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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 10/18/2014
The Prayer
Born 1999, M, from Indianapolis, indiana, United StatesOn a Monday Afternoon, was the day i died.
Me and my friends are in the car listening to music while i’m driving, and we were just being ourselves. I was dropping them off at Tom’s house so i could visit my girlfriend Laura Evans, and i could make-out with her and maybe have sex. The speed limit was 45 and i was going about 50, and we were on the bridge when i was going about that speed. “James keep going”, Tom says, “I am not going that fast Tom, i could get us killed” i said smiling. I go about 56 and a Semi-Truck hits me from the back causing my car to lose control, and it started to flip.
“Ahhhhhh”, John screams, “OMG, please don’t let us die god”, Tom says. I say to myself “Please God just let me die instead, let them stay alive”, and when i thought about that sentence the car flips off the bridge, and we were going into the Ocean. “Ahhhh, we're gonna die” Tom says, “No your not”, i say holding on to the door, and the car hits the ocean without breaking any glass at all, but the water started to come in. “How are we gonna get out of here”, Danny says. And Tom breaks the glass and they all get out but me, i couldn't get out, my body was stuck to the seat belt, and the seat belt wouldn't come off, and i knew right there that my
prayer worked. That Afternoon was the day i died.
The Prayer(James E. Cole Jr.)
On a Monday Afternoon, was the day i died.
Me and my friends are in the car listening to music while i’m driving, and we were just being ourselves. I was dropping them off at Tom’s house so i could visit my girlfriend Laura Evans, and i could make-out with her and maybe have sex. The speed limit was 45 and i was going about 50, and we were on the bridge when i was going about that speed. “James keep going”, Tom says, “I am not going that fast Tom, i could get us killed” i said smiling. I go about 56 and a Semi-Truck hits me from the back causing my car to lose control, and it started to flip.
“Ahhhhhh”, John screams, “OMG, please don’t let us die god”, Tom says. I say to myself “Please God just let me die instead, let them stay alive”, and when i thought about that sentence the car flips off the bridge, and we were going into the Ocean. “Ahhhh, we're gonna die” Tom says, “No your not”, i say holding on to the door, and the car hits the ocean without breaking any glass at all, but the water started to come in. “How are we gonna get out of here”, Danny says. And Tom breaks the glass and they all get out but me, i couldn't get out, my body was stuck to the seat belt, and the seat belt wouldn't come off, and i knew right there that my
prayer worked. That Afternoon was the day i died.
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