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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 10/29/2014
The Foreign Exchange Student
Born 2000, F, from Randle Wa, United StatesThe Foreign Exchange Student
One fine sunny day in mid-September in an English class full of nineteen sophomore boys ans girls. In the classroom there were four rows of six desks. In this school there are only two classes a day. The English was the last class of the day. The teacher Ms. Maple had long black hair hanging loosely behind her shoulders. Ms. Maple was nice and fun but a tad bit strict. She has been working for eight years at the school.
There is a foreign exchange student who is sixteen and a sophomore. The student named Zayne was a boy with dirt brown hair and eyes. He used to live in Europe. Zayne wasn't your typical teenage boy. He is slow and easily out of breath. He started school that day. He didn't know his way around but somehow figured how to get to class and lunch. Zayne got to second period already out of breath from four hours of first period and walking to second.
When Zayne walked into class, everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at him. He wore black and brown with a dab of red on the side of his lip. Everyone was quiet even the teacher. Zayne ignored them and walked over to an empty desk in the back right corner of the room. When the bell rang, Ms. Maple asked Zayne to come up front and introduced himself. Zayne finally got up there five minutes later because he was so slow. With a lot of effort he introduced himself, everyone was quiet. Zayne gets through two hours of class when his thirst and hunger for blood and human flesh went into overdrive.
Zayne ignored most of it but couldn't do it any longer. It took a lot of effort to hold it in. He couldn't hold it any longer. A half hour later Zayne attacks a boy right in front of him. He was so hungry that he was about to bite the boys head off when Ms. Maple came to the rescue by kicking Zayne in the face. The boy and the other students huddle in the corner of the room while Zayne had a hard time trying to bite his teacher. Ms. Maple was kicking and punching Zayne when one of the girls pulled off a chair leg from the nearest desk. She and three of her friends were able to push the leg through Zayne's back. Blood oozing out slowly like it was tormenting them. With one last kick, Ms. Maple had Zayne on his back which pushed the leg straight through his chest.
Three minutes later the bell rang and the class dashed out with their stuff in hand. Ms. Maple stayed behind to think of a way to get rid of the body when suddenly Zayne moved his fingers. Ms. Maple didn't notice the movement because she was turning around to watch the kids leave.
The teacher was about to turn around to look at the body of Zayne when he jumped on her back. Only a squeak came from her mouth because Zayne was eating her head. He ate the teacher till she was nothing but bare bones. Once he finished he just sat there catching his breath when he heard footsteps. He jumped out the window and walked as fast as he could to the forest. It took him ten minutes, no one seen him. He found a hiding spot under a big green bush, it took a few quick breathes before pulling the chair leg out of him. At least he didn't feel it.
Now that his thirst and hunger were under control he left twenty minutes later and wasn't seen or heard of again.
(Until Next Time)
The Foreign Exchange Student(Natasha Nordness-Laymon)
The Foreign Exchange Student
One fine sunny day in mid-September in an English class full of nineteen sophomore boys ans girls. In the classroom there were four rows of six desks. In this school there are only two classes a day. The English was the last class of the day. The teacher Ms. Maple had long black hair hanging loosely behind her shoulders. Ms. Maple was nice and fun but a tad bit strict. She has been working for eight years at the school.
There is a foreign exchange student who is sixteen and a sophomore. The student named Zayne was a boy with dirt brown hair and eyes. He used to live in Europe. Zayne wasn't your typical teenage boy. He is slow and easily out of breath. He started school that day. He didn't know his way around but somehow figured how to get to class and lunch. Zayne got to second period already out of breath from four hours of first period and walking to second.
When Zayne walked into class, everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at him. He wore black and brown with a dab of red on the side of his lip. Everyone was quiet even the teacher. Zayne ignored them and walked over to an empty desk in the back right corner of the room. When the bell rang, Ms. Maple asked Zayne to come up front and introduced himself. Zayne finally got up there five minutes later because he was so slow. With a lot of effort he introduced himself, everyone was quiet. Zayne gets through two hours of class when his thirst and hunger for blood and human flesh went into overdrive.
Zayne ignored most of it but couldn't do it any longer. It took a lot of effort to hold it in. He couldn't hold it any longer. A half hour later Zayne attacks a boy right in front of him. He was so hungry that he was about to bite the boys head off when Ms. Maple came to the rescue by kicking Zayne in the face. The boy and the other students huddle in the corner of the room while Zayne had a hard time trying to bite his teacher. Ms. Maple was kicking and punching Zayne when one of the girls pulled off a chair leg from the nearest desk. She and three of her friends were able to push the leg through Zayne's back. Blood oozing out slowly like it was tormenting them. With one last kick, Ms. Maple had Zayne on his back which pushed the leg straight through his chest.
Three minutes later the bell rang and the class dashed out with their stuff in hand. Ms. Maple stayed behind to think of a way to get rid of the body when suddenly Zayne moved his fingers. Ms. Maple didn't notice the movement because she was turning around to watch the kids leave.
The teacher was about to turn around to look at the body of Zayne when he jumped on her back. Only a squeak came from her mouth because Zayne was eating her head. He ate the teacher till she was nothing but bare bones. Once he finished he just sat there catching his breath when he heard footsteps. He jumped out the window and walked as fast as he could to the forest. It took him ten minutes, no one seen him. He found a hiding spot under a big green bush, it took a few quick breathes before pulling the chair leg out of him. At least he didn't feel it.
Now that his thirst and hunger were under control he left twenty minutes later and wasn't seen or heard of again.
(Until Next Time)
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