation?(Georgina Beyer)
It's vacation time! Who isn't excited? I'm sure everyone is excited. Including the von Bock family. Now here's a their vacation story:
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"I can't believe it's vacation already!" Alois von Bock said. He happily danced around the room. "I think you're overjoyed, Alois," said Allistor von Bock, Alois' older brother. "Suuuure! Who isn't overjoyed about vacation? We're free from horrible school works! Yeeee-haw!" Alois replied, still dancing around the room.
"Stop dancing around like a freak, Alois! Can't you just be sane for ONLY A FEW SECONDS?" Said Athena von Bock, the younger sister of Allistor and Alois. "Loosen up, Athena! Aren't you excited as well, Prissy Missy? If you are, let's dance together! Wooooohoooooo!" Alois replied. Athena facepalmed.
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Maybe you're still confused about the story. If you are, then let me tell you about the von Bock siblings, so you can understand the story more.
Let's start with the oldest first. Allistor Wilhelm von Bock is the oldest of the oldest of the von Bock siblings. In this story he is 12 years old. He has brown hair and green eyes, like all of his siblings. His hair is always slicked back. He is often seen wearing a white shirt, green vest, black pants, and black shoes. He is also known as a "Keep Calm and Be Cool" person because he doesn't speak so much, but keeps his style. Allistor had a slight dislike of girls, but a girl named Ulrike is obsessed with him, and he loathes her. His relationship with his siblings are okay. He likes to read books, write poetry, and watch movies. He has an obsession with maths. His favorite song is Bastille - Pompeii.
Alois Wilhelm von Bock is the middle sibling of the von Bock siblings. In this story he is 11 years old. His hair is always messy. He is often seen wearing a blue T-Shirt saying "Awesome Guy", jeans, and blue sandals. He is silly, funny, and friendly. Alois has a crush on a girl named Jadwiga, but she hates him. His relationship with Allistor is okay, but he often fights with Athena. He likes to play soccer and video games, and listening to pop music. He has an obsession with rappers. His favorite song is LMFAO - I'm Sexy and I Know It.
Athena Wilhelmina von Bock is the youngest of the von Bock siblings. In this story she is 10 years old. Her hair is often tied into a bun and decorated with pearls. She is often seen wearing purple trimmed glasses, a purple dress with frills, and purple, flat glass slippers. She is kinda prissy, that's why Alois nicknamed her Prissy Missy. She is also a crybaby, and sometimes a snob. Athena has a crush on an extremely rich boy in her school named Lukas, but her parents and brothers disliked him. Her relationship with Allistor is okay, but she often fights with Alois. She likes playing the piano and violin, and classical music. She has an obsession with aristocrats. Her favorite song is Pachabel - Canon.
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Now that you've known the von Bock siblings, let's move on to the story.
Mr. and Mrs. von Bock entered the room. Alois quickly stopped dancing around, and smiled goofily. Allistor and Athena kept quiet.
"Kids, where do you want to go for vacation?" Mrs. von Bock asked. "To the beach, of course!" Said Alois. "I'd like to go hiking in the mountains," said Allistor. "I want to go to art museums," said Athena. "BEACH!" Alois interrupted. "ART MUSEUM!" Athena replied. "BEACH!" "ART MUSEUM!" "BEACH!" "ART MUSEUM!" The argument turned into a fight.
"Stop fighting, hey!" Said Allistor. "But I really want to go to art museums," said Athena with a pleading face. "I also really want to go to the beach," said Alois. "Don't you have any solutions, Dad, Mom?" Asked Allistor.
Mr. von Bock smiled. "Children, you seemed to forget that the vacation lasts for a week. Today is Monday, and there is still six days left. How about if on Tuesday and Wednesday we go to the beach, on Thursday and Friday we go hiking, and on Saturday and Sunday we go to art museums?" He said.
"That's a good solution! Thanks, Dad!" Said Alois. "Thanks very much!" Said Athena. "I'm grateful for this," said Allistor. Mr. and Mrs. von Bock smiled happily. "You're so clever, Melvil," said Mrs. von Bock. Mr. von Bock laughed. "I always find solutions to problems, Tamara," he replied.
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