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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 10/10/2014
The Moment Of Alcatraz
Born 1999, M, from Indianapolis, indiana, United StatesIn the year 1924, lived a mafia member known as Giulio Antonio, he was best known for his dirty work. Giulio was a 25 year old male who lived in Brooklyn, New York, he was not satisfied with the work he had done, all he ever cared about was money, and murder. Giulio had been arrested 15 times, in a county jail, he always said, "This doesn't mean nothing to me, seems like the world has forgotten me".
Giulio was released in the year 1945, and then continued his bloody killing spree. But this time he planned on robbing a bank just to feed his son.
On a monday night, Giulio went to a gun shop, to buy a mp40, which was filled with automatic hot led. "Hello sir, how are you" said the clerk, "Doing great" said Giulio. The next morning, Giulio got into his Ford, and drove off to the bank downtown. Giulio hopped out the car, and went into the bank shooting everyone. "Lay Down or you're next" says Giulio with anger. He walks to the vault and tells the worker to open it, "Open the got dang door, or i'll blow you".
The worker looked at Giulio with anger, to show him that he doesn't scare him at all. "I am not scared of you, you thief", Giulio spreads the wall with blood, and blows up the vault, "Sit down now". Giulio starts to shoot again but this time he hits a kid, that looks to be about 6 or 10 years old. Giulio puts the money in the bag hoping that nobody called the cops, and as soon as Giulio finishes he walks out the bank, driving off into an alley trying to change his clothes. "Well i showed them". Giulio stops and turns around as he sees an officer walking towards his car, "Hello officer", "Giulio, how you been".
Giulio was confused to see his old High School pal, "I've been great Tommy".
Giulio smiles and walks away, and then runs home.
He later finds himself in the Hospital. "Where am I?" "You're in the Hospital on an Island", Giulio gets out of the bed and feels the pain in his back, "Ugh, what is this?" "You have been shot twice". Giulio falls to the ground. " Where am I?" "You're in Alcatraz".
The Moment Of Alcatraz(James E. Cole Jr.)
In the year 1924, lived a mafia member known as Giulio Antonio, he was best known for his dirty work. Giulio was a 25 year old male who lived in Brooklyn, New York, he was not satisfied with the work he had done, all he ever cared about was money, and murder. Giulio had been arrested 15 times, in a county jail, he always said, "This doesn't mean nothing to me, seems like the world has forgotten me".
Giulio was released in the year 1945, and then continued his bloody killing spree. But this time he planned on robbing a bank just to feed his son.
On a monday night, Giulio went to a gun shop, to buy a mp40, which was filled with automatic hot led. "Hello sir, how are you" said the clerk, "Doing great" said Giulio. The next morning, Giulio got into his Ford, and drove off to the bank downtown. Giulio hopped out the car, and went into the bank shooting everyone. "Lay Down or you're next" says Giulio with anger. He walks to the vault and tells the worker to open it, "Open the got dang door, or i'll blow you".
The worker looked at Giulio with anger, to show him that he doesn't scare him at all. "I am not scared of you, you thief", Giulio spreads the wall with blood, and blows up the vault, "Sit down now". Giulio starts to shoot again but this time he hits a kid, that looks to be about 6 or 10 years old. Giulio puts the money in the bag hoping that nobody called the cops, and as soon as Giulio finishes he walks out the bank, driving off into an alley trying to change his clothes. "Well i showed them". Giulio stops and turns around as he sees an officer walking towards his car, "Hello officer", "Giulio, how you been".
Giulio was confused to see his old High School pal, "I've been great Tommy".
Giulio smiles and walks away, and then runs home.
He later finds himself in the Hospital. "Where am I?" "You're in the Hospital on an Island", Giulio gets out of the bed and feels the pain in his back, "Ugh, what is this?" "You have been shot twice". Giulio falls to the ground. " Where am I?" "You're in Alcatraz".
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