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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Personal Growth / Achievement
- Published: 10/21/2014
Victoria woke up and got ready for school. She went down the stairs.
Victoria asked her mum a question, “Mum can I have an Iphone?”
“Why do you want one?” asked Mum.
“I want an Iphone because no one talks,” said Victoria.
“Eat your breakfast,” answered Mum
It started when the first Iphone came out, Bill had one. Because he couldn`t speak that way he had a voice through technology. He would use voice memos to talk. Then everyone wanted to be lazy and that was how everybody stopped talking.
I can remember walking past an electronic store. It had a lovely purple and blue shop front. I couldn`t resist just then I thought of something horrible and I now know what I had to do to get it.
The devil and the angel appeared and started walking with her. “So I heard that you were going to steal money and buy the Iphone?” asked the devil.
“What!” shouted the angel.
“Are you crazy?”
“You’re not crazy are you?”
“she won`t do, it it`s crazy.”
“But then you can have friends.”
“He`s trying to persuade you.”
“No I`m not.”
“”Yes you are.”
“NO I`M NOT!”
“Fine do what he says.”
“Ok,” said Victoria.
They got to school. First lesson was art and her hand swung up.
“Can I go to the toilet?”
“Go quickly,” said Mr Bob
She ran outside the class. She ran outside to the electronic store and she bought the iphone. She had done it. She ran back to class, her hands were trembling and her heart was beating, she could hear it. Everyone looked suspiciously at her, she all most fainted. She had done it. It was the end of school. She went home and hid it under her bed. Her mum cleaned her room and found it.
She asked “How did you get this?”
She had to say, “I bought it.”
“When?”
“At school time.”
“You have to pay for it.”
“ok.”
She never did pay for it, so she got into more trouble. “You have to clean your room!” shouted mum.
She didn’t care but her mum won when she said, “You have to clean the toilet.”
But when she went to school, no one had an iphone anymore. They started talking again. She was so mad that everyone had gone back to talking again, especially as she had just bought the iphone.
Her punishment for buying the iphone was that she had to do the dishes for the rest of her life. She moaned and groaned about this as she hated doing the dishes. She learnt her lesson and never ever listened to the devil again because she figured out that he was always evil. The angel was the one to listen to.
The Horrible Thought(Darius)
Victoria woke up and got ready for school. She went down the stairs.
Victoria asked her mum a question, “Mum can I have an Iphone?”
“Why do you want one?” asked Mum.
“I want an Iphone because no one talks,” said Victoria.
“Eat your breakfast,” answered Mum
It started when the first Iphone came out, Bill had one. Because he couldn`t speak that way he had a voice through technology. He would use voice memos to talk. Then everyone wanted to be lazy and that was how everybody stopped talking.
I can remember walking past an electronic store. It had a lovely purple and blue shop front. I couldn`t resist just then I thought of something horrible and I now know what I had to do to get it.
The devil and the angel appeared and started walking with her. “So I heard that you were going to steal money and buy the Iphone?” asked the devil.
“What!” shouted the angel.
“Are you crazy?”
“You’re not crazy are you?”
“she won`t do, it it`s crazy.”
“But then you can have friends.”
“He`s trying to persuade you.”
“No I`m not.”
“”Yes you are.”
“NO I`M NOT!”
“Fine do what he says.”
“Ok,” said Victoria.
They got to school. First lesson was art and her hand swung up.
“Can I go to the toilet?”
“Go quickly,” said Mr Bob
She ran outside the class. She ran outside to the electronic store and she bought the iphone. She had done it. She ran back to class, her hands were trembling and her heart was beating, she could hear it. Everyone looked suspiciously at her, she all most fainted. She had done it. It was the end of school. She went home and hid it under her bed. Her mum cleaned her room and found it.
She asked “How did you get this?”
She had to say, “I bought it.”
“When?”
“At school time.”
“You have to pay for it.”
“ok.”
She never did pay for it, so she got into more trouble. “You have to clean your room!” shouted mum.
She didn’t care but her mum won when she said, “You have to clean the toilet.”
But when she went to school, no one had an iphone anymore. They started talking again. She was so mad that everyone had gone back to talking again, especially as she had just bought the iphone.
Her punishment for buying the iphone was that she had to do the dishes for the rest of her life. She moaned and groaned about this as she hated doing the dishes. She learnt her lesson and never ever listened to the devil again because she figured out that he was always evil. The angel was the one to listen to.
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